Username: Bluestar_Starclan

Name: Rabbitpaw (still trying to figure out a good warrior name for him)

Cute, and thats fine (+5)

Name reason: Rabbit because his fur is similar to a rabbit's.

Okay(+9)

Gender: Male(edit: trans female)

Oooo trans kitty

Pronouns: He/it (heavy pref for he/him)(edit: she/it)

Neopronouns!!! Love the inclusion

Sexuality: Bisexual Biromantic (pref for she-cats)(edit: pansexual, panromantic)

Gotcha

Age: 6 moons

She's young

Appearance: Rabbitpaw is an average-sized, short-furred white tom with dark brown spots on his right thigh, forehead, and most of his tail is dark brown except the base and tip. He has azure blue eyes and has cheek fluff along with a small tuft of fur on his head. He has a light pink nose along with soft pink paw pads.

Cool, (+5)

Personality: Rabbitpaw is a pretty funny and friendly cat, but sometimes he can be pretty distant towards cats he doesn't like or cats he doesn't trust. He is very outgoing with his friends, but very shy when meeting new cats, making him an ambivert.

Okay, (+10),

Clan: WindClan

One of the underrated clans, nice(+5)

Kin: Brackenblaze (Father) - A tall medium furred white Tom with dark brown splotches on his left front leg, left ear, back right leg, and his tail is dark brown except for the base and tip. He has azure blue eyes and a black nose along with black paw pads.

Okay, don't really know how I feel about the name Brackenblaze, it feels odd to me

Dawnpaw (Sister) - An average-sized fluffy diluted calico she-cat with pastel green eyes. She has a black nose and black paw pads.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think pastel eyes are possible

Featherwind (Half-Aunt) - An average sized brown tortoiseshell she-cat with half lidded amber eyes and fluffy ears. She has a black nose and black paw pads.

Okay (+3)

Friends: None as of now

Adding another to my list of things me and Rabbitpaw have in common(+4)

Likes: Rain, rabbits, hanging around warriors, dawn patrols, hunting, his sister

Okay, (+5)

Dislikes: His father, fighting, mud, herbs, flowers, forests

Alright, (+5)

Strengths: Hunting, stalking, running

Weaknesses: He isn't good with kits and isn't good at fighting for his Clan.

Seems like a good balance, not being food at fighting, but good at hunting. (+10 cause I added 5 for both)

Backstory: Rabbitkit was born in WindClan alongside Dawnkit to an unknown mother and Brackenblaze. His mother ran away at a very young age, and so Brackenblaze was forced to care for them, with the help of his half sister, Featherwind.

Once Rabbitkit and Dawnkit became apprentices, life became more challenging for him. It was experiencing a form of anxiety, soon getting diagnosed with mild anxiety. Rabbitpaw wasn't very pleased with this, but with the help of his sister, he will soon overcome it.

It's short, I do have a few questions about it

You say she(the mom) ran away at a young age, so she had her kits when she was young? Or did she run off soon after having them?

Also did no one in camp know she was expecting kits? Or are they just not telling Rabbitpaw and Dawnpaw

Where there any queens in the nursery when they were kits? Cats can't eat solid food until 3-4 weeks

Was Featherwind a queen during this time?

(+6)

This is an OC that is partly owned by me, and partly owned by Moonkitti. So there isn't much to him, which is why I would like nice criticism so I can add on to him.

Ok

Final score: 68/75

Few notes:

You never explained why he dislikes his father, so explaining things like that would be helpful

The notes I left on the backstory, would make it easier to understand(it wasn't difficult to understand but it left a lot of questions)

Thanks for submitting her, again sorry it took so long