Name: Wasp'star, Wasp'snarl,Wasp'Paw, Wasp'kit

Very interesting name

Age: around 78 moons

Not too young, not too old

Personality: As a kit, he was very playful but a bit rough, as he grew up, he became more jealous and cold, over-all he is an ambitious jealous piece of fox-dung.

What influenced him and made him become jealous and cold?

Appearance: He is black Tom with Tan splotches and darker tan stripes and markings. He has very heavily lidded amber eyes, along with several scars.

Thank you for including the scars.

Clan: ThunderClan

Canon Clans are always nice

Rank: Leader

Mother: Adder'Hiss(A dark cream she-cat with Dark tan splotches and dark green eyes)

Never heard of a cat with the suffix -hiss before.

Father:Needle'Rain(A black Tom with tan rivulets, scars, and dark amber eyes)

-rain isn't commonly used either

Sibling:Lantern'Gleam(A dark cream Tom with tan rivulets and several scars across the face, and a completely burnt ear, along wit dark green eyes)

Cats don't know what lanterns are. Maybe change his name to something that cats do know?

Mate:none

Kits:none

Backstory: Wasp'kit was always a rough kit, he injured Lantern'Kit several times while play-fighting, but Lantern'Kit never told due to him being too scared. Wasp'kit's mood could change on a dime, leading to him being unpredictable. Wasp'Paw was always jealous of how fast his brother learned. One day, Lantern'Paw was attacked in the woods, giving him one of his scars. Wasp'paw and Lantern'Paw were quickly made warriors. After a while of being Warriors, the clan deputy died. In another act of jealousy, Wasp'Snarl burned his brother to prevent him from being deputy. Shortly after he was made deputy, Wasp'Snarl attempted to drown his leader, however a patrol spotted him and dragged him off, but it was too late. Wasp'Snarl became leader, but Star Clan refuses to give him his lives. He appointed his brother as deputy, but his reign did not last long. He was assassinated after a gathering. Leaving his brother as leader and him in the Dark Forest to try and convince his brother to do his bidding.

Did his parents never notice Lanternkit's injuries? What attacked Lanternpaw? Did Waspsnarl even get an apprentice? How did he burn Lanterngleam? Why didn't StarClan give him lives? They gave Brokenstar all nine lives. What cats assassinated him? Does he talk to his brother through dreams?

Overall rating is 6/10