Name: Silent'kit, Silent'paw, Silent'owl, Silent'star

I am actually in love with names that start with Silent- I myself have Silentsight, Silentmask, and Silentstep.

Reasoning: He was named Silent'kit because he hardly spoke a word when he was a kit. The owl part of his name came from his pelt color and marking on his shoulders looking like wings.

Lovely reasoning

Age: 69 moons at time of death

Heh. Nice

Gender: male

I've actually gotten a pretty even amount of males and females

Personality: Silent'Owl had always been distant from his clanmates due to his upbringing. He had always been a smart young cat, learning how to twist words and situations to his advantage. He would do anything to prove to his clanmates that he was loyal and deserved to be trusted with power. He never really loved any cat in his life, except for maybe his mother(more on that in his backstory)

Interesting... So he didn't actually love his mate?

Appearance: a dark red-ish brown Tom with cream underbelly and main. He has dark brown wing-like markings around his eyes and on his shoulders. He is quite skinny but has a lot of fluff. He has a main going down his back and off the tip of his tail. He also has fluff bunched up around his shoulders. He has a quite slim tail with fluff at the end. 

I adore brown-red cats, they're just so adorable. I can see him clearly and regally. 

 Clan: Thunderclan 

Pretty normal

 Rank: kit-apprentice-warrior-deputy-leader

Normal-ish

Mother: Rust'Spots- a dark ginger she-cat with lighter ginger spots skate red around her pelt. She has large ears tipped with orange tufts. She also has light purple eyes( forgot to mention in Silent'Owls description that he has light purple eyes) She had a litter of kits before Silent'kit that all died due to a fox attack on the camp 

The purple eyes are an interesting addition. Poor Rustspots.

 Father: Timber'leg- a tall-legged slim cream-colored tom with dark brown spots marking his eyes and back, as well as an entire brown, left front paw. Timber'leg was very absent in silent'owl's life, never really visiting him as a kit which contributed to his lack of connection with his clanmates. 

Absent father, sort of cliche but he's cute so I'll let it pass

 Siblings: none

Normal

Mate: Glimmer'wing- A plump, short dark grey she-cat with dark grey ear tufts and nose marking. She'd had a crush on silent'owl since they were kits. Silent'owl finally acknowledged his feelings for her when they became Warriors together. She loved Silent'owl till the day she died at her brother's paws, Indigo'mask, finishing Silent'owl's job. Before she died, she'd had his three kits, Sparrow'Pelt, Myth'Mist, and Owl'Frost. 

I feel bad for Glimmerwing. She just wanted love(not that I can relate)

 Kits: Sparrow'Pelt- a dark brown tom with brown markings and cream accents on his belly, cheek fluff, and muzzle. 

Sounds adorable

 Myth'Mist- a dark grey she-cat with a cream belly and ears. She also has lighter gray cheek fluff and belly marking. 

Very interesting name

 Owl'Frost- a brown Tom with dark gray cheek fluff, and belly. He also had dark red-ish brown belly marking and main.

Sounds cute(and sort of impossible)

Backstory: Silent'kit was raised away from his clanmates due to his mother's trauma with her last litter.(Damn Rustspots, child negligence is illegal) Silent'kit grew up detached from his clanmates, only seeing them through the wall of the den he shared with his mother. He was finally allowed out of the den when he was 5 moons old, so he wouldn't be completely foreign to the camp and his clanmates.(so he was basically locked in? Damn that's cold) When he realized that his upbringing was so different from others, he began to resent his mother, blaming her for the source of his bullying.(Nah, bro, that's all your fault) One of the cats who despised Silent'kit the most was the ThunderClan deputy, Indigo'mask.(So mature, Indigomask.) However, he found support in glimmer'kit, a fellow kit who was about the same age as him.(Classic bully and support plot.) Indigo'mask highly disliked his sister for hanging out with Silent'kit.(Very mature.) The other kits at the time, Bay'kit and Dark'kit also teased Silent'kit about his upbringing.(Bad kits, go home.) When he was made an apprentice, Wave'star chose Indigo'mask as his mentor as an opportunity for silent'paw to prove himself to his clan, thinking this would encourage him to work hard.(You idiot, Wavestar. Are you blind, deaf, or dumb?) While it did that, it also made silent'paw resent his clanmates more.(Well, no shit) He came to the conclusion that the only way for him to be respected was for him to be leader, or in any position of power.(Logic) As he continued his training, he changed his personality to please his mentor Indigo'mask, thinking that if he could please the young deputy, he would be respected.(Such logic) Eventually, Wave'star died, already being quite old when Silent'paw was born. Indigo'mask became leader. He appointed the senior warrior, Hurricane'Fang deputy, and Silent'paw was made a warrior.(But why.) Right away, the clan could see that Silent'owl was a force to be reckoned with.(A probably 11 moon old warrior is so vicious. Sold logic there) Silent'owl used that to his advantage, learning how to manipulate cats to do what he wanted. He still resented his mother for his upbringing. As soon as he got the chance, Indigo'star gave Silent'owl an apprentice, then having grown quite close during his training.]Soon after, Glimmer'wing asked Silent'owl to be her mate, he accepted, thinking having a mate and kits would solidify his loyalty to his clan.(Crowfeather logic) For a time, silent'owl's life was normal, Glimmer'wing was pregnant with his kits and his apprentice, raven'paw, was making good progress.(It's never 'normal' for long.) Then River'clan took the sunningrocks in a battle that killed Rust'Spots.(there it is.) Silent'owl was devastated, his mother had been the only cat he had ever truly loved.(But he resented and hated her?) Silent'owl pushed through his grief, knowing that if he stopped now, all his hard work would be for nothing.(Oh, StarClan forbid you show a bit of grief) Soon after his mother died, Glimmer'wing gave birth to their kits, Sparrow'kit, Myth'kit, and Owl'kit. Silent'owl was happy for her, knowing she had always wanted kits. However, he only saw them as an asset to him. Eventually, his apprentice became Raven'mask(YES A MASK SUFFIX), named after the dark cream marking around his eyes. Soon after, he was on a border patrol and came across a kit in the forest. The kit had was only a few days old, silent'owl took pity on the kit(Wow. I'm surprised that he'd do anything slightly possibly damaging for his reputation) and brought him back to camp. Glimmer'wing was happy to adopt the kit, seeing as she had given birth to her own kits a few days ago. They named the kit adder'kit. A few moons went by, and silent'owl's kits grew up along their adopted brother, treating him as if they would each other. However, good things couldn't last and Hurricane'Fang, the deputy, caught a bad and sudden case of greencough. The medicine cat, bat'fang tried his best to test it but ultimately failed and Hurricane'Fang died, leaving the spot open to Silent'owl. The evening that Hurricane'Fang died, Indigo'star called Silent'owl into his den. There he told him that in order for him to prove his loyalty was to Indigo'star, and Indigo'star alone, he had to kill his mate, Indigo'star's sister.(Damn, your own sister?) At first, silent'owl refused, after all, she was his mate for StarClans sake!

