Important Note :- Don't Skip .

This is Negative comment or a Positive one , I don't know but one thing is very clear by these comments were ,
My Writting skill is not good , am not penning the chapters well .
No one is instrested in the way am writing them , and this was the question I have asked many times to share with to all the readers....till date I have asked "say me if any fault in my writing skills or story , I will change them"....but naahh no one never said me anything .
Never responded .
And that's the reason why no one is ready to read and vote my story cause it is not Worth reading ....
That girl had just by reading two chappies said it is not worth reading and discontinued reading by commenting as such......

Am not a North Indian , I doesn't know much of Hindi , how much I knew , am trying to showcase the emotions with the words and the emotions I knew .

My intention is to showcase all the emotions but not only of "AvNeil"'s ,but every relation as they are important in one life .
And am just trying to show those beautiful relations what brother and sister hold , what bond will a girl have with her family , parents , siblings and last but not least her sasural and her Hubby .
Every relation is important and I don't like avoiding all other charectors and showcase only AvNeil .

You guys will have AvNeil for sure , more of their movements , love but also will have other charectors and emotions too....
Only with Lovers we can't showcase the story or Lead the life .
It's highly impossible .

I hope you readers have understood by now my writing and stories are different from all other AvNeil stories .
I like to prefer Realistic then Fantatices...and trying to pen them well .

If the writing is not good , not liking the way how am presenting it then please say me...I will try to change .....just do me this favour....
If you are not liking the story then also say me I will try to change the story too....but please what ever it is do say in comments....if not I can never knew what wrong am doing in presenting the chapters....
It's a humble request please dear readers.......do me this one favour .

Reading and not responding is a not good thing.

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I don't know how the chapter is , good or bad but it is totally and whoelsomely dedicated to my dear Bestie leenasomaa my Janaoaoo.
I hope you like the chappie Janaooa.

Also Rajiyaalam , dear I dont know the chappy is good enough for your waiting or not , Tried my best to present good .
Hope you will not get dissappoint .
If you get dissapointed then please excuse me

Also to all the readers sorry for not updating , hope you all like the chapter.
Many of them were excited for next , am sorry in advance if the chappy doesn't reach your wait and excitment .

Please everyone do comment and share the reviews.....
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Abhimanyu :- Papa , mein Khanna office jaa raha hun , Neil ke saat new investors ke saat humare new project ka meeting keliye .

Ashish :- Abhi , ghar pe shaadi ka functions shuru hone wala hai .
Tu business pe busy hoga toh wo kaam kaun dekhega ?
Hum destination wedding karne wala hai , toh uske liye ab sehi sare arrangements dekhna hai na .
Time bahut hi kaam hai humare pass ,
ab agar hum venue , hotel book nahi ki toh pata nahi jaha hum chahte hai shaadi karne ka wo venue available hoga ki nahi .

Abhimanyu :- Papa , aap chinta mat karo . Mein sab dekh lunga .

Ashish :- Tum chahte toh Avu ki sare kushi ka reason tu ho , uski shaadi tumhare hisab se uske marzi se kushi se hona hai isiliye mein itna nahi dekh raha hun ye sab .
Ab se tu shaadi ka dekhlo mein business ka dekhlunga .
Sab ko invite karna hai , mein aur Neela karlega wo .
Aaj shaam ko wedding card select karna jana hai hum sab ko toh jaldi ajao ghar .

Abhimanyu :- Ha papa , mein hi kaha ,
Avii ki shaadi ka pure respsonsibilty mere hai aur mein wo nibaoga bhi .
Mein chahta hun Avii ki shaadi as a brother sab mein dekhu aur Aapko aur Maa ko rest doon .
Bas ye ek meeting hone ke baad aap hi dekhlo business ka mein dopahar ko ane ke baad Venue book karduga aaj hi aur shaam ko ready bhi milega hum dono wedding cards dekhne jayega .

