P H A S E . 29
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Abhimanyu :- Neil ,
aaj tak maine kisi se kuch bhi nahi manga ,nayi Bhagwan se kuch manga ,.
par zindagi pe pehle baar kuch mang raha hun ,..
Jo Bhagwan se manga hai,.wo ab tumhare pass zindagi shuru karne wali hai,...
please mera Avii ki kayal rakhna .
Mera Princess hi mera sab kuch hai ,
mera Jaan hai wo,.
agar usko ek karroj bhi aya na mein sehan
Nayi pata , aaj se mera anmol ratan , tumhara hui hai ,...please uska kayal rakhna.
Neil :- Itne baar bolne ki jarurat nahi hai , Abhi .
Mein janta hu Avii kya hai tumhare liye.
Pata hai , mujhe tumhe aur Avii pe sab se kya acha lagta hai.!
Abhimanyu :- Kya ?
Neil :- Tum dono ek dusre ko diya hui pyaar , respect or trust.
Aaj tak maine bahut sare bhai -behan ko dekha hai Abhi ,
par tum dono jaise kisi ko nahi deka.
Sachi pe mein toh tumdono ke pyaar pe , relation pe Fidaa hogai hu Abhi.
Abhimanyu :- Mera toh sab se pehle kayal yehi aya tha Neil ,
ki mera saala kaise hoga , kya wo mujhe mera behan se dur kardega ! ...
par tumhare baate sunne ke baad hi mujhe samajh par aya ki,
mera behan tumhare haato pe safe hai aur waise hi hum dono ka rishta.
Neil :- Har ek behan ka sapna hoti hai tumhare jaise bhai hone ka ,
Avii bahut lucky hai ki tum mile usse ,
jaise ek papa aur bhai ka pyaar dono ek saat dene keliye.
Abhimanyu :- Woh toh hona hi hai Neil , bachpan pe jab humare business start karne ka soch aya tha ,
tab Papa subah se shaam tak aapke office ke kaam pe aur uske baad raat tak investors doondne ke kaam pe busy rehta tha ,
jiske wajah Avii humesha mera pass hoti thi.
Kyunki Maa or Dadi bhi har ek kaam pe busy rehta tha.
Agar Maa Avii ko lene ayi bhi na , Avii mujhe nehi chodta tha.
Sona bhi humesha mera pass hi .
Isiliye,
sab hoke bhi bachpan se mai hi paida kiya tha Avii ko,
isiliye hum dono ka bond sab se alag or gehra hai.
Neil :- Bahut achi ho tum Abhi,
waise tum kal se jaise har roj subah or raat Avii ko wish karte ho waise hi karte rehna , mein nahi chahta hun ,
mera wajah se ek bhai or behan undono ka adat chode or badale.
Abhimanyu :- Tumhe kaise pata tha Neil ,
ki hum dono ko wo adat hai ?
Mein kaise question puch raha hu ,
obviously Avii hi batayi hongi.
Neil :- Nahi , Avii ne kuch nahi kahi.
Jab bhi hum dono subah video call pe rehti thi tab maine dekha tha kaise tu har subah uthne ke baad hi sab se pehle Avii ko utake ,
uska chehra dekhe din ko start karta ho , waise raat bhi.
Abhimanyu :- Agar aise na karun ,toh mera din shuru aur nayi khatam hota hai.
Thank you so much Neil ,
thank you so much .
Tum sachi pe sab se alag ho , or best bhi.
Neil :- Mein koi alag nahi hu Abhi ,
tuhi bol mein kaise bachpan se saat hui bond ko thodu ?
Kya aise karna sahi hai ?
Kya aise karne se Avii aur tum, dono kush hoga ?
Mein chahta hu Avii shaadi ki pehle jaise tha ab bhi waise hi rahe.
Abhimanyu :- Tum special ho Neil ,
mera khud ka family pe koi mard aise nahi sochta hai ,
bahut ladkiya ko shaadi ke baad sachi pe bidal hojati hai kyunki unke Pati unko sab se alag kardeta hai ,.
job ke karan ho , ya dusre place pe ho ,
ya ego ke karan , aise Pati ,
unke Patni pe raaz karna shuru kardeta hai , mera khud ka cousine Chaitra jo tune dekha tha uska life aise hi spoiled hogai shaadi ke baad.
Neil :- Avii ne bataya tha mujhe .
Abhimanyu :- Pata hai Neil ,
Chaitra ki shaadi ke baad hum sab usko ab hi mil raha hai , ab usko 10-yrs ka bacha hai , 5-yrs ki bachi.
