Before you say anything let me say in my defence:

Glory is sarcastic and strong (A bodyguard, camouflage scales and don't forget the magical death spit)

Firestar can be sarcastic and he is strong. I mean, have you literately SEEN him facing Scourge? And how he was once a kitttypet but easily beat Graypaw in the forest?

Anyways, I think it's pretty good.

8/10