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Name: Foxgaze

Cool name!
Age: 16 Moons

That's pretty young!
Rank: Warrior

Nice
Clan: IceClan

Yay, another IceClan!
Appearance: Ginger tabby cat, green eyes and a darker tail. He also has a torn ear.

Cool appearence, I see why his prefix is "Fox"!
Personality: He is a smol gay bean. He is shy and awkward, and just a funny cat. He hates talking but is fun to be around.

Good personality, but maybe add a little more? (I love the term "smol gay bean")
Kin: I haven't flipping made them yet rip

I understand the struggle...
M/C/K: Wolfcry(Mate, Alive), No kits

Wolfcry... I haven't heard "Cry" as a suffix before! Good job!
Backstory: His mate, Wolfcry, was a former kittypet. Foxgaze often went there to meet him. His kittypet name was Wolf and he had a small, blue, collar. Foxgaze then invited him to join IceClan. But he refused. Then he said he would think about it.
The next day he accepted the offer.
When he joined, and a few moons later, Foxgaze asked him to be his mate. He accepted and they lived happily ever after. (Not really LOL)

What a cute love story! WAIT WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY "Not really LOL" DID SOMETHING HAPPEN
I SWEAR TO STARCLAN IF ONE OF THEM DIED I WILL DIE OF SADNESS.

You should probably add a little more description to the backstory.

Overall, I give this oc a 9/10. He's pretty well developed, and you just need to add a few more additions to the backstory to make it perfect! (PS I love gay warrior cat couples :3)