Name: Birchpaw
Gender: tom
Age: 13 moons ( at death)
Clan: PebbleClan
Nice.
Appearance: long-furred white tom with thin black stripes on his back, tail, legs, and cheeks. He has tiny tufts of fur on his ears and green eyes.
Personality: birchpaw is very anxious and is not good at social interaction. He wishes he was though. Birchpaw can get a bit annoying to his friends and family though, but is very caring, and wishes to become a medicine cat.
Aaah he sounds adorable!
Rank: StarClan apprentice
Family
Mother: Sleekfeather: white tabby
Father: Ramhoof: brown tabby
Sister: Harestep: brown tabby
You come up with very creative names, I don't think I've ever seen the name Ramhoof before.
Backstory
As a kit, Birchkit really had no story to tell, everything got crazy. It all started when Harepaw and the patrol ended up fighting dogs with rabies. Birchpaws sister got sick, and so did most of the clan. But a weird thing happened. All the cats who have died, came back to life and were very hostile. ( not zombies because they had brains and were smart) Birchpaws life ended when his sister killed him and sent him to StarClan.
Interesting. Just wondering, did the cats actually come back to life or did everyone just think they were dead, and they turned hostile due to the rabies? Nice way to work actual diseases into the story though.
Friends
Lynxpaw
Liontail
Reason for name: he looked like a birch tree
Sexuality: gay
Personality: 9/10. I like how you balanced good and bad traits, and made them work together in a dynamic way.
Backstory: 8/10. I quite like this character's backstory. It is interesting and seems to be quite thought out. However, I still have some questions about the "coming back to life" part.
Originality: 9/10. I've never seen rabies worked into a story like this. Good job!
Overall: 9/10. I enjoyed reading about your character. He's very interesting and original, good job!