P H A S E . 23
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Avni :- Bhai , Neil ji bhi araha hai humare saat .
Abhimanyu :- Araha hai ? Kaha pe Avii ?
Avni :- Wo maine kaha ki ,
hum dono long drive pe jaa raha hai toh
Neil ji bhi kaha wo bhi hume join karega...
Abhimanyu :- Acha ....
ispe bolne wala kaunsi badi baat hai Avii . Toh boldo Neil ko hum start hogai ghar se .
Avni :- Ha maine message kardi Bhai .
Abhimanyu :- Teek hai .
Avni :- Aapne Papa se kehdi kya humare Train journey ke bare main ?
Abhimanyu :- Ha .
Papa ne accept kardi par Dadi kush nahi hai ye decision se .
Papa ne kahi Dadi flight pe ayegi sare relatives ke saat .
Avni :- Mujhe pata hai , Dadi accept nahi karegi iske liye .
Abhimanyu :- Par mana bhi nahi kiyi na . Hum jaa sakta hai ab bhi Avii .
Kal mein tickets book karuga .
Avni :- Teek hai bhai ,
par kya aap Soma keliye bhi ticket book karega !
Wo bhi humare saat ane wali hai .
Jab kal mein Soma ki parents se baat ki
mere shaadi pe ane keliye,
Uncle and Aunty ne kaha agar mein uske saat rahu, lekhe jao ,
wo khud ki dyan rakhe hume koi pareshani na kare tab jaa sakti hai .
Toh isiliye wo humare saat ane wali hai .
Abhimanyu :- Achi baat hai na Bacha ,
tu bore na hogi .
Avni :- Mein bore waise bhi nahi hogi bhai , aap hoga na mere saat .
Maa kya baat kar rahi thi aapse ane waqt !
Abhimanyu :- Shaadi ki kuch baate .
Avni :- Ohh...okk...
11:00pm .
Outskirts of Mumbai .
After a long drive
for approximate 90-mins ,
Avni and Abhimanyu are resting sitting
on car bonnet staring the sky ,
after reaching a moutain top
where
usually people doesn't come .
Both of them
are waiting for Neil
chatting randomly .
There is a famous restaurant on wheels
in a distance of 10mins ,
where
people are gathering having the dinner
with group of friends , families and students .
Many of them are seems to be lovers
though .
15-mins passed by
when a car stopped infront of the
Restuarant on wheels .
Neil who smiled seeing
Avni and Abhimanyu
who are talking sitting far from the crowd parking the car ,
He started to march towards them .
For
Avni it tooks 10-mins to walk ,
but for
Abhimanyu and Neil it takes less then 6-mins to walk ,
credit goes to their
height and long legs .
Standing infront of them
Neil greeting both of them
sat on the bench which is situated right opposite to Avni .
Getting down from bonnet
Avni smiling went towards Neil
and sat beside him
where as Abhimanyu is still in the
same position .
Smiling at Avni
Neil classped his palms with hers
keeping their holding hands
in his lap .
Neil :- Sorry , late hogai thoda .
Avni :- Koi baat nahi Neil ji .
Hum bhi thodi samai pehle hi aya tha.
Abhimanyu :- Late hui teek hai ,
par Avii ne boli tu humse hi start hogai .
Phir itni late kyu hui ?
Neil :- Wo beech pe DD mila.
Kuch signs chahiye toh baat karke wo kaam dekhe aya hu .
Avni :- Aapne dinner kiya ?
Neil :- Ha par thodasa .
Avni :- Aap kab dinner kardi ?
Jab mein phone pe puchi tab aapne kaha karna hai !
Jab maine message ki "we started"
aapne kaha "me too" .
Ye sare baat pe beech pe sirf 10-mins time tha .
Kya aapne ussi time pe khaliya ?
Itni jaldi ??
10-mins pe kaise kha sakta hai aap ?
Neil :- Mujhe toh samaj nai araha hai ki 10-mins pe khana achi baat hai ya buri baat !
Kyunki mujhe toh personaly wo 10-mins khane keliye bhi jyada lagta hai.
Avni :- Kya...??
10-mins jyada nahi bahut hi kam hai Neil ji .
Neil :- Kam kaise Avii ?
Abhimanyu :-Matter ye hai Neil ki,
Avii ko sirf ek roti khane mein 10-mins lagti hai .
"Maa mujhe bahut bhook lagi , khane ko kuch dho na" ,
kehti hai par ek roti khane waqt uthne bhook pe bhi 10-mins lagti hai .
Agar rice diya toh 30-mins se jyada time .
Princess ko kitne bhi bhookh lage
sirf 10-spoons khake uth jati hai .
Tune dekha hi hongi na ye kuch din mein.,
aur aaj bhi.
Avni- Ha kyunki mujhe bahut hi kam Appetite hai .
Mein kya karu .
Mein jyada nahi kha sakti .
Neil :- Phir toh tumhare ye adat change karna hai Avii .
Avni :- Naii Neil ji.
Abhimanyu :- Avii , tumhare favorite
Mac and Cheese khaogi .!
Bahut mahine baad yeha aye hum toh kyu na khaye ! .
Neil tu bhi kha na .
Neil :- Mac and Cheese raat pe .?
Avni :- Ha Neil ji ,
yeha pe Raman dada bahut hi ache banata hai .
