Belongs to:  @10_Starfish_Angel_7

A/N: hey guys!!!! Im really sorry for my inactivity, but I'll try to do bettert about updating this!!!!!!! So sorry!!

Name: DewfurPhysical description: A thick-furred white cat with grey stripes along her back, a grey stripe running down her tail, grey muzzle and paws. She has a purple collar and forest green eyes Pretty

!Age: 26 

moonsGender: She-cat

Family: Mother unknown. Father is unknown. Has 1 brother named Soot.

Rank: Warrior.

Clan: RiverClan

Personality: Kind, but can be snarky. She is hot-headed and proud. If anyone says anything bad about her she will freak. She likes kits and wants them, but she is infertile, so she can't.

Backstory: Former kittypet. Abused by her twolegs so she ran away. 

Aww, that's sad :( poor Dewfur

Mate: Ashenstorm.

Good:

She has a good personality, which is what a lot of people creating OCs struggle with(me included) , and I like her description!

Bad:

She needs more detail on her backstory!!! Some ways you can improve are to add more details on her backstory like her life as a kitty pet! How did she find river clan?  Things like that!

Overall: 5/10