Name: Shard
Clan: Shard was formerly part of a rogue group called The Shadow Stalkers and now she is the leader of a Rogue Group called The Exiles which is meant for cats who have left their homes or were exiled from them
Rank: The Exiles rogue group Leader, formerly a Shadow Stalkers rookie
Gender: She-cat (Sorry, I know there are many She-cat ocs)
It's okay, I don't mind!
Sexuality: Asexual
Nice. You usually don't see a ton of asexual ocs.
Age: 118 Moons at Death
Appearance: A short white, light grey striped she-cat with ice blue eyes. She has scars on her shoulders, back and flank as well as part of her tail missing.
Personality: Shard is a rough she-cat who has a sharp tongue and pushes herself. Shard is slightly reckless at times. Despite her rough and hostile attitude as well as her pride she will push that away and leap to help any cat who needs it.
Good, even personality.
Injuries/Scars: Part of her tail was torn off by a dog when she was a rookie of The Shadow Stalkers. She earned quite a few scars on her shoulders, back and flanks from training in The Shadow Stalkers and normal fights with other cats.
Mentors/Apprentices: She didn't have an official mentor in The Shadow Stalkers but a large brown tabby tom with amber eyes named Burr would train with her at night. Shard never had an apprentice but a friend named Ace who she trained to be a skilled fighter like herself.
Kin: Lunar (A completely black furred she-cat with dark blue eyes and torn ears, Shard's mother) Jasper (A white tom who is a Kittypet with amber eyes, Shard's Father although she and her brother doesn't know) Fleck (A chubby black and white tom with amber eyes and a twisted fore paw)
Where did she get her stripes from?
Mates/Kits/Crushes: None (Since Shard is asexual)
Backstory: Shard and her brother Fleck were born into The Shadow Stalkers. Their mother Lunar neglected them since The Shadow Stalkers were a cruel group and didn't believe in love. Shard and Fleck never knew their father and always thought he died or left the group. When the two kits were strong enough they were brutally trained by random cats in the group and put through tough challenges to prove they were strong enough. A she-cat named Emerald warned Shard about the group on the night of her escape, but Shard didn't believe her. The day after there were reports of three cats who had disappeared: Emerald, Ruby and Flicker. One day Shard and Fleck were set with a task to defeat a dog that lived near the city group's alley. Unfortunately they weren't experienced enough. They tried to flee but the dog caught Shard and tore off part of her tail. Fleck leapt at the dog and distracted it allowing Shard to limp away but Fleck was slain. Shard suffered from guilt and depression after her brother's death until a large tabby tom named Burr got her to train with him every night until she was one of the best fighters. One night during their training Burr asked Shard if she wanted to be his mate. Shard was never interested in mates or kits and declined. Burr furious attacked her, but Shard accidently killed him while fighting for her own life. Realizing she could not longer live in The Shadow Stalkers she turned and fled into the night. When she reached a forest she refused to stay at that area and continued to walk. Shard travelled day and night only stopping to rest, eat and drink until she bumped into a black and reddish brown tom named Ace. Ace tells Shard that he has been alone for as long as he could remember and that he was no threat. The two became friends quickly and travelled to a forest with a clearing perfect for a camp. They started a group called The Exiles and Shard made herself leader. She made Ace second in command despite there being no other cats. Soon three cats from Shard's former group The Shadow Stalkers came. Shard was shocked to see it was Emerald, Ruby and Flicker the three cats who had left the group a few moons ago. Shard happily invited them into her group as high ranking members. As moons passed the group grew larger. On the night of a new moon with no light The Shadow Stalkers attacked the group. Both groups battled viciously and the night was torn with blood and screeches. Shard killed her mother in rage not letting her escape. As her mother laid dying at her paws Shard heard a screech of panic and the mewls of kits. She saw a massive black tom with amber eyes was looming over a queen and kits so she attacked him before he could kill the queen and her kits. She was fatally wounded and died in the middle of the battle. Luckily Ace managed to lead The Exiles to victory and Shard had a proper vigil.
Interesting. I quite like this backstory, and thank you for all the detail!
Death: Shard was slain saving a queen and kits from an attacker from The Shadow Stalkers
Theme Song: Wolf In Sheep's Clothing by Set It Off and Last One Standing by Simple Plan
Reason For Name: Her mother thought Shard would be a skilled fighter with sharp claws in the future.
Nicknames: None
Previous Names: None
Best Friends: Ace (Black tom with a reddish brown chest, belly, legs and black paws with most of his tail missing as well as scarred shoulders) Emerald (Small grey tabby she-cat with emerald green eyes)
Other Facts:
1)Shard had told Ace about her not being interested in mates so he wouldn't ask her to be his mate and have his heart broken when she said no. 2)Even though not knowing Emerald that much when they got to know each other they instantly became good friends. 3)Shard wasn't really close with anyone in the group, the only cats she was close with was her two best friends Ace and Emerald

Personality: 9/10. I like how you balanced positives and negatives to make a more dynamic character.
Backstory: 9/10. Her backstory is very good, I quite like it. My only issue with it is that I'm not sure how it fits into the warriors universe. Maybe I'm mistaken, but I didn't see any mention of the clans or anything. (Unless the Shadow Stalkers is an Oc clan) Maybe some of the members of The Exiles were former clan cats? I could be very wrong here, so please correct me if I am.
Originality: 8/10. This story is mostly original, but I have seen the "evil rogue group" concept before. However, I still like this story.