Matlab samaj rahi ho tum !
Chaitra Shaadi ki 11-yrs baad ab hum sab mil paa rahi hai usse .
Neil :- Par Chaitra toh sirf , 29-yrs ki hai na ab ?
Abhimanyu :- Uski shaadi 18-yrs pe hogai.
Isiliye hum sab nahi chahta tha Avii ko itni jaldi shaadi kare ,
par kya karun tum agai aur ab uski shaadi hogai.
Neil :- Dar mat Abhi ,
jaise mein pehle kaha tha ,ab bhi wohi bol raha hu, ye ek hafte hone ke baad
Avii aap logo ke pass hi hogi ,
kabi kabi mera pass Khanna mansion pe rahegi jab bhi mein Mumbai aye ,
par tab bhi wo kahi pe bhi rahe, tujhe dekhna hai Avii ko bina tension ke tum usse mil sakta hai , and same goes with Avii too.
Abhimanyu :- Mujhe wo barosa hai tumpe Neil.
Neil :- Shaadi hone ka ye arth nahi hai na Abhi , ki jaha pe paida hui uske family chodke ek nayi family pe rahe ,..!
Balki shaadi ka ye arth hai , humare aangan ke saat saat ek aur nayi aangan aye ,
tab ek nahi balki dho families hoga.
Prakash :- Ye baat toh tune sahi kaha Neil , Abhi beta tum na bilkul bhi chinta mat karo .
Avni beti humare beti hai dil se maan raha hu mein , wo kabi bhi bahu nahi sirf beti hi rahegi .
Wo pehle jaise hai ab bhi waise hi rahegi.
Jab wo Mehta house jana chahti hai jaye , khanna mansion aye,..
sab uski marzi sehi chalega .
Ashish :- Humara beti bahut lucky hai Prakash ji , aap jaise ache ghar ki beti banni .
Mera jo thodasa dar tha ab tak wo khatam hogai hai ab.
Thank you so much Prakash ji,
aapka ye baate humare liye kitni kushi laya hai.
Neela :- Neil beta , Avuu ab bhi choti hai , usko gussa bahut jaldi ajati hai.
Par jitna jaldi ati hai uthne hi jaldi khatam bhi hojati hai ,
toh agar wo gussa se kuch kahe , ya kare aap usko daate bhi na , aram se baat kardijiye,...
actually baat ye hai ki Avii ko gusse se ya normally bhi chilake unche awaz se baat karte log se bahut dar lagti hai ,
kabi kabi wo rone bhi shuru kardeti hai ,..
Neil :- Acha hui aap mujhe ye baat boldi Neela Maa , mein iska kayal rakhunga.,
Abhimanyu :- Avii ko gussa jalti ati hai,
par bahut kam baar gussa dikhati hai wo bahar ,
toh bura mat manna Neil agar wo kuch kahe toh.
Neil :- Ab wo Mera wifey hai Abhi ,
agar kuch kahe bhi toh gussa mein,
mujhe bura nahi lagega , agar wo mujhse gussa nahi karti toh Patni hoke .!
Toh aur kisse karti hai ?
Swetha :- Ye toh bilkul sahi hai,
mujhe pata hai ye kaise situation hai , ab sab kitna emotional hai, par jaise Prakash ji or Tillu ne kaha, Avni humare beti hai bahu nahi ,...
mein uski Maa hongi Saas nahi.
Ye wada rahi mujhse.
Neela :- Dhanyawad Swetha ji , it mean's alot to us.
Khanna's and Mehta's
are having a chat sitting near car
after all rituals came to an end
with photoshoot section of
whole two families ,
and then seperate photoshoot of
Avni with Abhimanyu followed by adding
Neil and then Soma...
in middle.
Avni is sitting
a little far away controlling her tears
with Soma and Chaitra and Aryan accompaying her
with some more relatives.
Right now
Bidai is going to take place in next 5-mins
and
Khanna's along with Avni and Neil
are travelling back to Mumbai via flight
night itself.
After the day after tomorrow
reception in night ,
the other day
Avni and Neil are flying to Delhi
for a week.
After today ,
Avni is going to meet her family
little day after tomorrow
and
more after a week.,
which is making her to cry
yet
she is trying to drink back her tears.
Chaitra and Soma are trying to cheer her up.
Chaitra :- Avu , tujhe pata hai.