Ashish :- Ye toh humare ghar pe pehle function hai Abhi , aur mere Superstar ki shaadi hai mein rest lunga kyu aur kaise... !
Sab best chahiye mujhe mere Bacha keliye .
Tu jitna Avu se related hai wo dekhlo mein baki ka dekhluga.
Kyunki last pe Avu ko tumhare pasand hui cheeze hi pasand hai .
Jaise bhai waise behan .

Abhimanyu :- Kyunki wo mere bacha hai , mujhe bata hai usko kya ache se pasand ayega aur suit hoga .
Chalo ab mein jati hu .

Ashish :- Sunno toh Abhii , jaldi kya hai . Kuch samai baad Mein aur Neela Khanna's ke pass jaa raha hai , Maa mandir jaa rahi hai isliye tu ek kaam karo ,
Shaam ko Avu ko college se pickup karke seede shop pe ajana .
Mein location bejta hun tujhe shaam ko .

Abhimanyu :- Acha teek hai Papa .
Ab mein jaa raha hu .

10:30am
Khanna Office .
Prakash is sitting in his cabin having a word with Manger
while
Neil is sitting in his cabin sipping green tea reading a file .
His eyes hold emotionless
yet angry .
DD is sitting infront of Neil seeing his reaction .
After meeting Prakash ,
greeting him
Abhimanyu
entered into Neil's cabin .

Abhimanyu :- Hi Neil .

Neil :- Hi Abhimanyu .

Abhimanyu :- Good morning DD .
Ye kya subah subah itna serious hai tu .

DD :- Serious mein kaha hu Abhi bhai ?

Abhimanyu :- Tu nahi Neil hai .
Kya baat hai Neil , itna serious kyu ho ?

Neil :- Kuch nahi Abhi .
Bas ek profile padhke ajeeb lag raha hai toh wohi soch raha hun .

Abhimanyu - Kiske bare mein ?

Instead of answering him
Neil forward the file to Abhimanyu .
Seeing the file
Abhimanyu smiled looking at Neil understanding why Neil is so angry .

Abhimanyu :- Kuan tha wo uss din bol raha tha , kisi se bhi Avii baat kar sakte hai . Jealous nahi hun and all .

Neil :- Abhi...mein sachi pe uss din react nahi ki , jealous nahi hui kyunki mujhe normal laga aur jab Avni ne bola wo ladka Avni ko subject pe concentrate karne ko kaha ,
wo teek laga par ab mujhe acha nahi lag raha hai...

Abhimanyu :- Isiliye tu uss ladke ka bare mein pure investigation karke profile mangwaya !.
Waise ispe itni gussa hone wala kaunsi baat hai Neil ?

Neil :- Gussa nahi bas...
tune ye dekhi Parth Samthaan ek bahut hi badi business man ka beta hai .
Wo bachpan pe Avii pade hui school pe padhi .
He was Avii , super super senior in school .
Dono ne ek hi school pe padha par phir bhi kaise Avni nahi jaana Parth ko .!

Abhimanyu :- Kyunki tab Avii bachi thi .
Jab Avii badi hui tab Parth ka 10th complete hoke chaligai school se .
Dono ko 5-years gap hai .

Neil :- But Parth ko Avni pata hai .
He still remember her .

Abhimanyu :- Isiliye toh uss din mein Avii se thoda gussa ki .

Neil :- Parth pyaar karta hai Avni se ?

Abhimanyu :- Ab ka nahi pata par bachpan pe Parth hi pehle ladka tha Avii ko propose karne wala .

Neil :- Kyaa....?
Tu mujhe ab ye baat keh rahi ho .

Abhimanyu :- Pehle mein bhi sure nahi tha Neil uss din , ....
Parth ko itni saal baad dekhne wo hai ki nahi samjhi par jab mein uske bare mein jana tab clarity aya wo aur ye dono ek hi hai .

DD :- Parth sir ab tak Paris pe tha ,
teen saal pehle hi India wapas aya hai .
Wo bahut hi smart , talented insaan hai .
Aur uska company humare company se bas dho steps peeche hai , ....
Prakash sir soch raha tha wo agle saal tak hume cross karke aage chala jayega ....

