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Muskratpaw

Name- Muskratpaw

Physical description- A deep shady/black overcoat with a paler creamy tan muzzle/undercoat/underbelly. She has mysterious cold blue eyes, and is muscular, but has long, swift legs

 Age- 14 moons (mid apprenticeship)

 Gender- Shecat 

 Family- Mother: Dewfright,

 Father: Salmonslip  Rank- Healer/Medicine Cat apprentice 

 Clan- (Fanclan) Mooseclan

  Personality- interested and teasing, slightly irritable around kits and elders

  Backstory- Born and Raised in Mooseclan, simple kit/childhood, spending time with her favourite friend in her small group, Murkykit. 

 Crush- Hotshade (A Tom a little older than she, who is "dating" another she-warrior

  Thanks so much, and I hope you like my OC! If you're interested in warrior/survivors fanfictions, maybe check out my page thingy. I'm a bit new to Wattpad, but I'll be adding some more! -Snow.   

I'll definitely check them  out!



Good:

Good,  Average OC,  super complicated, but that's what makes her character good. I know this isn't always the case, but I feel like there are a few too many Phrophesied or super confusingly complicated backstory cats(something I need to work on myself.) I'm not trying to offend anyone with that comment though, as I have problems with over complicating Ocs too.. Anyways, I Like this Oc! Muscat is also an underused Prefix, so I really like that!


Bad:

I'm slightly confused with Her Parents? I'm Assuming since Salmonslip is a Medicine cat, he broke the warrior code and had kits? I would like to see a little bit more detailed backstory though.


Overall: 9/10



A/N: so sorry it's taking so long to update, I'll get at many as I can done tonight and tomorrow!! I've been really busy and absent fwattpad :/

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