Jab meri shaadi hui thi mein sirf 18-yrs ki thi , kitne bhi mein beg ki khud ki papa se
aise insaan ko mujhe ye age pe toh shaadi mat karo , wo meri baat nahi sunni .
Kardi shaadi meri ,
thoda tha wish thi atleast mere pati meri baat sunnega ,
usse mein time mangi thi suhagrat ke din literally beg ki ,
par wo bhi meri baat nahi suni ,
kuch mahine baad hi pregnancy ayi thi mein nahi chahti thi tab bache par wo nahi sunni aur nayi mere saas sunni ,
par jab pata chala wo baby girl hai tab mujhe abortion karwadiya tha ,...
bahut kuch sahi maine , aur aaj bhi seh rahi hun...kyunki mera Papa, bhai ,aur pati koi meri baat ko aaj tak value diya nahi aur kabi dega bhi nahi.
Avni :- ....
Chaitra :- Par mein kush hu Avu ki tumhare life aise naahi hai , mere jaise nahi hai .
Ashish papa , Abhimanyu or ab tumhare
Pati Neil , sab tumhare bate par value deta hai,
jo tujhe pasand hai wohi karta hai ,...
maine dekhi hai Avu ,
kaise Neil ji tujhse milne keliye bechan horaha tha ,
aur jab Neil ji ne tujhe aisle pe ate hui dekha ek dum Rani jaise dikh rahi thi tum,
mujhe nahi pata koi dekha ya nahi par maine dekhi thi ,
kaise Neil ji ka ankho pe aasu agai tha tujhe dekhe as His Bride.
Avni :- Kyaa ? Neil ji ke ankho pe asu the mujhe dekhe ?
Chaitra :- Ha Avvu.
Maine sunna tha , agar groom,
bride ko dekhe aise ankho pe aasu aye toh iska ye matlab tha ki wo bride se bahut pyaar karta hai ,
Bahut nahi Bepannah pyaar.
Soma :- Aur haa maine bhi dekhi thi ,
Neil ji ke ankho pe aasu .
Jiju tujhse bahut jyada , bepannah mohabbat kar raha hai Avuu,..
ye tumhare luck hai yaar warna aaj kal arrange marriage pe kaha mil raha hai ,
ek rich Greek God , jo dil ka bhi itna ache hai ki wo tujhse bepannah mohabbat kar raha hai .
Avni :- Mujhe pata hai Soma , mein lucky hun.
Sachi pe Neil ji mujhse bahut jyada pyaar kar raha hai.,
mujhe toh ye dar hai ki kya mein wo sare responsibilities , unka pyaar sab nibah paogi ya nahi ?
Chaitra :- Mujhe pura barosa hai Avu ,
tum sare responsibilites ache se nibha paogi aur Neil ji ka pyar bhi.
Dayawanti :- Avuu...chalo Gudiya .
Bidai ki time hogai hai .
Avni :- Hmmm....Dadi.
Once Avni stood in her place ,
Mehta's and Khanna's along with
Neil and Abhimanyu ,
seeing Avni getting ready for Bidai ,
they eyes teared up.
Neil standing near car
a bit distance from Avni
seeing how everyone are holding back
they tears.
Backgorund...,
"Dilbaro" song from "Raazi" is playing
in a slow version.
Avni by throwing puffed rice back moving ahead ,
Started to cry
unable to hold back the tears
any more ,
along with her
Dayawanti and Neela started to cry walking along side Avni.,
Song :- Ungli pakad ke tune
Chalna sikhaya tha na
Dehleez oonchi hai ye paar karaa de
Baba main teri mallika
Tukda hoon tere dil ka
Ik baar phir se dehleez paar karaa de
Mudke na dekho dilbaro
Dilbaro...
Mudke na dekho dilbaro
Fasalein jo kaati jaayein
Ugti nahi hain
Betiyan jo byaahi jaayein
Mudti nahi hain (x2)
Aisi bidaai ho to
Lambi judaai ho to
Dehleez dard ki bhi paar karaa de
Baba main teri mallika
Tukda hoon tere dil ka
Ik baar phir se dehleez paar kara de
Mudke na dekho dilbaro
Dilbaro...
Mudke na dekho dilbaro
By the time ,
Avni reached Neil and Khanna family
she is a crying mess,
Ashish hugged Avni tightly
while
Neela is creassing her hair ,
Dayawanti is errasing her own tears
trying to act normal
where
Soma and Chaitra along with Aryan
are crying badly...,
Neil's eyes turned teary seeing Avni crying so vigorously.,..