Mujhe toh bade bade resturants se jyada yeha ka pasand hai .
Ek din khaye toh raat pe kuch nahi hoga
Neil ji.
Ek min , aap mana isiliye nahi kar raha hai na ki ye sochke bahar choti street food hai , hygine nahi hoga and all.!!
Neil :- Wo bhi ek kaaran hai par pura nahi , itni raat ko high calories khana...
koi baat nahi tumhe khana hai na,
then I will also give it a try .
Koi na , kal jyada excercise kare toh teek hoga .
Avni :- Ye hui na baat .
Mein abhi ati hu order dekhe.
Abhimanyu :- Nahi tu rukh , mein jaoga .
Tu Neil ko company dho Avii...
Avni :- Mujhe jana hai bhai ,
please please bahut mahine hogai
Raman dada se mile hui.
Neil :- Teek hai jao Avii ,
par haa dyan rakhna .
Yeha se dekhega hum tumhe .
Avni :- Thank you Neil ji .
Abhimanyu :- Avii , ye lo card .
Payment kardena or yeha pe bejne ko kaho .
Avni :- Ok bhai .
Mein ati hu.
Abhimanyu :- Dyan se jana koi jaldi nahi hai .
Avni :- Ha bhai , wo pass pehi toh hai .
As Avni went
Neil and Abhimanyu started to chat
while both of them kept an clean eye on
Avni even while talking.
Neil :- So , tickets book hogai flight ka ?
Agar nahi hui toh Mein phirse bol raha hun Abhi , mere charter flight pe jayega hum sab .
Abhimanyu :- Nahi Neil .
Wo dekhne pe achi nahi lagega .
Waise ab toh planning change hogai hai.
Hum sab matlab mein , Avii , Maa aur kuch relatives , Avii ki friend Train pe jane ka intizam kar raha hu .
Neil :- Kya...Train par kyu ..!
Abhimanyu :- Avii chahti hai train journey kare .
Bachpan pe jab Papa tumhare office pe
Kaam karta tha , tab jyada train pe travel karte the hum sab .
Par kuch saal baad Flight ki adat hogai .
Tujhse shaadi karne ke baad Avii
phirse kabi bhi Train pe travel nahi kar sakti na ,isiliye bhi hosakta hai.
Shaadi ke pehle Avii ne kuch mangi hai mujhse toh mein kaise wo mana karu.!
Neil :- Avii chahti hai train pe travel kare .
Wo long hojati na .
Abhimanyu :- Hmm...22hrs lagega ,
usse jyada bhi .
Wo ...shaadi ke pehle mein aur Avii time spend karna chahta hu Neil .
Bachpan pe kaise tha waise rehne ki soch raha hai hum dono .
Neil :- Shaadi ke baad bhi tum dono saat pe ek hi ghar pe rehne wala Abhimanyu .
Agar kisi ke pass kam time hai Avii
ke saat time spend karne ka toh wo mein hu .
Mujhe toh samaj nahi araha hai mein
kush rahu Avii se shaadi kar raha hun
ya dukh rahun kyunki shaadi ke baad mein Delhi pe wo Mumbai pe rehne wali hai.
Abhimanyu :- Sorry Neil .
Actually mein bhi iske bare mein nahi socha ab tak .
Mein bas woha tak soch raha hu Avii ki , mere Princess ki shaadi hone wali hai.
Ab ke baad pehle jaise nahi hoga hum dono ke beech .
Kyunki Avii ko ab responsibilities badne wali hai.....
par mein ye sab pe ye bhool gai ki shaadi
ke baad bhi kuch mahine tak Avii humare saat hi rehne wali hai .
Wo humse nai balki tujhse dur horahi hai .
Neil :- Mujhe pata hai Abhi ,
shaadi ke pure ek hafte Avii mere saat Delhi pehi rehne wali hai par uske baad kya...?
Shayad mein hi ab se travel often karna padega .
Aur karuga bhi mein .
Choice hi nahi raha ab aur.
Abhimanyu :- Jab mein Maa ,
ko ye baat bola tab Maa ne mujhe data kyunki mein aur Avi hum dono ke bare mein soch raha hai par tumhare bare mein nahi .
Maa ne mujhe boli ,
tumhare saat Avii ko jyada waqt bitana hai .
Tab mujhe reality samne aya Neil .
Jitna mein ,nahi reh sakti hu mera bacha
ke bina , ab tum bhi nahi rehne wali ho .
Toh kyu tu bhi humare saat aye ,!
Neil :- Abhi...kya matlab.?
Abhimanyu :- Mujhe pata hai Neil,
tum bahut hi bade business man ho .
Ek billionaire se aise puchna bhi nahi chahiye par...
Neil :- Abhi , main manta hu ki bachpan se mera platinum spoon se feeding kiya gai hai , par Dadu aur Papa ne mujhe humesha mere pair land pe hi rakha hai .
Ek normal person jaise hi treat kiya hai.
Jab tak mein MBA keliye states nahi gai tak tak mein bhi ek normal se student jaise hi jiya hu .
Kisi ko pata tak nehi tha mein Prakash Khanna ka beta hu.
Kyunki Dadu aur Papa nahi chahta hai mein paise se andhe hu , status ke bare mein sochu aur sab ko neeche dekhu .
