Name: Ivystripe

(ohh pretty but simple)

Age: 22 moons

(Young cat nice)

Gender: Female

(Of cures)

Appearance: Ivystripe has yellow fur with big orange stripes. She is tall and has a shorter tail than most cats. She has short, sharp claws and teeth. She has a dark pink nose round nose. She has pointed ears. She has beautiful green eyes that stand out. She has frizzy fur that sticks out in the mornings, but being a perfectionist she managed to make it look nice and would be annoyed when it looks messy.

(Ohh i like her and love the detail)

Disabilities: Hm, none

(Kk)

Personality: Ivystripe seems hostile when you first meet her. She’s actually just really tired and needs the pain of others to remind her she’s not the worst. She takes her duties as med cat very seriously and panics a lot under pressure. She feels the constant need to prove herself.

She used to trust easily but slowly learned that the world was a dark place. She became slightly paranoid and for some reason feels proud of it, like she’s safer than everyone else. 

She has good manners with cats with a higher rank than her, but otherwise brags and teases those weaker. She barely admits she’s wrong and that’s something her friends want her to improve on,but she thinks that makes them weak.

Ivystripe can also be kind and friendly. She loves kits and their innocence.

(I love her)

Rank: Med cat

(Nice)

Clan: WindClan

(First windclan cat I got. Windclan is not really use mutch)

Kin: 

Mother: Goldeneye.  Ugly orange and yellow she cat with amber eyes, tall, long tail, short claws. Makes it very obvious that Ivystripe is her favorite child. Uncreative, always asks for help from others. Loves her kin.

Father: Flametail. Fluffy orange and red cat, tall, short tail, big green eyes. Dislikes Ivystripe for choosing to be a med cat, he thought she was going to become a powerful warrior. He still loves her, just disapproves of her choices.

Brother: Sparrowcall. He is a quiet warrior, forced to be one. He wanted the job of med cat, to heal, to help from the sidelines, to avoid killing. He loved a Shadowclan warrior once. His father killed her, he is scared of what might happen to him.

( Love them all but flametail sounds horrible)

Mate: None (Cause med cat)

(Right)

Crush: Once had a crush on Silentfoot. Small light gray she-cat.

(K)

Sexuality: Aroace (Med cat), used to be BI.

(I'm confused what do you mean used to be bi did she think she was bi but realize she was not? If she is aro how did she get a crush on silentfoot is she demi or grey romantic?)

Backstory: 

Ivystripe had to be there for her brother. She didn’t always know that he hated her, that he hated that she was always better. After realizing that, everything she did was for him. Her friends became his friends too, her food was for him, her punishments were all because of him. Even her choice to be med cat. It was for him. She couldn’t stand seeing him upset over his dead mate, so she made it so she would never have one of her own. 

She could deal with it. She could forget about the loving memories with her friends, the feeling of having her own food, the feeling of getting out of trouble. Silentfoot... She wanted to protect her brother, she wanted him to look up to her. 

After training as a medicine cat for so many moons, her mentor died and she became the only healer in WindClan. It broke her, the pressure of having so many people rely on her, the pressure of helping her brother, everything. Ivystripe no longer thought, she could only act from habit. Sliding her prey over to her now lazy brother, healing cats without a thought. 

Eventually though, she got better. And it started with her brother’s death. It was quick. During a fight. A bright white ThunderClan warrior leaped out of nowhere, then SLASH. His face was bleeding, his expression one of complete horror and anguish. The enemy cat tore through him.

Of course, Ivystripe was sad, very, very sad. She couldn’t understand that after all her work to protect him, he just... died. It really helped her though, she became more independent, happy, she cared for herself. She regretted never thinking this way before, but it was in the past. All she needed to think about, was her future

(Poor kitty)

(I like her but i don't like the whole aroace thing. You're making it look like it was her chose witch it's not a chose to be aroace just like it's not a chose to be bi or gay or stright. I'm saying this as someone who is aro ace so pls write it in a different way like madey she thought she was bi but the realise she was not or she became cold hearted or something other than choosing to be aro ace.

Sorry if this sounds rude)