Neil (in mind) :- Mujhe pata hai ye waqt bahut mushkil hoga ,...
Iske liye pehle hi maine dil ko bada kiya par ab jab reality pe tum itni jyada rorahi ho Jaan ,
mera dil bahut dukh kar raha hai ,
mujhe nahi pata hai kyun sirf Ladkiya chodke jana hai unki Aangan par mein itna wada kar raha hu Avii,
kabi tumhare family se tumhse dur nahi karunga jaise ki sab karta hai ,
mujhe nahi jaa raha hai tumhare aasu sehna, toh tumhare parents or Abhi ka kya haal hai mein ache se samaj paa raha hun ,
par kuch kar nahi paa raha hun tumhare aasu rokhne keliye.
Am so sorry Jaana.,
Kissing Avni forehead
hugging her tightly , Ashish didn't
said anything
as
he is crying by now ,
words are not forming in his throat.
Neela kissing her forehead
hugging Avni cried heart out,
at last hugging Avni....
Dayawanti cried more than anyone.
Abhimanyu erasing his tears ,
sniffing making him proper
holding Avni hand he brought her near Neil ,
Abhimanyu :- Jitna bhi kahu ,
wo kam hai Neil , par jo kehna chahta hu wo kehdiya pehle hi .
Baar baar kehke tujhe bura feel nahi karwana chahta hun..,par...
aaj tak humare amanat ,
humare Anmol ratan aaj se tumhare hui hai , please usse aise hi ache se ek kaanch jaise dekhna, bahut hi sensitive hai
mera bacha..,
please tum dono ek dusre ke kayal rakhe zindagi bar kush rehna ek dusre se, jo kuch bhi hojaye ,....par khud ka saat rehke har ek mode ko aage karna ,
Princess , aaj tak bahut baar kaha
ab phirse ,keh raha hu tumhare bidai
Avni Mehta se Avni Neil Khanna hui hai bas , par jab bhi humare kayal aye problem aye share karna hai toh , pata hai na ,
am just a call away.
Dil pehi sahi par pukarna mujhe ek jatke pe tumhare samne honga mein.
Avni :- Bha.i..ba..ha...i..bhaii...bha..i...bh..ai....
Abhimanyu :- Shshsh Princess ,
mat rona tumhare tabiyat kharab hogi , attack ajayega ,...mat ro bacha...
Abhimanyu kissing Avni's forehead
tried to break the hug and give her
hand to Neil ,
but
Avni was reluctant to get rid of Abhimanyu , in an instant
her whole family came and hug her tightly...
Ashish breaking the hug
erasing her tears nodding his head in
no ways ,
He gave Avni hand in that of Neil
who hold her protectively.
Taking Avni face in his very tenderly
holding her cheeks
erasing her tears ,
Neil whispered
very softly ...
Neil :- Jaana , you trust me right ?
She just nodded her head in yes ways ,
Neil :- Phir mera diya hui wada yaad hai na tumhe ?
She again nodded her heard ,
hiccupping hardly by now...,
Neil :- Phir please itna mat ro na ,
mein nahi dekh paa rahi hu tumhe aise , tumhe pata hai na Avii,
tumhare health keliye itna rona teek nahi hai ,
attack ajayega please shant hojao bachcha...
Swetha :- Avni beta ,
hume pata hai ye pal bahut hi mushkil hai dur jane keliye par ye har ek ladki ki zindagi ka kadwa sach hai,...
par trust us beta tujhe na sirf ek nayi family mila hai par naki khud ki family se dur horahi ho .
Neil :- Abhi kya tum humare saat aa sakta !
Mein Avii ko dukh nahi dekh sakta aur ab Avii ko sab se jyada jarurat bhi tuhi hai ,
mein honga par wo jyada acha tab feel karega jab uski family se koi uske saat aye .
Avii ko wo safe feeling , comfort ,or courage tumsehi milega Abhi ,..
Abhimanyu :- Mujhe bhi ane ka bahut mann hai Neil par kya aise hosakta hai ?
Wo ritual pe nahi hai toh..,.
Bebe :- Aise koi ritual nahi hai beta .
Ladki wale se koi bhi Ladki ke saat aye tab hi Avni puttar ache feel karega.
Ajao Abhi beta Avni puttar keliye sehi.
Dayawanti :- Jao Abhi .
Avu ko thoda acha feel hoga.
Neela :- Ha Abhi , jao.
