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Flintmouse

Name: I've never seen mouse used as a suffix before; it's certainly unique!

Reasoning: nothing to say here; it all checks out!

Gender: nothing to say here

Age: nothing to say here

Rank: nothing to say here

Clan: nothing to say here

Looks: good on the detail! Comparing her colors to things such as toffee and ferns makes it easier to envision her!

Personality: Her personality is good; a quiet and kinda awkward girl who is also observant. Though I do think she could use something more. It seems as though she's made up of mostly netrual traits,and I think she could definitely benefit from a couple more being added to her that are a mix of positive and negative

Strengths: Makes sense! She is nearing the age of what would be a considered warrior,so naturally she'd be well trusted. And long legs are a trait of windclan. Though consider adding another,more personal strength that sets her apart from others. It'd help make her more unique

Weaknesses: I did a bit of research because I wasn't sure,but fur colors or grays and browns are actually common in windclan; so even if it's a darker shade if gray, Flintmouse probably wouldn't have trouble hunting. She also has longs legs and windclan cats tend to chase down their prey if needed; and since you mentioned she's fast, it might be better to give her a different weakness.

Others opinion on them: nothing to say here

Kin: Good on you! Alot of people tend to just drop a name and keep it going,but the detail is very helpful for understanding her character better!

Friends: Nothing to say here

Enemies: Once again good! Though I noticed that one of the cats -Pigeonclaw- wasn't mentioned anywhere else apart from here. I was also curious as to whether or not he's apart of Windclan, or a different one.

Mentor: Dawnlark must be pretty old if he's trained alot of apprentices; aswell as the fact that Flintmouse is nearing the age of a senior warrior. I am curious and would've liked to see some detail on their dynamic; how they worked together, how they felt about eachother and such.

Apprentice: nothing to say here

Crush/Mate: nothing to say here

Kits: nothing to say here

Backstory: As far as backstories go,this one is pretty tame in comparison. Nothing super crazy happens, so I don't really have much to say!

+ I N C ON C L U S I O N +

Flintmouse is a really good oc with nothing major that stands out about her. Aside from adding more onto her personality aswell as giving her some weaknesses; I'd say that she's a fairly solid oc! Thanks for submitting her!

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