Echostep (for Randomkitty91)
Name: Echostep (star)
Nice name.
Gender: She-cat
Age: when death, 97 moons
Clan: FogClan (lives in a boggy forest with tall trees that are covered by fog)
Neat.
Appearance: Blue-gray, blue eyes, slightly torn ear, medium whiskers
Personality: Defensive, skilled at fighting, hates fighting, bad aim, overprotective, gentle, merciful
A few more flaws would help this character.
Rank: Highest rank is leader
Family: Mother, Shadowjump; Father, Appletuft; Brother, Thistlestrike: Sister, Songbird (star); Mate, Mallowleaf; Kits, Mapleheart, Oakpool, Pebbleblaze, Dewfall (one litter)
Awesome! I really like the name Dewfall.
Backstory: Not really, just born into the clan. Receives a prophecy and has to find out who the cat is. Sorry not long.
Reason for name: When she was a kit, she copied her littermates so her mother named her Echokit.
Interesting.
Sexuality: Straight
Personality: 7/10. I think more flaws would help develop this character and make her more believable.
Backstory: I'm not sure how to rate this. There isn't a lot of information on the backstory that's provided.
Originality: 8/10. from what I've seen, this character is fairly original.
Overall: 7/10. I'm sorry, but I don't know enough about this oc to give it a definitive rating. However, this oc seems quite good so far. I would recommend adding more flaws to her personality and developing her backstory further. Thank you for submitting your character!
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