Name: Bluejaycatcher

That's a cute name. I haven't seen catcher used in a suffix. It is a bit long though(+5)

Name reason: She always had an interest in Blue Jays, and often caught them for their beautiful feathers.

I'm guessing they waited a while to name her. Most kits are names at birth(+4)

Gender: Female

Pronouns: She/Her

Sexuality: Bi + Demi

Demisexual? Or Demiromantic(not important I'm just curious cause I'm Demisexual)

Appearance: Slim, silky black furred she-cat with a shaggy tail, a small yet long legged build and dark gray paws.

Her paw pads are white, and she has light green eyes that sparkle in the sunlight.

She has a scar that goes from her mid-chest down to her right front leg and a small nick in her right ear. She usually has a bluejay feather tucked in the fur behind her left ear and one stuck in her neck fluff.

Thats cute, and well detailed. (+5)

Personality: She is usually quiet, thoughtful and observant, preferring to be alone, but also has a rather 'bubbly' side that she shows when talking about Blue Jays or other interests.

She can be slightly forgetful, and has a bad habit of not getting things done.

She's interesting. I like the idea that she can get excited when talking about her interests. (+8)

Clan: ThunderClan

Okay (+5)

Kin: Finchkit(Pale golden she-Kit, died)

Shadenose(black she-cat with green eyes, died) father Unknown

Shadenose is a cute name. Poor Finchkit though. (+5)

Friends: Beewhisper(Black and gold tom-cat who was her best friend since birth.He shares her interest in nature and she has a small crush on him)

Silversnap(Silver tabby with deep blue eyes.She is a good friend of Bluejaycatcher)

Thats cool(+5)

Likes: Blue Jays, birds, nature, friends, feathers, long walks, sunny days.

Makes sense(+5)

Dislikes: Rainy days, fog, death, hard work.

Okay, I like that you added hard work(+5)

Strengths: She is good with young cats and can remain pretty calm during a crisis.

Thats nice, pretty basic for she-cats but it's cool (+4)

Weaknesses: She's forgetful when she doesn't really care about something , and she isn't very trustworthy due to her lack of attention for things she doesn't want to do.

Interesting(+5)

Backstory:

At birth, Bluejaykit, Beekit and Finchkit were extremely close. They did everything together. Beekit was always a bit more distant, but only because he wasn't her littermate. At three moons old, a group of badgers attacked the camp, with two breaking into the nursery.

Bluejaykit and Beekit managed to slip into a hole in the wall, but Finchkit wasn't so lucky. She got killed and dragged off by the badgers.

That left Bluejaykit sad, and she was only distracted by her love for Blue Jays.

She later on becomes mates with Beewhisper

She also was good friends with Silverpaw when they were apprentices and warriors.

Poor Finchkit, You should've added a note about Silverpaw in the friends. I'm glad she became mates with Beewhisper(+8)

Okay is good, I only have a few criticisms.

Add a little more to the personality, maybe one or two more negative traits to balance her out

Expand on the backstory(did her being sad about finchkit affect Beekit? How did she and Silverpaw become friends? Why did they stop?)

But really that's it

Her final rating is: 64 points