Hello! Welcome to my Wings of Fire/Warriors OC rater thing-a-ma-bob!

I'll try and get everyones OC done but no being mean if I don't. If you don't like my rating don't be mean. If you don't like an OC, DON'T. BE. MEAN.

So now that thats over with heres a bit about the book.

I rate OCs, meaning I review your OC(with permission) and tell you how you can improve them. Also, OC stands for Original Character.

I'll get the OCs done in chronological order of when they are submitted. Meaning whoever submitted first gets rated first.

Also I'm sorry if this gets backed up but I'm usually pretty on top of things.

Okay not really BUT I DUNNO YET BECAUSE I'VE NEVER DONE AN OC RATER BEFORE.

Continuing on, here's one way to know if you have a bad OC.

When they're something like this, don't even bother submitting.

Bad example:
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ThunderShadow
Warriors Mary-Sue
THIS IS A MARY-SUE ON PURPOSE ITS A JOKE

Name: ThunderShadow

Gender: Female

Age: 12 moons

Clan: ThunderShadow Clan; Previously Blood and Shadow

Species: Magical Cheetah

Sexuality: Bisexual

Residence: ThunderShadow Clan

Occupation: Leader

Family:
Mother; StarStar {Pure white cat with one blue and on amber eye} [Deceased]
Father; FireStar {a large, dark flame-colored tabby tom with a pale orange belly. He has short, sleek, and thick fur, large ears, a long tail, and bright, emerald-green eyes.} (Canon Character)
Siblings; None
Mate; Scourge {small black tom with one white paw, ice-blue eyes, glossy fur, and a torn left ear. He has a purple collar studded with teeth from dogs and cats, and claws reinforced with dogs' teeth.} (canon character)

Friends:
Literally EVERYONE IN THE WORLD. Except Bone.

Enemies:
Bone {is a huge, battle-scarred, black-and-white tom with green eyes, and a scar between them. He has long legs, broad shoulders, and a collar studded with teeth from dogs and claws from cats} (Canon Character)

Abilities: Flight; able to summon starclan cats and travel to starclan/dark forest as she pleases; can magically heal cats; can hear and see everything and anything; Is immortal(can't die from ANYTHING); invisibility; breathes fire and ice;

Appearance:
Pale pink cheetah, except she's only slightly larger than a house-cat; has black jeweled collar with tiger claws embedded in it; Strong dragon wings; python fangs

Personality: Kind and sweet to everyone; previously super evil

Strengths: She can fly and is a super strong fighter; has never before lost a battle

Weaknesses: None

Likes: Everyone but Bone

Dislikes: Bone

Backstory:

ThunderShadow was shunned because she was a half-clan cat with FireStar as her Father, and StarStar, Shadow Clan's leader, as her mother. She was also shunned because of her birth defects, like how she was a cheetah, had wings, and would spontaneously shoot fire out of her mouth.

She eventually ran away and met a cat named Scourge who gave her a jewel embedded collar. Then one day a tiger family escaped from the zoo. She killed all of them on her own and she put the tiger claws in her collar.

One day she figured out that Bone had a crush on Scourge and so she got mad and killed him.

Soon she and Scourge went back to Shadow Clan and ThunderShadow killed her mother and became Shadow Clan's leader. Then she killed FireStar and took over ThunderClan.

Scourge did the same with Wind and River clan and they lived happily as mates forever and ever. THE END.