Neil :- Lo Abhi bhi araha hai humare saat , ab toh mat ro bachcha,...
Avni :- Tha..nk..you...Neil..ji..
Soma :- Jiju ,
aaj tak main aur Avu kabi dur nahi tha ,
hum dono ek dusre ke saat har ek waqt pe khada hui hai ,
hum dono ke beech dost se jyada behan
rishte hai ,
humne toh socha ek saat shaadi kare wo bhi love marriage par hui kuch aur ,
par wo bhi aab dekhe toh ab pata chalega
ek angel pe ye bhi
arrange cum love marriage hi hui hai ,..
mujhe pura barosa hai aap humare Avu ki dyan rakhega par mein phir bhi ye keh rahi hu Jiju ,...
Neil :- Kya hai Soma ?
Soma :- Yehi ki ,
Avu bahut hi jyada jiddi hai , aur sensitive bhi .
Ek dum bache wali kaam karti hai aur ek time pe ek dum badi jaise baat karti hai ,
ye kya hai mein aaj tak nahi samaj payi bestie hoke bhi.
Avni :- .....
Neil :- Ye na Mera Angel hai ,my Pari .
Jo bhi hai ab mera hai ,bilkul bhi pyaari hai.
Soma :- Toh ab aap yaad rakhna ki aapko sirf Saala nahi , Saali bhi hai.
Neil :- Bilkul.
Later
Neil helping Avni to hop in car
while holding her huge saree ,
once Avni settled in seat ,
Neil taking his seat beside Avni ,
gave her meds to take
while
Abhimanyu seating in passenger seat handover the water to drank with meds.
Neil checking Avni temperature
sighted sadly as Avni temperature raised a bit .
Bidding a last adieu to all her family members waving the hand
Avni looked at Abhimanyu who asked her
not to cry.,
Neil moving a bit closure to Avni
as the car take off
erasing her shedded tears
whispered softly against her temple
while
Avni rested her head on his shoulder.
Neil :- Avii , pata hai aap ladkiya kitni lucky hai .
Aapko ek hi zindagi pe dho sur-names hoga , dho pariwar apna hoga ,
apna kehne keliye koi hoga,
par hum ladka ko ek hi zindagi ek hi surname., paida hui se marte tak.
Pata hai kitna boring lagta hai hume bhi sirf ek hi naam se humesha bulane keliye..,
kitna acha hota hai na agar ye rule aye Patni ke saat saat Pati ko bhi surname change hona hai.,
Abhimanyu :- Ha ye toh mein bhi soch raha hun Neil , acha hota humare surname bhi change ho.
Warna kitni boring lagta hai hume.
Avni :- Mujhe pata hai aap dono mujhe ache feel karwane keliye aise bol raha hai .,
mein ab teek hu bhai ,Neil ji.
Neil :- Aasthama attack ka sochi par bukar agai isiliye teek tho hai na?.
Sojao thodi samai .
Before can
Neil complete his sentence
he saw how Avni eyes are closing ,
and
she slept while resting her head on
his shoulders.
Abhimanyu tested her temperature
which shows 101°C.,
as her fever arrived a day ago
it can't be vanished in just a day.
Reaching to airport
hopping in flight ,
Avni and Neil sitting beside each other ,
Travelling back in Khanna's private flight ,
In next 3-hrs
all of them reached back to Mumbai.
Mehta's
were staying in Khajuraho
till morning and in afternoon they are flying back to Mumbai.
Crying once
Avni left
Neela and Ashish left to the room
trying to hold themselves remembering how badly Avni was crying.
..........
It's early morning
by the time Khanna's reached
Khanna Mansion ,
Avni is fully slept by then ,
Neil making her wakeup helping to get
down the car ,
Avni was astonished to see the
Khanna Mansion
as she for the first time seeing it in real.
Neil
chuckling helped her to enter in the mansion,
Abhimanyu following them.
Standing near door
Swetha doing the Aarthi ,
Asking
Avni to leave the red hand prints on
their walls,.
Avni looking at Neil and Abhimanyu ,
dipping her hands in red water
then to wall ,
smiled seeing how perfectly her hand prints
printed on walls.
Neil smiled seeing Avni happy face.
After like 5-hrs
she is smiling now not fully
but a little .
Bebe saying her infamous dailouge
to kick the rice bowl and enter the house including they lifes ,
Avni listening to Bebe
kicked the rice bowl as per her sayings ,
not hardly though.
Bebe :- Neil ab Avni puttar ko apne arms pe uthake ghar ke andhar ajao.