Neil :- Tab ka tab dekhte hai DD , ache se pata hai mujhe kaise aage rehna hai .
Waise acha hai ki Avni ko yaad nahi hai Parth .

DD :- Abhi bhai , aapko kaise pata chala Parth hi pehle insaan the Bhabhi ko propose karne wala ?

Abhimanyu :- Behan hai wo mera .
Sab kuch janta hun uske bare mein .
Mere aur Avii ka ye secreat hai ki uski har
ek baat bina hesitate kare mujhse share kare aur mein uske saat .
Jab bhi kuch baat hui mein aur Avii sad hai toh....
Papa aur Maa hum dono ke ek dusre se aake puchte hai ki kya hui Avii ko wo sad kyu the and wise versa... .

Neil :- Parth ko Avni accept nahi ki ,,... kyu ?

Abhimanyu :- Ab wo accept kiya hota toh ab tu usse shaadi nahi karta na .
Waise Neil ,
tab Avii 10-yrs ki thi usko pyar ke bare mein kaise pata hoga .
Wo seede mere pass aake puchi ye
I Love You matlab kya tha uss din ....
Jab mein puchi ab kyu ye doubt aya toh tab Avii ne bola ek ladka Parth ke naam se usko school se ghar ate waqt bola .

DD :- I love you ka meaning sab ko pata hai na bhai ....

Neil :- Shutup DD tab Avii 5th class the,
5th class ladki ko kaise pata hoga uske real meaning .
Wo yehi samjhegi na I Love you family se related hai , aur uppar se Dadi hai hi strict .

DD :- Parth sir itne chote ladki se kaise pyaar ki tab ?
Tab toh wo bahut bade the aur Bhabhi ek bachi thi .

Abhimanyu :- Ladka hai , thodi na har ek ko Behan jaise dekhega ,bachi jaise dekhega ? Waise bhi , pehle bahut protect karta tha wo school pe Avii ko ,
mujhe laga brother sochke kar raha tha
par jab real reason pata chala , Avii ko usse dur rehne ko kaha .

DD :- Sehi kiya bhai aapne ...

Abhimanyu :- Toh ab kya karne wali ho ye profile se Neil ?
Ye sab chodke shaadi pe focus karo Neil .
Aur ha ye raha aaj meeting ka file .
Iske baad mein ye project pe shaadi ke baad hi focus kar sakta hun .
Agar tujhe koi problem nahi hai toh ...

Neil :- Mujhe kya problem hogi Abhi,
mein bhi yehi soch raha hun.
Mom toh pure strict rule rakhi jyada kaam na karna kaha pe bahar mat jana .
Ab tob sirf 20-din bacha hai shaadi keliye toh shopping ke hi pure samai chala jayegi .

Abhimanyu :- Lagta hai kafi kush aur excited hai tu .
Mein kabi nahi socha mere chota bacha tujhse shaadi karegi ,
aur hum Khanna's ki family members hoga .

Neil :- Kush aur excited toh kafi hun mein Abhimanyu .
Mein bhi kabi nahi socha tha Avni se shaadi karunga ,
kyuki kitne bhi na soche wo mujhse choti toh hai bahut hi .
Par haa ye age difference bhi humare liye bahut sahi hai .
Mujhe bahut pasand aya .

DD :- Ab mein samjhi , agar Neil bhai Avni bhabhi se ab shaadi kar raha hai toh bachpan pe Parth sir Bhabhi ko propose karna,
pyaar karna bhi sahi hai .

Neil :- Chup raho DD tum , kuch bhi bagwas karta rehti ho .

DD :- Sorry bhai ... Toh kya shaadi ki preparations start hogai Abhi bhai ?

Abhimanyu :- Aaj shaam wedding card select karne se shuru hone wala hai DD .
Neil tu araha hai na?

Neil :- Shaam ko mein free hi hu Abhi .
I will be there .

Abhimanyu :- Aaj pure din Maa , Papa busy hai bahar , shaam ko directly Avii ko pick karke ana hai mujhe .
Ye meeting ke baad Venue book karna uske baad Avii ke pass jana .
Mere shcedule set hai .

