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Bonus Chapter 1 (Climax Changed)

Hey reader!
I know it's been so long, I have promised you the change in climax as few of you want to Happy Ending. So it's here, a bit change in climax scene.

If you want to get a clear view what happened and how it's changed from the previous climax, do read "LAST MEETING".

Enjoy reading !

Both Negative and positive comments are welcomed by the author.

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Few lines from previous climax.

The sky was ablaze with the fire of the setting sun.The pale crescent moon shown like a silvery claw in the night sky. Neil was still on the bed sitting and watching the moon. The room had huge glass window as avni loved watching moon. It gave her  peace and calmness. Avni always used to tell neil about her and the moon conversations.when their relationship was new born neil used to laugh and tease her but always adored her thinking how innocent she is!

The same peace and calm he could feel now but his heart was restless. He could feel his heart thumping louder. He went towards the window and there was small dreamcatcher hanged tinkling and producing melodious sound. When avni was in her college she loved these kinds of stuff. Sometimes neil would get shock after seeing avni's mood. She was indeed a girl with different shades of emotions & feelings.

Tillu..... Shweta called him.
Tillu jaldi aa hospital se call aya h.....

Upon hearing the name of hospital he rushed outside to see neela & shweta waiting for him eagerly.

Kya hua mom... Hospital se call avni thik hai na use kuch hua nhi h na.... Main ja raha hu avni ke pas.

Neil along with shweta and neela went to hospital.

On reaching hospital, they got to know that avni has gained consciousness.

Neil couldn't control himself he rushed in the icu and saw avni struggling to breathe.

He took her hand on his and caressed a bit.She was lying lifeless.

Here, I am adding Avni's pov of view when she saw neil on gaining her Cousiousness.

The below lines are from avni's side.

When I opened my eyes , I felt an increased sensitivity of light, it felt like it will Pierce my vision and I will end up being blind. I closed my eyes again to feel less light but then the smell close to me felt soo familiar that I couldn't close my eyes for longer time and when I again opened , it was him.
He was the first one to be noticed , his eyes depicted that he had not slept for many years. Although he was sleeping on medicine but that's not the natural sleep.

Why is he here? And why am I here?
I went to meet him and he refused to meet me then why he is standing infront of me.
Seeing his condition, she at once felt pity on him for sleeping  so long but then reality was something else she had made her mind that she will not cross his ways but now here he is standing in front of me. How will I make myself move on.

Avni had soo much in her mind and she was not in a state to think more. She had pain all over her body and now thinking about leaving him is giving her more pain. So she moved her eyelids only to notice Shweta maa and Neela maa standing beside him.

She was beyond shock and now she thinks that she is still sleeping and dreaming that neil and shweta maa had come to see her.

She closed her eyes again and she opened and heard doctor's voice.

Avni can you see us. How are you feeling.

Then she realised that isn't dreaming. They are in real. She nodded in yes .

On seeing both mother's her eyes sheded tears. She wanted to hug her mother's.
She tried lifting her hand but the pain wasn't letting her.

She was under the strong gaze of someone who was watching her continuously without blinking his eye.

Shweta and Neela approached towards her and caressed her face,both had tears. They leaned one by one and placed a kiss on her forhead. She was soo happy on getting their love and on the other side she was thinking how come Shweta maa and Neil come here .

She then closed her eyes as she didn't want to face anyone (or we can say Neil) . Seeing her closing her eyes everyone started getting worried, but then doctor said it's normal as she needs rest.

Neil felt hurt that avni didn't looked him properly.

Is she still angry with him? What is going in her mind? His mind was full of question he want his answer or else he will become mad in few days.
He can't bear more distance from her. Not now, after soo much happened in past few days. His life has turned completely upside down. He was no more interested in anything he looked soo tired mentally and physically.

Everyone left the icu and avni was shifted to general ward. Ashish and Prakash were in doctor's cabin.

We have to monitor her and we have few tests to do her ECG reports are here with me and let me tell you she isn't stable yet she still needs treatment , although we have shifted her to general ward we have to make sure she doesn't sink or else we might loose her and it will be impossible to get her back.

We won't discharge her until she is stable and let the tests reports come, then I can say furthermore.


Few weeks passed.

It has been 4 weeks since avni had gained her consciousness ,she is stable now and she would daily see neil come and still next to her but all silent. He only stares at me, I haven't seen him like this before.

It was the time for her discharge, shweta was packing all her stuff and neela ans ashish supported her and made her sit on wheelchair. Then neil took the handle and made her way towards the exit. Both were silent till they reached the main exit. He then lifted her and made her sit in the car which made shweta and neela smile a bit which went noticed by avni and she was shocked.

In these four weeks, no one talked about avneil's relationship & shweta and neil being with them which made avni mind more anxious.

They reached home. Avni felt happy when she saw her house, it was a long separation from her home and she was so attached to her home.

She was surprised with the welcome when she saw NGO children with balloons and flowers.

She entered the Hall and the homely vibes made her feel peace and calmed her mind & soul. A strong smell of chocolate with vanilla hit her nostrils, she turned her head in the direction of kitchen only to witness neil dressed in apron was standing with a tray  full of muffins .

Neil she said in a mere whisper.

She then move forward a bit , neela made her sit on the sofa. Neil came forward and sat on his knees and forwaded her muffins. She couldn't resist the smell, her mouth watered . She took a muffin and ate and the chocolate melted made her feel heaven. She smiled a bit, but then she wanted to go to her room.

Maa, main room mein jana chahti hu, I am tired.

Neil was still on his knees with tray of muffins, he was upset as avni had been ignoring him . He was in guilt.

She entered her room to find her room a bit messy,  she looked at Neil's shirt on her bed , his shoes lying beside the cupboard, his belt was hanging on the handle of the cupboard.

What the hell is wrong with everyone. Is he living in my room.

How can he?

Maa, mujhe Neil se baat krni hai abhi.

Neela sensed that she is angry because of the mess.

Avni, abhi ni abhi tmhein rest ki zarurat hai hm sham mein baat krte hai.

But maa.....

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Hey!

How was it?
Separating it in two parts as I think getting avni will not be easy for Neil. So Hope you will enjoy coming bonus chapters.

Stay tuned!

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Bubye ❤

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