Hearing to Bebe ,
Neil smiled widely
while
Avni looked shocked ,
she is still wearing a veil but it is a transparent red veil.
Looking at Avni ,
Swetha cleared her doubt.
Swetha :- Avni beta wo humare khandaan
pe na , sirf ghar ki lakshmi ki haat prints hoti hai , pairo ka nahi .
Humare yeha aise isiliye kiya jata hai , kyunki humesha humesha keliye Pati,
apna Patni ki palan kare ek dum Rani jaise , pair ko neeche na rakhe ,
usko koi problem na aake dekhna hai Patiya apne Patniyo ko.
Bebe :- Aur sab log ye ritual kiya jata hai puttar , tum na bilkul bhi sharmana mat .
Hum sab ye phase cross karke hi aya hai.
Swetha :- Chalo Tillu , uthao jaldi .
Kafi time hogai hai .
Turning towards Avni
seeing her blushy cheeks,
Neil carefully picked up Avni in his arms
who looked into his eyes deeply with a
small shy face ,
Avni red face hiding in red veil ,
resting her hands around his neck ,
slowly yet carefully
Neil started to walk towards second hall
with Avni in arms ,
who's hold is getting tighten by every
passing second.
Abhimanyu smiled how carefully and slowly Neil is walking holding Avni.
Making Avni to sit
on a small stool
Swetha asking Neil to sit opposite side asking staff to bring
huge bowl filled with water and some amount of milk placing it in middle of
Avni and Neil ,
Abhimanyu sitting right beside Avni
and
Neil alone with none ,
Neil made a questioning face .
Neil :- Mom , raat ko 3:00am baj raha hai , sab log tired hai ....
kya ye sab kal nahi kar sakta ?
Swetha :- Nahi kar sakta hai Tillu , isiliye toh abi late hone ke baad bhi kar raha hai hum.
Neil :- Par Mom,
Avii ki tabiyat teek nahi hai .
Usko bukar agai hai phirse , bahut late hui hai usko rest ki jarurat hai .
Bebe aap toh kaho kuch.
Avni :- Neil ji , mein teek hun.
Jab late ho hi gai toh kya hoga kuch samai aur late hui toh !
Aap mere chinta mat karo, mein sachi pe teek hu.
Neil :- Dikh rahi hai Avii kitni teek hai tum ,. Ek baar face ko dekho rokhe kya
halat banake rakhi ho.
Avni pouted hearing Neil
and
everyone chuckled.
Avni :- Nahi mein teek hun sachi pe ,.
Dadi or Maa humesha bolti hai ek kaam shuru kiya toh wo tabhi khatam kar dena chahiye , kabi drag nahi karna hai .
Ek kaam jab hona hai tabi hona hai warna acha nahi hoga ,
aise bolti thi Dadi ne ,aur mein ye believe
bhi karti hu.
Abhimanyu :- Jab Avii khud bol rahi hai karne ko toh ye sab baate karke aur late kyun karna hai Neil ?
Waise ye ritual sirf 10-mins ya usse kam hi hoga.
Swetha :- Ha bilkul sahi kaha Abhi beta .
Tu na ye sab baate karke aur time waste mat karo ,
5-min pe khatam hojayega agar dono pe ek win hui toh .
Bebe :- Ye paani pe ring sab se pehle kaun doondega , wo bhi teen baar wohi Rule karega dusre ko aur game khatam sab rest karne jaa bhi sakta hai.
Neil :- Ladies se win hona nayi mushkil hai na mumkin bhi.
Waise mein Avii se win nahi hona chahta hu Bebe ,
akir raaj wohi mujhe karna chahta hu.
Prakash :- Toh start kare .
Bebe dipping the ring into milk water ,
Neil and Avni sitting opposite side
at a time dipped their hands in water ,
Avni is trying to find the ring
with full concentration
while
Neil is staring at Avni with a cute smile .
His hand is moving in perfect sync
with Avni's .
As
Neil concentration is on Avni ,
Avni getting hold on a ring
smiled widely before she can take out
the ring ,
Neil holded her hand in his classping hers.,
She tried alot to get rid of his hold
but
Neil smirking looking at her ,
didn't leave her hand ,
in last not having choice
seeing no one is around not facing them ,
Avni in an instant
gave him a flying kiss to distract Neil ,
But
Neil had captured the kiss as if
she really kissed him,
in air with his left hand ,
keeping his left hand on his cheek as if Avni kissing him ,
Neil finally let go of Avni's hand ,
she shying out
slowly removed the hand from milk water showing the ring to everyone who clapped in excitment.