Neil :- Avii ko tu pick karega ?
Wo apne scooty pe jati na college !

Abhimanyu :- Ha .
Par Maa aur Dadi ne Avii ko scooty use karne nahi de raha hai kyunki Avni ki skin kharab na ho pollution aur sun ki wajahse .
Avii jaldi tan hojati jai , aur rashes ajati hai .
Isiliye .

Neil :- Agar tujhe teek hai toh kya mein Avii ko pick kardu ? Shaam ko !

Abhimanyu :- Aaj tak koi Avii ko mujhe chodke "Avii" kehke nahi bulaya hai ,
kyunki mujhe nahi pasand , mere Avii ko mein chodke koi aur usko uthne pyaar se bulaye .
Par ab jab tu uski fiancee ho ,
aur uthna hi pyaar kar rahi ho Avii ko toh ....
tum mujhe uske liye permission lena jaruri nahi hai Neil .
Tuhi pick karlo Avii ko shaam pe ,
mein tab tak kuch aur kaam karta hun . Meeting dekh leta hu .

DD :- Sir , meeting shuru hone wala hai toh hum chale .

Abhimanyu :- Wahh ab tak bhai bola aur ab Sir , itne asan se tu personal se professional banjata hai DD .

Neil :- Wo hai aise .
Toh mein ye meeting khatam karke Avii ke pass jata hu tum dono baki ka settlement dekhlo .
Aaj jitna hosakta hai uthna kardo,
iske baad hum ye project pe focus Shaadi ke baad hi karega toh DD ache se save karke rakhna ye files .

DD :- Sure sir .

.......

12:30pm
Avni college

Soma :- So after 20-days tu single nahi raha iske baad tujhe koi propose nahi kar sakta hai .
Ek baar soch Jaan , kitne ladke ka dil dukhaya hai tune....
ab tak humare class pe kisi ko nahi pata about the marriage , kab bolne wali ho ?

Avni :- Shaadi ke baad seede annouce karungi .
Agar ab mein shaadi ka bolu toh...
pure half class uss Nithin ka friends hai usko pata chalgai aur kuch gadbud kare shaadi pe toh ???

Soma :- Wo ab tak nahi aya class keliye uss din ke baad .
Uppar se tu Neil Khanna se shaadi karne wali ho,
kya wo aise hi chodega Nithin ko agar wo kuch gadbud kiya shaadi pe toh ?
Kya tumhare bhai chodega ?? .
Itna mat soch tu baby...

Avni :- Hmm tu sahi bol rahi ho .
Waise bhi mujhe koi shock nahi hai bolne ka ye baat kisi se .

Soma :- Par ab tu nahi bole toh class pe koi aur bataye toh humare jo bhi friends hai wo sad aur gussa hoga na , ye kehta hai
ki Avni aise hume bhi nahi batayi uske shaadi ki bare mein and all .

Avni :- Tu sahi hi bol rahi ho , Soma .
Humare over dramatic friends aise hi sochte hai .
Waise bhi jab mein Neil ji se kushi se shaadi kar rahi hu toh uspe hide karna ki baat hi nahi ati .
Ek kaam karte hai aaj shaam ko sab party dekhe pure class ko bolte hai .

Soma :- Party shaadi ke baad dena ab keliye bolna bas.

Avni :- Uff my jealous Soma ...
kya karu mein tumhare .
Party hi toh hai...
Time God Neil ji tujh jaise possessive , jealous nahi hai .

Soma :- Tu mere iklota friend hai mujhe nahi pasand tu kisi se baat kare , party toh dur ki baat .
Waise bhi woha pe koi aise insaan nahi hai jo sachi pe party deserve karta hai .
Party dena hai toh shaadi ke baad dena kyunki ab tu de bhi de wo log shaadi ka bhi party mangega .
Uppar se Neil ji ab nahi hai possessive tumhare liye par aage jarur hoga .
Mein bhi pehle normal tha na kuch din baad possessive hone shuru kiya kyunki tu aise hai ki sab tujhe hi chahiye jo mujhe
na pasand....
same Neil jiju ke saat bhi wohi hoga dekhna .