Bachpan kya , Degree tak mein kaha pe bhi jana hai toh jyada train or bus pehi gai .
Mujhe wo pasand bhi hai .
Abhimanyu :- Toh....
Neil :- Toh mujhe koi farak nahi padhta mein kaise travel kar raha hu Abhi.
Avii ke saat hona farak padhta hai mujhe naki kaise travel kar raha hu .
Abhimanyu :- Phir uncle , aunty , Bebe sab ?
Neil :- Mom or Dad bhi train pe ayega . Kyunki Mom ko pasand hai Train .
Bebe flight pe ayegi .
Abhimanyu :-Agar tu kal tak mujhe details de toh kaun kaun araha hai mein tickets book kardunga .
Neil :- Lets share it Abhi.
Abhimanyu :- No sharing in it Neil .
Waise kya ye safe hai tu itni raat pe akela ghomna ?
Security bhi nahi dikha raha hai , kaha pe bhi..
Neil :- Dur khada hai .
Avii ko security pasand nahi hai .
Wo bahut hi conscious feel karti hai isiliye mein dur rehne ko kaha .
Sab civil codes pe hai , isiliye Avii ko pata nahi chalega wo mere security hai .
Abhimanyu :- Avii ke bare mein bahut hi jyada soch raha hai tu Neil .
Thank you so much .
Neil :- Come on Abhi , mein mere Jaan ki dyan rakh raha hu.
Avii gai itni samai hogai , wo nahi arahi hai ab tak .
Itni samai kya baat kar rahi hai wo uss
ladka se ?
Neil who is been looking at the way
Avni and young boy
talking with each other since
finally asked Abhimanyu
who smiled seeing them
and
Neil's red nose in jealousy .
Abhimanyu :- Chill Neil .
He is Sid . Raman dada's son .
Younger to Avii and is studying 10th class.
You can think he is like a brother to Avii .
Neil :- Ohh...
5-mins later
Avni came along with Sid .
Introducing him to Neil.
Avni :- Neil ji , he is Sid .
My brother and friend .
Sid ,he is Neil ji my Fiancee .
Sid :- Mujhe pata hai Di ,that he is my Jiju .
Hi Jiju nice to meet you .
Neil :- Hi Sid . Glad we both met .
Mujhe nahi pata tha aaj tak mujhe ek chotasa Saala bhi hai.
Sid :- Di , aap sahi keh rahi thi .
Jiju sachi pe bahut hi handsome hai aur ache bhi .
Itne bade insaan hone ke bawajood bhi ,
aap hum jaise logo ke saat haat milake baat kar raha hai .
Aap sachi pe bahut acha Admi hai Jiju .
Mujhe toh ab pure akeen hogai ki
aap Mere Dii ki pure khayal rakhega .
Neil :- Ofcourse Sid .
Tum bahut hi smart ladka ho .
I wish tumhare jo bhi wishes hai wo pure ho .
Kabi bhi , kahi bhi tujhe kisi ka bhi ,
kuch bhi problem ho , kisi bhi help ki jarurat hai toh Avii ko boldo .
Mein humesha as a Jiju will help you and anyone , anytime.
Sid :- Thank you so much Jiju .
Aapka ye lafz kafi hai aur kuch nahi chahiye mujhe .
Di aap bahut lucky ho .
Aap sach kahi Dii ,
Neil ji jitna handsome bahar se hai utne se jyada acha dil se hai .
Hearing him
Avni eyes widened
where listening to him Neil smirked
looking at Avni.
Though
she said directly to Neil
he is handsome ,
yet
it feels to hear more melodious
everytime to see her blused cheeks.
Saying he will bring the order
Sid left the place
and
came back with the order .
Sitting on bench .
Neil and Avni on
one bench ,
Abhimanyu on other opposite bench ,
three of them
started to dig in .
As Avni and Abhimanyu said ,
the food is
indeed very tasty .
Before two of them ,
Neil had completed the entire plate
making
Abhimanyu chuckle .
Neil lied to Avni
that he had dinner .
He was very hungry ,
he thought to have it with Avni
hearing long drive
but meeting DD in middle because of work
he forgot about it .
Getting a call
Abhimanyu excusing himself went to
attend it .
While
Neil saw Avni
who is now playing
with Macroni making faces not eating .
He smiled seeing her ,
Neil :- Kya hui ! Jyada hogai .
In return
she just nodded her head awkwardly .
Smiling at her ,
Neil taking the plate from Avni hand
started to eat her leftovers .
Avni eyes widened
seeing the act of Neil .
No one in her family eats the leftovers ,
not even Neela eats Ashish .
She does eats sometimes but mostly not .
Seeing Neil eating her leftovers
from the same spoon ,...
Avni stomach held a tight knot feeling a different sensation.
It's like Neil is having her
but
not her leftovers.
He is repeatedly eating the spoon
dragging in and out in his mouth as if eating Avni.
Licking the spoon.
Avni glumped hard seeing him and drank water.
Feeling her gaze
Neil asked without lifting hiz eyes from
her plate .
Neil :- Aise ghoorne ki wajah ?
Avni :- Aap...aap kaise mere leftovers kha sakte hai Neil ji .
Wo..wo..mere....juta hai.