Abhimanyu :- Avii ne jeeti ya tune usko jitadi Neil ?
Neil :- Wo jeethe ya mein kya farak padhta hai Abhi.,
jab hum dono ek hi hai.
Bebe :- Bilkul sahi baat. Chalo ab dubara karte hai ,...
Neil :- Phirse ...!
Bebe aap time dekh rahi ho ?
Aapko yaad hai na iske baad humare suhagrat bhi baki hai.
Kal hum jaldi uthne nahi wala hai ,
iska abhi se aap sab yaad rakhna aur koi subah koi nahi uthana mat aye mujhe or Avii ko kal jaldi ...
Hearing Neil ,
Avni eyes widened in shock,
everyone looked at him
in disbelief.
Prakash hit Neil on his shoulders ,
bringing Neil out of his irritating mood ,
he is enjoying himself playing with Avni
but at the same time
he wants Avni to rest well .
Dipping hands again in water
Neil finding the ring passing it to Avni,
and then
Avni passing it back to Neil asking him to show to everyone ,
seeing Avni face ,
Neil hold the ring out showing to everyone ,
earning everyone clap ,
Bebe once again dipping the ring into
milk water ,
This time
Neil and Avni both of them playing with
each others hands ,
playing in water .,..
for couple of minutes ,
Neil is creassing Avni hands
softly in water ,
ring is between their hands
after 3-mins of playing with
each others hand ,
this time
Avni and Neil both of them
at a time taken the ring out and this time claps echoed in whole mansion .
Everyone smiled seeing each other.
Prakash :- Ye hui na baat ,
humesha aise hi kush rehna dono ek saat.
Pati -Patni aise hi rehna hai ek dusre ke saat har waqt .
Swetha :- Chalo ab Avni beta , mein tujhe apne kamre dikhati hu.
Neil :- Mein dikhata hun na .!
Bebe :- Jab tak Avni puttar kamre pe jake 5-min nahi hoti tu tab tak nahi jaa sakta hai andhar Neil.
Neil :- Ab ye kaha ki naya ritual hai Bebe ??
Bebe :- Swetha tu Avni puttar ko lekhe jao , aur Abhi beta Neil tujhe guest room dikhayega tu aaj raat wohi sona.
Kal subah tak tujhe sab arrangements milega fresh hone ka .
Abhimanyu :- Iski koi jarurat nahi hai Bebe , mein ghar chala jaoga.
Neil :- Tujhe aur Avii ko ek baar bolne se nahi mannega .
Saala sahiba chup chap guest room pe jake sojao .
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20-mins later
Neil finally entered the room
which is decorated beautiful with
simple fairy lights.
The room is not looking like a typical
first night room.
For that to decorate,
flowers should be used and Avni is allergic to their smell .
Sleeping on flowers
when you are already having fever is not a good idea.
And so
Neil had asked to arranged for a
simple decoration as he was
so sure that ,
Today definetly will not be their
first night
cause of Avni health and mainly
she needs time ,
also because of the travelling and time.
Neil tip topping inside the room
closing the door saw
how eternal beauty
who belongs to him now forever
is sleeping on bed ,
by resting her head on head board .
Avni still as her veil on.
She is already asleep,
Neil moving towards the bed
to the edge ,
standing still infront of Avni ,
removing the Veil,
he for the first time in day
finally saw Avni magnificiant face by
totally removing the veil.
He for a second
mesmerized by her beauty,
couldn't believe that now she is really
his legally wedded wife.
Moon light
is directly falling through the glass window on Avni face
making her look like a shining star.
Moving his lips near her forehead ,
resting his lips on her forehead
for more then 2'mins ,
Neil kissed Avni on forehead.
Neil :- Mera Jaan , kitni beautiful hai.
Aaj shaadi pe mujhe jo bhi mila wo sab sirf yehi kaha ki mein kitna lucky hun ki tum mera zindagi pe ayi ho ,
mein toh bahut lucky hun Avii tum mera Zindagi pe ane keliye isiliye naki tum bahut jyada khoobsurat ho ,
balki isiliye tum jaise insaan ye duniya pe bahut hi kam hai.
Khud bukar hoke , khud itni roke ,
sad feel karte waqt bhi Bebe aur Mom ki baate ko "Naa" nahi kahi...,
mein tumhare liye soch raha tha aur tum family keliye kar rahi thi.