Avni :- Tab ka baat tab dekhte hai .
Par haa agar Neil ji bhi tujh jaise hogai toh...mere kya hoga...
mein nehi jeel sakti dho dho possessive insaan mere life pe .
Actually Dho nehi teen , bhai bhi hai na .
Toh reception pe bulati hu .
Baat khatam .

Soma :- Ha sab se pehle number pe ata hai Abhi bhai tumhare possessive list pe .
Ab mujhe nahi pata tu kya karogi par jaake Mom , Dad ko tuhi mujhe tumhare shaadi keliye bejne ko kaho .
Wo mere baat nahi manrahi hai .
Uppar se shopping bhi karna hai ....
bahut kam time hai ye sab kaise hoga..
SPA bhi jana hai mujhe...haawwww.

Avni :- Shaadi mere hai ya tumhare ?

Soma ;- Tumhare ?
Par mein bhi best dikhna hai na .
Mere bestie ki shaadi hai mujhe pure enjoy karna hai , sab se beautiful dikhna hai tujhse toh kam hi .
Kya pata mujhe bhi dikh jaye koi handsome ladka shaadi pe...

Avni :- Shayad Neil ji ko cousin brothers hai mein usse kehke tumhare set karwati hu .

Soma :- Agar aise hai toh tu aur mein ek hi ghar pe ....haayee

Avni :- Ek hi ghar kaise hoga pagal ....Hahaha....Bilkul ...mein baat karti hu Uncle , Aunty se kal ghar ake .

Soma :- Aaj kyu nahi ?

Avni :- Kyunki aaj wedding card select karne jana hai .

Soma :- Acha teek hai .

Avni :- Ek minute mein ati hu ,
Neil ji ka call arahi hai . Tu class pe jaa start hogai hoga .

Soma :- Seede bol sakti mujhe privacy chahiye .

Avni :- Samajh gai na ab jao .

Soma :- Bestie bestie na rahi...koi parwa hi nahi hai mere feelings ka...

Avni :- Drama queen , jaa ab .

Reverting the call
she smiled before starting the chat ,

Neil :- Lunch hogai ?

Avni :- Ji , abi kuch samai pehle . Aapka ?

Neil :- Nahi , karna hai .
Wo Abhimanyu meeting pe hai , wo ane ke baad hum dono karega.

Avni :- Bhai aapke saat hai ?

Neil :- Ha .
Abhi ne bola aaj shaam ko tum arahi ho wedding card select karne .

Avni :- Jii...

Neil :- Mujhe laga do din baad phirse tumhse mil paoga par humare family hi hume aur milne keliye moka de raha hai .

Avni :- Kyunki humare family itna bhi tradition nahi hai shayad isiliye .
Dadi toh bahut hi traditional hai par ye sab pe wo kuch nahi bol rahi hai .
Shayad aap bade log hai aur ladke wale hai isiliye...

Neil :- Aur shayad wo bhi chahta hai tum aur mein saat pe jyada waqt bitai taki shaadi ke baad hume khud ki memories hoga jab single rahe tab ka .

Avni :- Aap ,har ek baat mujhse alag sochta hai .
Hum dono itna opposite hai par phir bhi shaadi karne jaa raha hai .

Neil :- Kyunki , shaadi karne keliye kuch match nahi hona chahiye dil ke alawa .
Shaadi aur Pyaar ka matlab hai compromise hona pehle acha nahi lagta par aage dekhe toh wohi sahi lagta hai .
Agar compromise hone ke baad bhi
kush na ho toh tab problems ayega agar wo right time pe slove na kare tab toh alag hone ka soch ayega ,
par wo problem ko slove karke aage bade ek saat tab Pyaar ke sewai ,
understanding ke sewai , Trust ke sewai
kuch nahi dikhta hai .
Jo bhi hai Wife , Husband dono ko hona chahiye ki , saat rahe alag na ho .