Neil :- Kyu nahi kha sakta Love ?
Husband and wife ek dusre ka juta nahi kha sakte toh wo rishte ka arth hi kya hai .?
Avni :- Par...aapko achi nahi lagsakti na
Neil :- Mujhe bahut acha feel horahi hai mere Wifey ki Juta khake .
Avni :- .....
Neil :- Avii ek baat puchu !
Avni :- Ji .
Neil :- Agar tumhe sirf 5-spoons khani hai toh kyu khud keliye ek plate liya ?
Hum dono share bhi karsakta tha na .!
Avni :- Wo...aap kuch nahi khaya na isiliye aur mujhe lagi mein pure kha sakti hu par ....
dinner kardi na isiliye nahi kha payi .
Neil :- Acha... dinner ki isiliye 5-spoons warna usse 5-jyada khati hai na.!
Shooking his head
completing her leftovers ,
keeping the plate away
Neil started to check his phone
where
Avni is looking all around the night sky ,
and people around .
Admist of all beautiful echo of music,
Avni heard few girls
are talking about a particular person
who is wearing
a black t-shirt and trousers.
Frowning she understood those girls
are talking about
no one but
Neil .
Neil is busy in checking e-mails ,
so he doesn't paid attention to anyone
while
Avni smile turned to angry then to smirk listening the girls.
They are total 5-girls
sitting right across them so that
Avni is able to hear
their voices cleary .
Seeing Avni and Neil
close to each other sitting
shoulder to shoulder touching
very closely ,
Girls started to debate
saying Avni is Neil girlfriend
while
others saying she wasn't ,
"cause if the girl sits beside the handsome man that doesn't mean
she will be his lover or wife,
as the handsome man is not paying attention to the girl sitting next to him".
As Avni can't say to the girls
that she is his Fiance
and
Neil is busy in sending e-mail to staff ,
huffing
she turned other side.
But listening those girls saying
they will propose to Neil,
he is so handsome and wants to kiss him,
Getting angry,
Avni with a smirk
thinking of something ,
Moving very close to Neil
without giving him any hint
she pressed her lips on his cheeks hardly kissing him .
Girls who saw this eyes widened .
More then the girls ,
Neil is shocked .
Resting the lips more then the first time
she kissed him ,
Avni with a shy smile backed off
from the kiss ,
seeing Neil is looking at her
with a shocked face keeping his hand on his cheek ,
not meeting his eyes
she exclaimed ,
Avni :- Wo....wo...woha pe kuch ladkiya aapko dekh raha tha .
Wo soch raha hai hum dono couple nahi hai isiliye mein ....sorry....
pata nahi kya hui mujhe bas aise hi ....
Neil :- Wo ladkiya mujhe dekh raha hai ?
Avni :- Hmm...
Neil :- Unko batana hai na ki mein sirf Tumhare hu !..
In shy
Avni with red cheeks
just nooded her head ,
in-return
Neil placing his right hand on back of
her neck
without giving a second thought
placed his lips on hers
bringing her face near his.
Avni eyes widened .
Girls gasped seeing them ,
with a sad hurt faces they turned to
other direction .
Neil didn't kissed Avni
but just sucked her both lips
one by one slowly
taking his own time taking away Avni's breath,
she felt it so hot.
Avni who heard horn sound
understanding their are out
slightly pushing Neil away,
she cupped her red face to get
back to normal form
before Abhimanyu return back .
Neil smiled widly seeing
his cute Fiance.
Neil :- Agle baar koi mujhe dekh raha hai toh , bina kuch soche pure hakk se mujhe
lips pe kiss kar sakti ho Jaan .
Tab mein bahut kush hoga ...
Avni :- Shayad...wo..
Neil :- Jis din humare pehle kiss hui tha
tab bhi tumhare labho pe koi lipstick or lipgloss nahi hai aur aaj bhi .
Mujhe tumhare lips ki taste bahut jyada pasand arahi hai Sweetheart .
Bahut sweet ho tum .
Avni :- Neil ji please....
mujhe bahut embrrassing feel horahi hai .
Neil :- Kal shaam ready rehna .
Avni :- Ready kyu ?
Neil :- Kyunki kal humare pehle dinner date hai .
Shaadi ke pehle .
Socha har din ek Date pe jao par aise hui nahi hai .
Jo hum sochta hai wo nahi hona hi zindagi hai na.....
isiliye kal ka shaam plan kiya .
Humare pehle dinner date keliye .
Agar kal bhi miss hui toh shaadi ke pehle hume koi memories nahi rahega sirf shaadi ki baad wala rahega .
Avni :- Shaadi ke pehle ya baad kya farak padhta hai Neil ji .
Akir hum saat pehi hi rahega na .
Bahut sare yaade banasakte hai hum .
Neil :- Bahut jyada farak hoga Avii .,
Avni :- Teek hai mein kal shaam ready rahungi .
Abhimanyu :- Sorry late hogai .
Ghar chale Avii , Dadi ki call ayi hai .
Avni :- Ha bhai .
Neil :- Mein bhi chalta hu .
Abhimanyu :- Hum saat pe chal sakta hai Neil .
Neil :- Dono two different locations pe hai Abhi .
Mehta house North side hai aur
Khanna mansion south side .
Abhimanyu :-Ok then see you .