"Aaj mera zindagi mujhe milgai hai".
Thank you for accepting me as your Husband Avii , and I promise kabi tumhe dukh nahi karunga.
I will try every possible way to keep you happy and content forever.
Kissing once again Avni forehead
Neil by standing started to adore his
cute little wife.
Seeing Avni is about to fall
as she is on edge of the bed
Neil by keeping his hand on her cheek supported her head
and
in next minute feeling something hard
against her skin
Avni lazily opened her eyes
only to see Neil's smiling adoring face.
She sitting properly gave him an
awkward smile.
Neil :- Uthgai na , jake fresh hoke ajao.
Itni heavy jewelry or saree pe sona mushkil hai.
Avni :- Sorry Neil ji mein aapka hi wait
kar raha tha par pata nqhi kaise ankh lag gai aur sogai mein.
Neil :- Koi baat nahi hai Amber ,
mein thodi na complaint kar raha hun.
Ab bhi tumhe fresh hone keliye hi keh raha hu taki tum fresh feel ho aur aram se sojao.
As Avni is already tired and feeling weak
and more sleepy
as a good girl listening to Neil
she moving towards the dressing table started to remove her jewelry ,
as Neil had already removed her veil
it became easy for Avni
to remove the jewelry.
Seeing Avni backless blouse bare
white milky skin ,
urging to touch her
Neil moving forward
without informing Avni
kissed her bare back holding her shoulders ,
Avni stiffen against the table
holding onto it tightly
feeling sudden rush of blood in her body feeling Neil's lips their on her skin
for the first time ever.
She didn't expected Neil to kiss her
on her back ,...
Background "Moh Moh ke dhaage",
song is playing
Atmosphere suddenly turned hot.
Kissing one more time
Neil slowly started to remove her jewelry after
removing Avni hands from her neck ,.
By every ornament he is removing
Neil's kisses kept on increasing.
Avni eyes are shut tightly by the
new sensation ,
her body is already hot and Neil is making
it more hot.
Neil's hands went to creass her
bare waist after sliding the saree to remove the karmarband.,.
Avni sucked her breath in
making Neil to hold her tight.
His hands started to make random patterns on her navel
while
lips kissing her weak sensitive spot on neck followed to shoulders.
Sensing heat radiating
from Avni body ,
Neil totally removing the ornaments
keeping them on they places
leaving Mangalsutra around her neck ,
He gently removed her heavy earrings
once
kissing her ear robes tightly.
Neil :- Jake change karke aao Jaan,
before I loose control .
Avni :- Mein aapko nahi rokh rahi hun Neil ji...
Neil :- Pata hai Avii ,
par mein ab nahi chahta hu humare ek hona aise tumhare tabiyat teek nahi hai tab hona, uppar se tum bahut sad ho ,tired ho ,
mein aur tired nahi kar sakta ,
kafi raat bhi hogai hai ab neend ki jarurat hai sweetheart .
Avni :- Thank you Neil ji mujhe samaj ne keliye.
Neil :- Thank you ?
Avni :- Oops sorry...
Neil :- ....
Remembering Neil's words
where he asked her to thank him
or
ask sorry only by kissing each other ,
Avni pecked his lips ,
before
directly entering into washroom.
Neil smiled seeing her antics.
In next 30-mins
Avni came out all fresh wearing loose top
and capries .
She is having marriage bangels
and magalsutra ,
once Avni came out Neil
entered the washroom
by the time
he came out he saw Avni
had neatly floaded her saree
and
kept it near her dresses
and
is now sleeping on bed holding onto
huge Bunny stuffed toy
which Neil as already arranged on bed and
in their room.
Avni is sleeping so cutely holding onto Bunny tightly.
that
Neil shaked his head in no ways.
First checking her temperature
which risned by 2°c more showing
the temperature as
103°c now.
Asking Abhimanyu meds of Avni ,
Neil feeding meds to Avni
who is already in deep sleep waking her up ,.
He joining her beside the toy,
keeping the bunny other side
and
thought of hugging Avni to sleep
but
stopped as Avni is sleeping and he want to cuddle her only
when
Avni is not sleeping ,
he by keeping his hand on bunny
where
Avni hands are holding it,
kissing her forehead
Neil slept by staring Avni with a smile as
he is tired ashell.
Neil :- Finally Avii , hum dono ka shaadi hogai , tum mera baho pe hai .
Kab se wait kiya maine iss pal ka ,
Good night Baby.
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