Owner // AsiaFire

Prophecy // Beware the roar of the skies, because all will collide. When the small becomes big and the big becomes small, a rising star will show the way.

Reviewer // Sky ❄

| Creativity |

It is obvious that you put in quite some effort in making this prophecy. Your word choice is good, creating a suitable level of mystery - it isn't easy to figure out the meaning, but it's actually there.

| Writing |

The comparison between direct opposites (big and small) creates an appealing flow to the prophecy. Each word chosen has some sort of relation to another word, which makes the prophecy nice to read and analyse. There are no grammatical or spelling errors.

| Opinion |

It is interesting to see a conflict between a kit and an apprentice, although I find it strange that it's a kit leading the conflict. However, you did mention that the kit is deceased - so I'll assume that if the kit is alive, he would be older. I like how the prophecy would sound like if spoken - it would be quite epic if one visualises it. There isn't much I think you need to improve on, but if you want a more advanced prophecy, you can play with words until you're satisfied with it.