Neil :- Avni , one minute .
I have something for you .
Going near his car
coming back to Avni ,
Neil had handover a rectangle gift packed box asking to open it after reaching home.
Kissing Avni forehead
hugging Abhimanyu ,
Neil left the place and so does
Avni and Abhimanyu after bidding bye to
Sid and Raman dada .
Reaching home
saying Good night to family
freshing up ,
sitting on bed Avni hurridly
opened the gift
only to see it is a dress
with some accessories and note sticked
to the dress .
Reading the note she smiled and blushed hardly .
Note reads :-
A beautiful dress to my beautiful rose.
I hope to see you in this dress
all clad for me Love for our first ever
dinner date followed by infinity dates.
Will pick you sharp 5:00pm ,
be ready for me Mia ,
only for me .
Yours Neil Ji...❤
Opening their chat Avni smiled seeing
Neil's dp .
It is of their engagement pic .
She messaged him saying
"Loved the dress Neil ji . It is as beautiful as you .
Will be ready on time only for you😘.
Neil who is still driving the car hearing the notification sound stopping the car sideways ,
smiled widely seeing Avni message .
The more he started to feel for her the more he is loving himself .
Seeing her dp of whatsapp which is their engagement pic with full on smiles,
he taking the screenshot of it saving and then sending the same to Avni with a Kiss emikon he droved to Khanna mansion .
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Next day
Mehta house.
Avni room .
Standing infront of huge straight mirror ,
seeing her own reflection which is looking unlike her ,.
Avni confused yet blushed .
Confused because she is looking so different ,
so sexy and gorgeous hella Hot
that she didn't knew she is indeed this hot and sexy till date.
Her curves are hugging perfectly to her structure .
Thinking how do Neil knew about her measurements ,
smiling thinking to ask him in person kissed her own frame.
Blushed because ,
Neil had gifted her this long cherry red off-shoulder frock for their first dinner date yesterday night after their mini interaction .
Thanking Neil for the beautiful dress , she smiled to herself seeing her own relfection.
Wearing a dark red cherry flavour
glossy lipstick matching with the outfit ,
Right wrist adoring with stone bracelt , left wrist with watch .
Neck is pairing with
a simple stone planinum pendent .
Ring Finger is adoring by her engagement ring .
Wearing Earrings which are cute single stone studs ,.
Curling her long hair in wavy leaving them open totally .
Clicking few selfies sending them to Soma for playing with her ,
Saying dress is gifted by Neil.
Avni calming herself down taking a deep breath
left downstairs.
Mehtas
Who are chatting about marriage in hall sitting in round
stunned seeing Avni .
She is looking so new that no one in the home sawed Avni in such a royal style.
Abhimanyu blinked his eyes twice to see his sister as grown this big that he didn't knew when it happened .
He and every Mehta family understood today why do Avni got these many proposals.
Thought Dayawanti thought it is way more too exposing by shoulders and modern ,
she didn't said anything as she knew it was Neil who gifted her this outfit.
Neela going near Avni taking some khol from Avnis khol filled eyes ,
She gently kept behind Avni ears as protecting her from evil eyes .
Kissing her forehead Neela praised Avni and so do Ashish and Abhimanyu .
The awkwardness which Avni felt till now vanished as ,
before this she didn't become ready like this never.
Neela :- Neil beta is waiting outside Avu , jao .
He as been waiting since 10-mins out .
Abhimanyu :- Andhar aake wo bahar chaligai , chalo lets go.
Avni :- Bhai , mein teek hi lag rehi hu na ? Jyada nehi hui na .?
Abhimanyu :- Kyu..?
tu ye question kiske liye ready hui ho , usi se hi pucho !
My Princess is looking just like a
Real Princess.
Ashish :- Sachi pe Superstar , bahut hi pyari dikh rehi ho . Koi jyada nehi hui hai .
Neela :- Ha . Sachi pe . Mere Avu sab se beautiful hai .
Meri bachi , kab itne khoobsurat bangai pata hi nehi chali .
Dayawanti :- Neil wait kar raha hai Neela . Usko jane do .
Avu , tu time ka chinta mat karo . Neil beta ne kehdi ki thoda late hoga .
Tu enjoy karo bas .
Hume tumpe viswas hai Avuu .
Apna dyan rakhna
Avni :- Jarur Dadi . Mein ati hu .
Bhai aap rehne do , mein jati hu .
Abhimanyu :- Teek hai . Dyan rakhna bacha .
Nodding her head in yes ,
With a nervous smile going out of the house she sawed Neil who is standing right infront of her keeping hands in pocket , wearing goggles .
He is matching with her .
Neil is wearing a red velvet coat and pant paired with black turtle neck t-shirt.
He is wearing the bracelt which Avni gifted him back in airport with watch.
He is looking not less then a greek god ,
Seeing him infront of her ,.
Avni troath dried up.
She glumped hard seeing his pink lips , which she already kissed twice a times.
Erasing the sweath beads on forehead which formed because of seeing the Greek God infront of her ,
she smiled at him who kissed her forehead.
Neil :- Welcome my Queen.
Ek dum Queen jaise lag rehi ho Avii...
