Sorry this took so long! I was being my lazy self and didn't open my computer for a few days... :3

Also, please excuse any typos I make. :)

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Name: Ravenpaw
Raven is overused, but tbh I still like the name.

Age: 10 moons at death.
NOOOO HE DIES. SO SAD(it's good that your oc does die before they become a warrior, though. A lot of ocs die when they're a warrior or an elder.

Rank: Apprentice
Of course.

Clan: Former Waterclan cat. Is now in Starclan.
Maybe try being a little more creative with the Clan name? Instead of WaterClan it could be something like RippleClan, ShallowClan, or StreamClan.

Appearance: A small black tom with dark brown eyes.
Cats with raven-prefixes are usually black... I do like the brown eyes though.

Personality: He was quiet the cheerful type of fellow. Even in the mist of disaster, he still looked on the bright side of life and tried to stay positive. He was also very gullible, and would trust anyone who he found to be friendly.  He was also sometimes slow on things. For example, he'd have to think for a moment before answering a question. But other then that, he was a happy and well behaved cat. Not many others disliked him sense he was well behaved, and was always very friendly. So, in conclusion. Ravenpaw was a cheerful, friendly, and positive cat.
This sounds like a good personality. Nothing wrong here!

Kin: Nightpaw (Sister, Alive), Spottedpaw (Sister, Alive) Whiteflower (Mother, Deceased), Halfface (Father, Alive)
Nice names.

M/C/K: He was too young for a mate, had a crush on a she-cat named Littlepaw, and was too young for kits.
YES! THANK YOU FOR NOT MAKING HIM HAVE A MATE THIS YOUNG! Btw Littlepaw is a super cute name!

Backstory: When Russetpaw Do you mean Ravenpaw? I'm assuming it's a typo was just a kit, his mother had always told him about Starclan. He was so amazed by all the things his mother had told him about Starclan, he'd ask her to tell him about Starclan every day. Awww, cute! But one day, about 2 moons after he became an apprentice, his mother got Greencough and passed away. Noooooo so sad. Ravenpaw was extremely sad about it, since he had a strong relationship with his mother. He found it hard to move on from, but eventually did. When he turned 10 moons old, a badger had attacked the camp and killed him.I like how he died. It's very interesting and unusual!

I give this oc.... 9/10! Overall Ravenpaw was really a good oc, and the only recommendation I have is to spice up the Clan name! Good job!