Thank you XxBriar_TanglexX for submitting this OC!

Name ; Wrenpaw

Reasoning ;

Wren ; She has silky fur like a wren's feathers.

Chirp ; She's not talkative, so the opposite of -chirp.

Past Names ; Flip, Wrenkit

Future names ; Wrenchirp

5/5! The name is SO cute! I truly love it! The reasoning is rather interesting. The future name too!

Gender ; Female

Age ; 17 Moons

Rank ; Catcher Apprentice

Ooh! Cool!

Sexuality ; Straight

Clan ; Lion's Roar :(Formerly a Scarlet Blood member)

?/5. I can't give it a proper rating. Can you give me a run-through of this clan please?

Realistic ; dash it all ;)

Nice! OK!

Appearance ; Wrenpaw is a dark brown cat with a reddish roan underbelly, a matching point mask and tail tip. She has deep moss green eyes.

7/10. I do like the sound of this. Just to double check, are they a tabby? I never heard the red around those places, nor seen anything like that. It's probably possible but I've just never seen.  Not very descriptive either, I'm really wondering the fur length and body build!

Family ;

Mother: Kali - identical to Wrenpaw. (Dead)

Father: Anaconda - slim black tom with wiry, thin black fur, and ice blue eyes. (Dead)

6/10. A she-cat normally is a mix of both their parents, but I only see her mother in Wrenpaw! Also, for a cat to have blue eyes they either need to have white on their face or 50% white.

Backstory ;

As a kit, Flip was always alone. Tutu and Pearl - the other older kits from an older litter - scorned her. Flip stayed aside while Pearl became a Warrior Apprentice, and Tutu a Defender Apprentice.

Flip preferred racing through the woods with the clear air in her lungs than throwing herself into the thick of battle. This made her stand out from the cats of Scarlet Blood.

Interesting! Different types of apprentices are really cool actually! The having her stand out is a bit cliche, but major. Why did the other kits scorn? Also, why different apprentices? Personally, I would have made her liking 

When Flip reached the age of four moons, she was apprenticed to Kali, the only Catcher in the whole Group. Kali - her mother - taught her to climb trees to catch birds and squirrels. Flip became good at catching wrens, so Kali began to nickname her Wren.

So parents can teach their kits? I mean, it makes sense though since she is the only catcher in the clan. 

Then, in an icy day of leaf-bare, Flip padded out of the Apprentice Den to see her mother being surrounded. Kali had only brought back a scrawny vole, and was punished. The punishment in Scarlet Blood was always death.

After that, Flip ran away, taking on the name Wren to disguise herself. A Lion's Roar found her and took her in. She became Wrenpaw and began to train to be a Catcher.

37/50. It's short, which is fine trust me. I am confused at a few parts. Is Scarlet Blood like Bloodclan? What happened to her father? Why Wren?

All together, Wrenpaw is a interesting OC that needs some tweaks. Also a personality is needed!