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Lionstripe(3)

Lionstripe is a very complex character. He has changed a multitude of times over the last six years that I had created him.

His first name was going to be Liontail before I dropped it in favor of Lionstripe

I had made his character as I was reading Omen of the Stars and he was a massive Gary Stu XD

He had all the powers of the three and his own, but after 2016 ended, I scrapped that side of the character in favor of his own power, speed

For a very long time, he was a golden tabby tom with green eyes. And just that.

Soon I added a white underbelly, paws, chest, and tail tip by the time 2018 had came around. That would be his description up until September 29th. The day I made A Prophecy of Four. I changed the ENTIRE original story and other stories, in favor of the one on A Prophecy of Four.

His new description was a gingerish-golden tabby tom with a white underbelly, paws, chest, and tail tip, alongside light green eyes.

That would be the description for only a few months as in January of this year, his description changed one last time.

He is now currently, and for a long time, will be a dark ginger tabby tom with a white underbelly and paws, alongside lime green eyes

And let's not forget story.

I'm going to spare you the pain and not tell you about the first part of the original story. After awhile, he gets an apprentice named Silentstorm who had a mate called Hawkeye. His brother was Tornadopaw and his best friends were Hawkeye, Applepelt, and Berrythorn.

Tornadopaw dies, angering Silentstorm. At this time, Lionstripe is the leader of ThunderClan. Soon Lionstripe is killed and the new leader is a cat named Redclaw. Silentstorm's apprentice, Redspots, learns that Redclaw was the one that killed Lionstripe and tried to stop the now Redstar. Redspots falls in love with a white RiverClan she-cat of the name, Frostpelt. Frostpelt helps Redspots stop Redstar and Silentstorm becomes leader.

Frostpelt joins ThunderClan to be with Redspots and they have kits. Don't remember the names though.

Before Lion"star" had died, he had just with........Heathertail.......Windclan before all of these events, had been attacked and needed ThunderClan's help. Note that this took place during when OotS and DotC were the newest stories so a lot of things don't add up to the current series.

That was reason to change every bit of story line.

But before I did that, one of Lionstripe's daughters becomes leader and is the last ThunderClan leader before all the clans are dissolved after a rogue attack occurs. Lionstripe's sons and other daughter, Lionclaw, Mousepelt, and Hollypool decide to find a bunch of cats of clan blood and a few loners and rogues to help them retake the forest. They are successful and have their home again.

This is also before SkyClan returns, so no SkyClan.

There was also a new story where all five clans and the Tribe of Rushing Water and their rival lives at the lake.

The ToRW, SkyClan, ThunderClan, and WindClan made one opposition and ShadowClan, RiverClan, and the Rushing Water's rival made another.

Ultimately due to numbers advantage, the former would win and ShadowClan and RiverClan were the ones to lose the most land as the ToRW's rival had abandoned their land and returned to mountain life.

Once that was over with I made a new story where Lionstripe's at-the-time mate, Heathertail, had died moons prior and that it had taken place in a timeline when Lionstripe wasn't killed by Redclaw and that Redclaw chose to wait.

Lionstripe had a new mate named Dapplefur, a former loner named Dapple who joined the clans before Heathertail's death and was an old friend of Lionstripe's from before he himself joined the clans. He also had a different power. He no longer had speed, he had the ability to become a shadow and self-transport himself through a different location, but could only go to a place he had memorized. He could also appear I to the air if he had the location memorized and he could drop an enemy from the air, though he never did that unless it was a cat that was trying to kill the clans

Ofc, as you know, I discarded that story. And that story was discarded for the current story.

Imo, it is so much better than the other stories I had made. APoF has allowed me to get a true visual on where I want to take my characters and Lionstripe is the best character he could possibly be

*Author's 2021 Note*
That is no longer true. As of a few days ago, A Prophecy of Four will no longer be canon to the Chronicles of the Prophecies series. Lionstripe will be undergoing another major storyline change. You'll see soon. Anyways, Lionstripe will no longer have the ability to traverse shadows anymore. Hence why Lionstar's Mistake will also loose its canonicity to my series.

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