Aaj tak mein tum jaise ladki ko dekhi hi nehi Avii....ek pal keliye mere saase rukh gai ,ankho hata hi nehi paa rehi hu...mere samne khade hui Goddess ko dekhte hui...aaj tak maine socha tum bahut jyada beautiful ho , par aaj hi pata chala beautiful se kahi jyada sexy or hot ho at the same time bahut cute .
Khane ko mann kar raha hai Jaan tumhe aise dekhe .
Cherry bomb jaise dikh rehi ho ....
Avni :- Neil ji...hum ghar ke bahar khade hai , koi dekhega .
Neil :- Pata hai iss waqt mere soch kya hai ?
Avni :- Nahi...
Moving near her ears inhaling her lavender perfume , kissing her neck lightly he whispered making Avni jump in her place.
Neil :- Agar humare shaadi hogai hoti toh ab tak tum mere neeche hoti aur mein tujhe bahut jyada pyaar kar raha hota .
Hum tab dinner date pe nehi ,...bed pe suhagrat mana rahi hota .
I am unable to control seeing you this hot Avii ,...you are a living Goddess Love...
Seeing her red face , smiling controlling himself making her sit in car ,
he droved the car to the destination.
The whole ride Avni kept silent as she didn't come out from Neil's words , where Neil kept kissing her ring finger time to time which are classped with his.
In other 30-mins
Both of them reached their destination where Neil planned their dinner date .
Getting down the car once Neil opened the door ,
Avni sawed Neil who held her hand again and started to walk with him ,
to the direction he is leading .
Avni is wearing heels and is walking slowly so that she might not trip ,
where Neil understanding her accomodating with her walking slowly hand in hand.
Avni :- Neil ji , hum kaha hai ? Yeha pe koi dikh nehi raha .
Neil :- Ye humara private villa hai Avii . Koi nehi hoga yeha pe hume chodke .
Pehle mujhe laga , tumhe acha nehi lagega sirf hum dono dinner pe , par ab tumhe aise dekhe lag rahi hai , mein Acha kaam kiya .
Avni :- Kyu aise lag reha hai aapko ?
Neil :- Kyuki tumhe aise dekhne ka hakk sirf mera hai aur kisi mard ko nahi.
Thank you so much Jaan , mere liye itni achi se sazane keliye .
Avni :- ....
Neil :- Pehle mujhe red bilkul nehi pasand .
Par Jab ye dress dekha tha , pata nehi kyu par laga tumhe ye bahut suit hogi isiliye liya par ab tumhe aise dekhne ke baad pata chal raha hai , ye colour tumhare colour hai .
Ye outfit tumhare liye hi stich kiya gai hai.
Avni :- Aapka choice itni achi hai mujhe nehi pata tha .
Aapko kaise pata hai .....
Neil :- Kya pata hai ?
Avni :- Aapko pata hai mein kiske bare mein baat kar rehi hu .
Neil :- Mujhe pata hai Darling , par tumhare muah se sunna chahta hu.
Avni :- Aapko ...aapko kaise pata mere..me..re..mere measurements ke bare mein.
She closed her eyes tightly after uttering what she wanted to know,
Neil smiled seeing her cuteness.
He hugged her tightly making her smile .
She wrapped her arms around his torso listening to his words shying away.
Neil :- Itne baar toh hug kiya hai hum dono ne ., itna bhi nahi pata chalega kya mujhe , mere Sweetheart ki measurements kya hai...
Mujhe ache se pata hai tumhare wo juicy measurements ke bare mein bhi.
She hugged him tight hearing him.
Avni :- Aap ,mujhe check out kar raha tha har waqt !
Neil :- Check out nahi , pure hakk se dekh raha hu.
Jo mera hai wo mujhe hi dekhna hai na.
Waise bhi batao kya tumhare melons ki size kya hai...?
Avni :- Nahi...bilkul nahi... kya aap har ek jisko bhi hug kare sab ki aise hi dekhta hai aur sochta hai ?
Neil :- Abhi bola na , sab ka nahi .
Sirf mere cheeze dekhta hu.
Avni :- Mein koi cheeze nahi hu .
Aur aur mujhe bhookh lag rehi hai .
Neil :- Topic change kar rahi ho ?
Avni :- Ha kyuki mujhe nehi baat karna uske bare mein .
Aap toh aaj bahut shameless baate kar raha hai.
Neil :- Mere andhar ka ye Bhavna tumhe hi jagaya hai Avii...
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Completing the dinner
Which was a candle night one ,
sitting opposite each other,
feeding in middle .
Avni enjoyed the cold breeze while devoring the whole some flavours in her plate.
Her eyes didn't left the plate and sky while
Neil's eyes never left Avni's
Plum lips , swan neck ,
kissable shoulders ,
tempting mole just above her lips , and tempting eyes .
Though it is a huge villa ,
Neil still didn't let Avni explore the house yet .
Both of them are in garden ,
which is totally decorated with fairy lights from the way to trees giving the night twilight beautiful look.
Leading her to a place
Where the whole Tree is decorated with fairy lights and curtains ,
White Cloth is placed on grass,.and some on tress,.
beside the "Love" board written.
Neil sat on his knees.
Avni gasped seeing Neil on knees ,
She knew something like this is going to happen ,
but didn't expected it to be in this way , this early.
Gently Neil hold her hands ,
Neil :- Avnii....