But after a while, he convinced himself that Indigo'star was right, after all, it was only one cat in the clan.(wtf) He knew that Glimmer'wing liked to take walks in the even now that their kits were apprenticed. He followed her to the river and attacked her. After giving her wounds he thought would kill her, he left, looking for a place other than the murder scene to wash off his paws. But Glimmer'wing was still alive, and she struggled back to camp and met Indigo'star in the forest. He watched as his sister whimpered and begged pitifully at his paws. He pinned her to the ground and killed her in one foul blow. After making sure she was dead, he raced back to camp, yelling of rouges.(What about his scent?) Silent'owl was devastated. He grieved for her more than he thought he would. Indigo'star appointed him deputy after the vigil for Glimmer'wing, still letting him think that he had murdered his mate. Silent'owl slowly began to go insane, thinking he would see Glimmer'wing and Rust'Spots but it would just be a reflection in the river, or a leaf blowing by. He festered over the scenario in his head, thinking of how he could have done it differently.(Maybe kill Indigostar instead?) Many moons went by, and silent'owl continued to act the same, even if his mental state was deteriorating. Indigo'star lost lives left and right in battle. Eventually, he was on his last life. He asked silent'owl to take a walk with him through the forest. And there he told him if his life and how much he regretted his actions.(Too late now, buster) He stopped beside the river and looked at his reflection and mewed "good luck silent'owl, you will make a great leader in my place" and plunged himself into the river to drown. Silent'owl let out a terrified yowl, watching in horror as Indigo'star was dragged under the surface of the river.(Obviously not that much in horror if he just watched him die) He returned to camp distraught. After the vigil, the medicine cat, bat'fang led him to the moonstone to get his nine lives.
Silent'star returned to camp, still grieving for indigo'star even though the tom practically ruined his life. He appointed adder'stripe as his deputy even though he hadn't had an apprentice.(Because bias) The clan didn't like the decision but respected Silent'star. Many, many moons went by and everything was calm, Silent'star grew older and lost his lives to bouts of sickness and wounds. He was well respected by the clan and he had finally achieved his goal. But not all was well with Silent'star mentally, he'd been seeing things more and more frequently, thinking he would see Glimmer'wing waiting for him in his den, but for no one was there. They continuously faced pressure on their border from RiverClan. His kit Myth'Mist was trying to convince him to try and bargain with the RiverClan leader. Silent'star snapped, saying that he was leader and he didn't need anyone. He hadn't needed Glimmer'wing, or indigo'star and all they had ever done was get in his way so he killed them.(You fucked up, Silentstar) Myth'Mist was horrified and Silent'star immediately regretted his decision, but hissed "no one will believe you over me, you're just a brash young warrior who can't hold her tongue." Myth'Mist ran out to tell the clan but Silent'star contradicted her story, saying that he had said he only FELT like he killed Glimmer'wing and indigo'star. The clan split in two, one side believing Myth'Mist, the other believing Silent'star. Silent'star proposed a way to settle the conflict. They would fight, and whoever won would leave the clan for good.(What a wonderful idea. Note the sarcasm.) Myth'Mist agreed and they fought. Silent'star had Myth'Mist pinned down and was about to kill her. When he was stopped dead in his tracks by adder'stripe. The deputy had sunk his teeth into Silent'star's throat, killing him.(Cheater.) Silent'star was sent to the dark forest for his crimes of murdering cats.(Actually, he didn't kill any cat.) He felt that his punishment was unfair and vowed that one day, he would get his revenge on the clans.(Well, no shit, he didn't do anything(murder-wise))

Wonderful job on this OC, especially considering it's your first OC.

My first OC was basically just Firestar, but female and gray.

9/10