Cats name: Dewpaw (claw)

Cute, I love the prefix dew(+5)

Name reasoning: Dew- because she is white and gray, and it reminded her parents of dew in the morning. Claw- cuz of her personality, which you'll see later.

Makes sense(+5)

Gender: Demigirl

Oooo

Pronouns: She/they

Awesome!!

Sexuality: Bi

Yay!!

Appearance: Large, broad-shouldered, fluffy white cat with light gray patches, a long muzzle, thick whiskers and a long tail. She has blazing amber eyes.

She sounds pretty(+5)

Personality: A snappy and short-tempered cat who doesn't hesitate to point out your flaws or tease you. She is kinda apathetic towards others, but is well-meaning, although sometimes she can be seen as cold or a bully. Prideful, confident, brutally honest, and an eager learner. She can be quite nice once you get to know her, but most cats wouldn't want to get on her bad side.

She's a very well balanced cat! Good job!! (+10)

Clan: ThunderClan

No Comment(+5)

Kin:

Mother: Windfern- a white she-cat with darker patches and kind honey-amber eyes.

Father: Bramblepath- a light gray tom with darker tabby patches and yellow eyes.

Brother: Pigeonwing- a white and gray striped tom with dark yellow eyes

No comment (+4)

Friends: Pigeonwing, Frostspark and Cloverglow (basically the cool kids group that everyone wants to be friends with)

Okay(+4)

Likes: her friend group, battle training, gatherings, mossball, games, clouds

Intresting, makes sense(+5)

Dislikes: Cats who dont want to be friends with her group, hunting, water, her paws getting wet, cats treating her like shes a kit

That all makes sense(+5)

Strengths: Fighting, running long distances, finding other cats' flaws

Alright(+5)

Weaknesses: Gets angry easily, never gives up on anything, hunting, can't swim on her life, keeping silent

Okay(+5)

Backstory: Nothing much really, Dewclaw is just a normal warrior :3

I wish you would've given me more to go off of(+4)

Final score is 62 points. Good job. She's a very interesting cat, and I can tell you put a lot of effort into them. Expand a bit on the backstory, everyone has some sort of past, even if it's not all that interesting. But other than that, I really like her.