Name- Roseleaf

Gender- She-cat

Age- 48 moons at death

Clan- ShatteredClan

Appearence- Roseleaf is a dark gray she-cat. Her fur is thick and fluffy, her tail is very fluffy. Her tail has a pink-red tinge to it. Her eyes are green.
I don't think the colour combinations here are possible, but I could be wrong.
Personality- Roseleaf is shy and caring, never speaks out much. She doesn't like fighting, and will do anything she can to stop fighting. However, she is not afraid to tell her opinion when needed and drives to be the best warrior she could be. She got her caring attitude from her mother, the medicine cat. Her father gave her the go-getter attitude, as he was deputy of the Clan.
More flaws would improve this character.
Rank- Warrior, but is a part-time medicine cat
Okay.
Family-
Mother: Brokenpool- pure gray persian, lovely green eyes. Has a couple scars from fights and a torn ear

Father: Redleap- Handsome pink-red tom with green eyes. Has several more scars and both ears are torn.

Adopted sister: Dapplednose- lovely white she-cat with a spray of brown dots on her nose, blue eyes

Backstory: Rosekit had a pretty hard life as a kit, being the medicine cat's only daughter. Her mother was, surpringly, not kicked out of the Clan, but most cats thought she should be. Several of the warriors didn't think Rosekit could be a true part of their Clan, although she was 100% ShatteredClan. None of the kits would play with her, but then one of the queens died. Her parents took in Dapplekit, who grew to love Rosekit. The two she-kit did everything together, they hunted, played, and fought together. They grew up to be wonderful warriors, and still loved each other. But then Roseleaf found out her adopted sister loved her more than just siblings, so she shunned her away. She was afraid of ruining her relationship with her sister. Roseleaf became pregnant with kits, the father was a rogue named Fox. None of the toms wanted to be the adopted father, so she grew hopeless. But then, Dapplednose offered to help her care for them.
Did she ever tell Fox about the kits? What happened to him?
Friends are her parents, adopted sister, and Silvernose
Reason for name- Her tail was the color of a rose, and she wanted to be a medicine cat and took the suffix "leaf"

Sexualiry- Lesbian
If she's lesbian, why did she have kits with Fox?
Other- As an apprentice, she helped the medicine cat and now works part time as a medicine cat
Cause of death: blood loss while giving birth

Personality: 7/10. This character lacks flaws that would help develop them into a more realistic character. However, I like how she got traits from her parents.
Backstory: 8/10. The backstory is pretty good, but has some holes. If she was lesbian, why did she have kits?
Originality: 8/10. I've seen a few of these elements before, especially the "medicine cat's child" aspect. However, it is still fairly original.
Overall: 8/10. Good job!