Warrior cat example

Name: Amberswift

Interesting name

Age:35 moons

K

Gander:she-cat
She-cat are over use but me bing female is okay Wight it.

Appearance:sand color fur with green eyes and a chip ear.
What do you mean by sand color fur. Is her fur peal ginger? Or is she a sand cat?

Disabilities:n/a
k

Personally: open mind,calm,nice,short tempered,cruel
Cruel and nice don't mix is she nice then mean or is she nice to other's and cruel to the reast.

Rank:médica cat
Okay

Clan:skyclan
Okay

Kin:silentcrow (father) grey tom with blue eyes

Pinknose (mom) light red she-cat wight blue eyes.

Firethoot (sister) dark red she-cat with green eyes.

What's there pearsonly? Dose she hate them or love them? If pinknose and silentcrow had blue eyes how dose Amberswift and her sister had green eyes? But i like there name's

Mate/crush:n/a
K

Sexuality: aro ace
Aro and ace people relly need more reaputantion

Backstory: Amberswift had a normal kit hood and apprentice hood. Okay then  When she got her apprentice levenderpaw. Is when she had trubel. Levrnderpaw never seems to pay attention to the lassince and never seems to learn. If she is not paying attention then she won't lurn. Or did it just look like she is not paying attention but she was paying attention. This made Amberswift angry and she off then snapped at levenderpaw out of anger. I can reallite to that

Amberswift manter seeing this told her that every cat is smart but if you judge a fish for how they climb a tree it will spend its whole life thinking it's stuped. That sauns like a Einstein qout
  AmberSwift didn't understand this and get bing harsh on levenderpaw. One time she yelled at her in front of the holl clan. Did no whan in the clan stop here ?

Amberswift started to notice levenderpaw stay away from the other apprentice. Amberswift found out that the other apprentice were bullying her. How did she find out? When she ask why levenderpaw diden't tell her. Levenderpaw told her she was scared of getting in trouble. Amberswift told her she would have not have gotten in trubel. Okay. AmberSwift decide to ask her manter how she can help her appratice her manter told her to stop treating her appratice like the fish.

Amberswift realise what her old manter mant. But she diden't understand beffore She tried her best to help her apprentice from then on.

How ?

Any extra info she woude name levenderpaw levenderfish as a way to remember what her manter told her.

Okay

I rate this oc 4/10. Why was she so harsh on her apprantice ? . what was here relation ship Wight her familly? How did she help levenderpaw ? . did it take time for levenderpaw to trust her ? .

Worker exapmel

Name: maya grace
Cute name
Age: 20
Where do they work: scp foundation
Alright
Sexuality: asexual aromatic
Sweet
Gender: unlabel
First unlabel oc i seen i mean have
Pronounce: she/they
Rank: leavel 2
Occupation; Reascher in traing
Appearance: dr grace is 5'1 or 5'2. She has dark brown almost black hair that is usually in a bun. She has dark blue and brown glass. Dr Grace wheres a blue short with black pants. They have light color skin with brown birthmarks
They look kindoff cute
Backstory: dr grace wa taring by her uncle to work at the foundation when she was 14 until she was 18 she going the foundation at 20. She become friends with dr fire and agent holly. She later on foundout that her older brothers stared another orgnation calld cell and destroy.

Well then.
Any extra info: no

5/10
How did she fine out about her brother organtions? Why is she still in taring if her uncal aredy train her?

Scp oc example

Real name: heart
age: unknown
Intereing
Gender: unkonew
So unlabel? Or questing
Pronounce: it's /it
Cool neopronce
Desnation number: 9870
Anomalies abblitis: somune weapons and dectect crimes
Intreasting powers
Object class: keter
Humm
Cotiment Procedures:scp 9870 should be kept in a 3mx5mx3m cage and be gured by no less than 4 guards but no more than 9. A realty anchor should be keep on at all times. If it is to breach containment mtf omega 7 shude fine it and bring it back to containment

Description;scp 9870 seems to be a cat 24 cm tall and 14 cm wide. It has black fur with a broken white heart shape on its chest. It has blue eyes with red iréis.
Why are the cute scp's evil?
Backstory: none
Umm okay
Any extra info: it escape contiment
They use there power to kill humans it deema evil

4/10
What dose it deem as evil?
How did they escape contimnt?
Why dose it kill people it deems as evil.