Avni :- Aap kitne ache baat karte ho .
Aapko ye sab pe ek book likhna chahiye ,
kya pata koi divorce hi na le koi ye padhne ke baad ?
Alag hone ka soch hi nahi ayega .

Neil :- Baki ka nahi pata par hum dono kabi alag nahi hoga , Ye wada raha .

Avni :- Aapse alag bhi kaun hona chahta hai Neil ji .

Neil :- Aap mujhse pyaar pe padh rahi ho ..! You are falling for me Angel .

Avni :- Mein aapko kab kaha mein aapse pyaar nahi kar rahi hu ?
Bas ab wo baat aapse batana nahi chahti hu .

Neil :- Achaa..!!

Avni :- Jii...aapse baad mein baat karti hu ,
wo class start hogai hai .

Neil :- Bhoolgai class ke bare mein, ok jao , milte hai shaam ko .
See you soon Sweetheart .

Avni :- Ha .
Bye Neil Ji.

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Completing the class
After sharing news
about her engagement and Marriage soon whole class
became silent for a while ,
That was something none of them expected ,
especialy from Avni .
As
when ever topic of marriage arrives ,
she was the first person to say
"I won't marry this early , not untill
and
unless I become Independent ,
settle in my life".

Soma laughed loud
seeing they shocked faces making Avni to hit her hardly on shoulder .
As expected everyone asked for a party coming back from shock ,
Avni gladly invited everyone for reception which
going to held in Mumbai itself ..
When asked for
who is the lucky person marrying the
beauty of whole College ,
Shying hardly Avni said Neil name making everyone gasp .

Neil Khanna is known to whole India
and world ,
he was the Chief guest for their last happened fest .
Everyone knew how damn of a
Handsome hunk , good person he is .
More then Avni marriage news ,
she marrying Neil made
everyone shock .
Everyone knew Avni or anyone are not reachable to Neil Khanna status ,
marrying him is a next to impossible
and
a dream come true ,
the biggest shock .
Leaving them to they own shock
Soma brought Avni out ,
brusting in laugh once both of them are in parking lot .
Avni is a not a crazy girl ,
but
with Soma she becomes one .

Saying bye
Soma went away
as her father is here to pick her up .
Avni standing near gate seeing the time ,
Time to time
in watch huffing roaming here and there waiting for Abhimanyu .
She called him , also messaged
But
there was no reply from him
making Avni to frown
as till date never Abhimanyu avoided her call even when he was busy in meetings
or with cilents .
For him always first priority is Avni
and
only Avni .
Trying to call him once again ,
huffing in angry
she kept waiting for Abhimanyu to lift
the call ,
he didn't lift the call
but
a shining grey Mercedes-Benz AMG GT R stopped in infront of her .

Seeing the car
Avni eyes popped out ,
as this is the new edition from Benz
which is not available in market
is standing
right infront of her.
She is a huge lover of Action movies ,
Cars and Bikes .
Not like typical dreamy girly girls.
Her love for cars are to next level
and
have every small knowelege of Automobiles .

What shocked her more is
Neil coming out of the car
in his hot swage avatar,
he is looking drop dead Handsome
wearing a beautiful black three-piece suit which is stiched to his perfect shape .

Removing the goggles ,

with so much swage
Neil stood infront of Avni
with a smirk seeing her checking him out
where
she stood frozen
by the sight infront of her .
Till date she met Neil many times ,
saw him in suits 100's of times
cause of Magines and interviews
but
today he is looking so much Handsome , personable
that her throat dried up .

Seeing Avni is checking him ,
with a visible smirk
he clicked fingers infront of Avni
bringing her back
to the world .
Avni faceplamed herself knowing
how she was gawking at him few minutes back turning her face side .

Neil :- Don't be embarrass Avii...,
tumhe pura hakk hai mujhe ghorne ka .
Waise thanks for the compliment .

Avni :- Maine koi compliment nahi diya hai apko !.

Neil :- Ha honth se nahi diya par ankho se diya na .
Usse jyada honth bilkul bhi nahi bol sakte hai .

Avni :- Bhai kaha hai ? Aap yeha iss waqt ?

