My comments will be in bold

name -sugar heart

Cool name i never seen sugar beffore

age- 48 moons old

Old cat

gender-she

She-cats are nice

looks-a tiny she cat with middle fur she is grey with three darker grey stripes on her legs(3 one each) and the sides of her face and top of her ears and 10 on each ear, she was a white ears and tail and belly and cheat airh black paws and spots on tail and a big stripe on her back and bilnd blue eyes

Wow very dettald

yes shes blind

Bline cats are cool

she is nice and sweet but sometimes mean (when others make fun of her) but she loves to joke around with others

She saunce like a good friend

rank-medicine cat apprentice

clan- river

kin-mom-stripemoon shes a grey she cat with black stripe and blue eyes she is sweet and nice but she can snap quickly

dad-nightshadow-a all black tom with green eyes with one white patch unber hes long fur

yea two brothers 1(speedrunner a all black tom woth green eyes hes. jerk and mean and grumpy

her other brother-white spotted black with alor of white spots has green eyes and he's loyal and playful

Nice

crush-none

Cool

bi

That's cool

backstory

when she was born her parents loved her a-lot and her brother white spotted did to but speed-runner hated her as they get older (i wunder why?) , stripe moon find out or sugar paw was blind won't they have faund out when she was suger kit? but she still loved her but her father didn't like her no more sad so whites spotted as protected her form others naww brother and sister bonding when they become apprentice sugar paw had to be a med cat but didn't want to be as she wanted to be with her brother as she learned she started to like being a medicine cat that's cool as she get to see star clan as she become older speed runner (after he get he's warrior name) killed white spotted. Why? and sugar heart tried to save him but can't as-she get older she get her apprentice named fawn-paw she was a tall tawny color with dark greenish brown eyes as she got older she get sick when passed away

shes was ny frist warrior cat oc

That's cool

I woude rate her a 8/10.

I like her a lot but i do want to know why her brother hated her and killd her other brother. Also i'm pretty shure they woude find out that she is bline when she is a kit

moomfeather fell free to sumite another oc