Hearing her name from him at this particular time ,
feeling he called her in hoarse voice sending chills down her spine Avni stood still gazing right into his deep chocolate brown eyes.
Neil :- Tumhse milne se pehle mujhe sachi pe Pyaar , Shaadi ye sare shabd tak sunne mein ajeeb lagta tha , bilkul bhi interest nehi hote the .
Pehle toh sirf Business ke bare mein soch raha tha , par ab kaam karte waqt har pal , tumhare bare mein soch raha hu .
Kabi nehi socha tha , jo ladki ko maine dekhe pehle nazar pe pasand ki , bachi sochke chodi ,...ussi se mera shaadi hogi ek din .
Aur mein wo shaadi pure dil se kushi se karuga ye toh kabi nehi socha tha sachi pe Avni .
Tumne mujhe badal diya , wo bhi bina kuch kare , kahe .
Avni :- Neil ji...
Neil :- Tumhare muah se ye mere naam sunne keliye mein subah se raat tak intizar kar raha hu har roj , kab tumhare classes khatam hoga , kab mein tumse baat karpata , kab mein mil pata tumhe ...sab sirf yehi sochta raha hu har roj har pal.
Mujhe pehle jab bhi koi mere naam se bulata toh koi bhi ladki , uski awaz pe ek seduction tone hoti thi and trust me Jaan , mein sirf usse bachane keliye States jana shuru kiya .
Kyuki yeha pe rahu toh Mom, kisi na kisi blind date pe jane ko kehti thi kabi kabi Bebe bhi bolti thi .
Sirf undono ko naa nehi kar pata bina mann jata tha mein blind dates par .
Avni :- ........
Neil :- Par jab tumhe pehle baar wo barish pe dekhi thi ek dum peacock jaise nache bache ki kushi se ,
jab mein pehle baar tumhare awaz sunni hu Abhimanyu ke phone pe ,
Jab mein tumhare soch , thinking samjha ,
Jab mein tumhare photo dekha aur
Sab se badi baat
Jab mein tumhe pehle baar saree pe dekha fest pe gaana ghate waqt ...ussi waqt mein kho gai tha thumpe.
Avni :- Kya....
Neil :- Pata hai Avii , ek angel se batao toh mere toh love at first sight hai.
Jab uss din tumhe barish pe nachte hui , enjoy karte hui dekhi ...tabi mere dil pe ek ajeeb se sukoon mehsoos kiya maine .
Aur mein sure tab hui tha Jab tumhe pehle baar Mehta house pe mere rishte keliye dekha gai tha.
Uss din mujhe aaj bhi ek ...ek dream jaise sab yaad hai Mia...kaise tum mujhe dar se dekh rehi thi , tumhare dil ke dhadakan jor se dhadhak rehi the ....tumhare wo ankhe...sab.
Avni :- Neil ji...
Neil :- Ha Love , love at first sight listening from me , might be cliche .
But trust me Jaan , it is true .
Tab mein bhi wo sare feelings ko dur rakha par jab tumhare photo dekha tha , mujhe aise laga "I should not leave you" .
Maine time tumhare liye manga , true par uss time pe mein aur bhi hosakta toh jyada Pyaar pe padhgai tumhare .
Everyday I am falling harder in your Love , Jaana.
Maine uss pal hi humare zindagi ko subah se raat tak , jab se hum cuddle karke ek hi roof ke neeche ek hi bed pe soye aur uthe tab sab se jyada pyaar karte waqt aur hum saat pe budhe hote waqt ...sab kuch maine dekhli Jaan.
Avni :- Bas kardiziye Neil ji please...I can't take more .
Mujhe pata hai aap mujhse pyaar kar raha hai aur shayad ye sunnke ab jana ki bahut jyada kar raha hai...
Her eyes turn glassy listening to his honest confession , sitting on her knees infront of him
stopped him for saying anything further by resting her plam on his lips ,
Neil's eyes turnes teary and he didn't knew it untill unless Avni erased his tears filled eyes flowed down his cheeks.
Avni :- Ab tak aapne kaha maine sunni , ab mein kahugi aap sunnogi.
Aaj tak sirf aapne aapki pyaar ki baate kaha , par aaj mein aapke bare mein kya feel karti hu , kehna chahti hu Neil ji .
Ab nehi kahu toh shayad kabi nehi karpougi mein .
Par mujhe nehi pata hai Neil ji ki aap mere liye kitne important hote jaa raha hai lafzo pe kaise kehna hai.
Aaj tak bachpan se ab tak bahut sare log ne propose kiya tha , par koi bhi mujhe pasand nahi ayi thi.
Jo aya tha wo bas normal crush tha .
Par ab jab mein soch rahi hu pyaar or crush ke difference mujhe ab pata chal rehi hai ...mere shayad hi koi Crush tha hi nehi .
Jo mein crush samjha wo sirf ek Attraction tha .
Agar aise dekhi toh aap mere Pehle Crush ho Neil ji .
Pata hai kyu .?
Neil :- Kyu...?
Avni :- Kyunki mere liye aapke ye smile important hai Naksh ka nehi .
Kyunki mein aapke wajse kushi se smile karti hu Naksh ke wajse nehi.
Kyunki aap mere Kushi ki reason bante jaa raha hai Neil ji , Naksh nehi.