Neil :- Topic change !
Ok , Jana ek hi jagah pe toh mein socha kyu na aapko pick kardu , isiliye Abhi se kehke mein aya .
Kyu ? Koi problem hai ?

Avni :- Nahi koi problem nahi hai , wo bhai ne nahi bola aapke bare mein aap arahi ho isiliye thoda shock tha .

Neil :- Surprise ka bhi cheeze hoti hai Barbie..

Avni :- Kya hum chale ,
sab humare wait kar reha hoga .
Waise ye aapka galti hai kisne bola aapko itna handsome hone ko ?
Kisne bola har baar mujhe aise shock karne ko surprise ki naam se .

Saying with attitude
covering her embarassement
Avni went to car hopping in
leaving Neil to smirk more .
She didn't knew what she said ,
even though she knew what she utter ,
she have no idea how Neil is going to play with her now .
Smiling and blushing a little
remembering her compliment hopping
in driver seat Neil saw Avni is ready
wearing a seat bet .
She smiled seeing him where he reciprocated .

Starting the car engine
took off the road aiming the destination .
While
seeing around and admiring the car
with a wide smile
Avni saw her gifted couple toy is sticked to headrest of the car .
Where
Neil had engraved AvNeil on the botton yellow small rock .

Avni :- Ye bahut hi sundar dikh raha hai yeha pe.
Aapne car pe rakha isko .
Mein ye nahi sochi .
Humare names bhi hai ispe...

Neil :- Mein har waqt ye doll ko dekhna chahta hun jo tumhare yaad dilade mujhe , jyada time toh travel karta rehta hun car pe , ghar pe rakhu toh nahi dekh sakta na
har waqt isiliye mere car pe rakhi .

Avni :- Ye aapka car hai ?

Neil :- Nahi humare car hai .
Humare liye new car liya maine ,
ispe tum aur mein ke alawa aur koi allowed nahi hai .

Avni :- Kyaaa...

Neil :- Ha .

Avni :- Ye toh new model hai ,
kuch mahine pehle aya tha model aur ate ek hafte pe no stock hui market pe ab tak nahi hai ye model narket pe,
toh aap kab kareeda ?

Neil :- Jab model ka plan bahar aya usse pehle hi order dedi maine kyunki mujhe ye model kafi pasand aya hai .
And haa , mein kush bhi hun
iska ride ,comfort aur speed se .
Jaise chahta hu bilkul waise hai .

Avni :- Mujhe bahut pasand aya ye .
Mere favorite company hai .

Neil :- Acha Barbie ko Benz pasand hai .

Avni :- Ha bahut hi.
Sare top companies pasand hai par jyada Benz , Rolls Royce , Bugatti , Jaguar .

Neil :- Wow , sab best companies hai .

Handovering a Big bubbly silk chocolate
to her with left hand ,
with right hand
he turned the wheel making Avni amaze
at his driving skills .

She doesn't knew
how to drive a car .
Many times
she asked Abhimanyu to teach
but
he being protective brother and knowing how well she drives
he saying its not the right time never teached her till date ,
even though
she as been asking him since 3-years now .

Avni :- Aapko kaise pata mujhe slik bubbly pasand hai .

Neil :- It's not hard to know Mia ...

Avni :- Mia ?
Phirse new name .
Aap mujhe kitne names dene wali ho ?
Har din ek ek nayi araha hai...

Neil :- Bahut sare .
Par ye Mia mere sab se fab hai .
So aaj se jyada isse hi bulaoga .

Avni :- Par iska meaning kya hai Neil ji ?
Kya mein isko nick name samjhu ? Permenant wala ..?

Neil :- Khud Jaano.

Avni :- Aise toh ab mujhe Goggle hi karna padega .

Neil :- I never stopped you from Goggling it , Mia ...

Narrowing eyes at Neil
who smiled seeing her cute angry face , taking the phone Avni goggled it .
It is a Spanish word which means
"MINE" OR "MY GIRL" .

Her cheeks turned red
knowing the meaning , she blushed hard .

