I have some apologies to give out. I'm so sorry to everyone who waited so patiently to have their characters judged. I couldn't get them out sooner because Wattpad stopped letting me copy and paste comments. I tried to fix it, but it won't work anymore. I'm very sorry. I am still going to judge the three remaining people's characters below, but without the normal system. I'm afraid I can only give your scores. This bug also means that I can no longer continue this book. I'm so sorry, everyone. I hope you understand.

Jessiethewing- Palegaze
Personality: 9/10. He is a very dynamic character and his traits mix well for the most part.
Backstory: 8/10. I like his backstory, but you said that Alderheart was his mentor, and kin can't mentor kin. However, this is an Oc clan, so it could be different.
Originality: 9/10. Quite original, aside from a few little things like getting wounds as an apprentice and becoming a medicine cat. However, you have your own take on it.
Overall: 9/10. You did very well with this character!

Crazycatgrl- Karl
Personality: 9/10. I really like how you based his personality off of his backstory. This makes him much more realistic.
Backstory: 9/10. A little dark, but who am I to judge? The one suggestion I have is adding more interaction between Karl and Ringedpaw before they fall in love, sort of to make it more realistic.
Originality: 9/10. Very original. I like this concept, but I've seen smaller parts of it before. (The child who murders their parent angle) however, you have original motivations to it. Great job!
Overall: 9/10. I like this character!

Crazylilly733- Taintedstar
Personality: 8/10. Again, her personality being formed by her experiences is something I really enjoy. However, I think she should maintain some of her old personality when she joins Skyclan.
Backstory: 9/10. I don't have a lot to say for the backstory. It's very solid and seems well-planned. My only criticism is that Taintedstar feels little remorse after possibly killing her father. Although she hated him, she isn't crazy, and a sane person would still feel something.
Originality: 9/10. VERY good. I really like the elected leader concept. My only note for this is that I have seen the "child gets angry after parent takes on new mate" thing. However, it's not a big deal.
Overall: 9/10. Good job!