Kyunki Naksh se baate karte waqt wo dekhte waqt mujhe achi lagti thi, par mein har roj aapke chehra dekhe ,baate karke day ko start karne ka har roj intizar kar rehi hu ,
I feel very bright and be less lighter with worries when you are with me.
Kyunki aapke saat Neil ji , mujhe sab kuch different feel hoti hai.
Kyunki jab bhi aap mere samne ho , ya mein aapse baat karti hu , kisi aur ke bare mein sochta tak nehi .
Jab bhi class pe hoti hu , aapki message ati hai mein tab se lekhe aapse baat karne waqt tak concentrate nahi kar pati class pe.
Kyunki mein jindagi pe pehle baar jealous feel kiya tha kal raat ko Neil ji , kabi Naksh aur kisi aur ke saat nehi feel ki.
Kyunki mein aapke saat Safe , Secure , Shielded feel karti hu Neil ji aur kisi ke saat nehi .
Neil :- Avnii....
Avni :- Ha Neil ji ,.
Mujhe khud nehi pata tha mein ek din itne sajke kisi aur ke liye ready hongi par hui mein aaj ready aapke liye.
Agar ye Pyaar nehi toh mujhe nehi pata hai Neil ji pyaar hota kya hai .
Neil :- Maine socha , tumhe surprise du candle night dinner date ke saat apne dil ka baate kehke ,
par ulta mujhe hi mera jindagi ka sab se jyada kushi milega ye kabi nehi socha tha maine .
Mein ab samjha ki , Bebe kyu kehti thi ...Arrange marriage or Love marriage nehi hoti hai sirf Marriage hi hoti hai.
Avni :- Kyuki Shaadi pe do logo ki dil judna , do families milna hi nahi balki do log humesha humesha keliye jindagi bar judne keliye Kiya jata hai shaadi.
Agar wo do ladka ladki pe Trust , Understanding , Supporting , Respect dena , Appreciate karna , Pyaar karna na ho toh , wo koi bhi Shaadi ho...Arrange ya Love jyada din tak tikhte nehi hai .
Bachpan se Maa , Papa , Dadi sab ne mujhe aur Bhai ko yehi bolta tha.
Shayad mujhe wo sab nibane ka waqt agai hai .
Mein wo baate ka real meaning ab samjhi.
Neil :- Jo bhi ab tum kahe Avii , wo sab Dadu bhi kheta tha isiliye mein aise hu .
Aur proud bhi hu , kyunki Ab tum mere hote jaa rahi ho , jitna mein feel kar raha hu utne hi Tum bhi kar rehi ho.
I Love You , Miss.Avni Mehta soon to be Avni Neil Khanna.
Avni :- Me too Neil ji .
Neil :- Socha , grand way pe propose karne ko par...tumhe aur mujhe dono ko simple tadika hi pasand hai toh aise plan kiya.
Avni :- Proposing har waqt grand way pe nahi balki Simple yet Classic ,honest hona chahiye Neil ji .
Jo aapne kiya bilkul waise.
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Avni :- Ye place bahut hi achi hai , it's simply fetching.
Neil :- Mujhe tumhse jyada nehi dikh raha hai Avii.
Avni :- Aapki ye thought bahut achi hai trees pe decorate karne ka.
Neil :- Tumhse jyada nehi.
Avni :- Neil ji..
Neil :- Can I Avnii ?...can't control more.
As both of them are standing in middle of a way side to poll where a huge tree braches are decorated with fairylight all round , candles side ways ,
Both Avni and Neil are standing infront of each other .
Avni is standing close to Neil , hands classped around his neck where he is holding her throught waist tightly.
Sensing his gaze on her lips , she licked them nervously never the less she parted them instead of answering him, understanding she permitted Neil without giving a second thought pressed his lips with hers which he had been controlling since then.
He gently started to suck her lower lips, taking the whole botton lip in his erasing the red glossy cherry lipstick she had on.
Moving to upper lip he sucked the lipstick hardly making her moan .
Till date both of them kissed but not passionetly .
Neil :- Mujhe tumhare ye lafzo pe bina koi lipstick hi pasand hai Avni...tum jitne bhi lipstick lagao mein wo utardunga bilkul aise humesha.
Ye jitne bhi shades hai mein khareed ke dunga tumhe par wo utardunga bhi maine hi.
Ye lips sirf mere hai "Aye".
Avni :- "Aye" ?
Neil :- Chinese pe "Love" hai "Aye" means.
Avni :- Wǒ ài nǐ Neil ji .
Neil :- Wǒ ài nǐ Avni .
Avni :- Aapko pata hai maine kya boli ?
Neil :- I Love You in chinese . Bhool gai , mujhe chinese ata hai .
Avni :- Isiliye maine wo word pratice ki aapko bolne keliye.
Wǒ ài nǐ Neil ji...
Neil :- Mujhe wo teen magical words humare language pe sunna hai Avii .
Hindi pe
Avni :- Jald bolugi par ab nehi...
Smiling Neil closed his lips with her, taking her both lips in his .
Avni's hands traveled to his hair cluching them tightly ,
his hands are moving slowly around her cruves making her moan in kiss , she is not able to kiss as much as he is kissing.
Neil is only kissing her lips, but not her passionetly .
He is sucking them slowly and then fastly as he wished.
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