Neil :- Agápi means "Love" in Greek .
Tum mere pyaar ho , mere ladki ho isiliye Agápi and Mia .
Ab samjhi mera Jaan.

Avni :- Ha....
iska matlab aap mujhe pehle se Love
bularahi ho....

Neil :- Tum mere pyaar ho ,
mujhe bina pata hi hogai ho bahut
pehle hi....
waise I don't mind ab tumhse sirf Neil bulaya toh..., bahut ache feel hoga...
Kab mujhe phirse Neil bulaogi ??
Ab ye mat kaho phirse mujhe bahar jana hai ya tum mujhe chodke kahi pe jana hoga
to only listen my name from your lips ,..

Avni :- Mein aaj tak kisi se mere chocolates share nahi ki , bhai ko chodke par ab se aapse karungi ...aapko chocolate pasand hai na .

Neil :- Topic change phirse....ok ,
mujhe itna bhi nahi pasand chocolate par jab se tum mere zindagi pe aye ho tab se pasand arahi hai .

Avni :- Sachii....

Neil :- Muchii...Avii...

Sharing the chocolate with him ,
both of them started to enjoy their
small journey with lots of talks .

Neil is driving slow
to enjoy his time with Avni
as much as possible before meeting the family ,
as he knew
once Avni meet the family
none of them will let him talk to her
let leaving spending time
with her .
Finally
Neil asked the question
which he kept to himself from morning not to ask her ,
yet
not able to restrain himself from asking
he let the question out ,
Listening his question
Avni frowned a bit but shrugged away
taking it lite ,
normal .

Neil :-Avni...tujhe sab se pehle kaun propose kiya tha ?
Tumhe yaad hai kya wo ladka ?

Avni :- Sab se pehle propose kiya ?
Mujhe toh nahi pata matlab yaad nahi hai
Neil ji wo toh bahut hi purane hai ...
aap kyu puch rahi ho ab ye ?

Neil :- Bas jana chahta hun mujhse pehle kitne log tumhe propose karke finally mein kaunsa number pe aya tumhare propose kiya hui ladke ki list pe .

Avni :- Aise toh mujhe nahi pata , bahut sare log propose kiya hai ab tak ....

Neil :- Wo sab ko chodke mujhe accept kiya tumhe....
kiska matlab mujhpe kuch special hai ...
hai na !!

Avni :- Ofcourse hai ,,,aap toh mere pyaare Neil ji hai na .
Sachi pe Neil ji , aaj tak jitne bhi
ladke propose kare aur mein mila koi bhi
aap jaise nahi tha aur nayi mein unlogo
ke saat itna comfortable or safe feel karti hu jitne aapke saat karti .
Aap sachi pe bahut special hai mere liye .

Neil :- Tum bhi mere liye bahut hi special ho Mia...baato pe nahi keh sakta wo...

Avni :- Aapko kitne ladkiya propose kiya aaj tak ?

Neil :- Teen ya Panch shayad .

Avni :- Bas itna kam...
aap itne handsome ho phir bhi sirf panch ladkiya propose kiya hai !....

Neil :- Handsome hun par ladkiya se dur rehta hun , wo panch log bhi family friends se hai jo mere saat school pe aur college pe padha tha .
Business pe ane ke baad pura dur raha
toh uske baad koi nahi kiya propose ....
pass ane tak nahi diya maine kisi ko...

Avni :- Acha...phir toh mein hi pehle ladki hu jo aapko Pagal ki....
I am proud of myself .

Neil :- Jii .
Mere pehle aur aakiri crush se pyaar aur ab Shaadi karke Patni bane jaa raha hun.
Bolo na Avii...
tumhe yaad nahi hai wo kaun tha tumhare sab se pehle propose kiya ...aur kab .

Avni :- Mujhe sachi pe yaad nahi hai
Neil ji..
koi school pe kiya tha jab mein bahut choti thi...
aapko jana hai toh bhai ko pucho .
Usko sab pata hai aur yaad bhi hota hai . Mujhe jo bhi propose kare uske baad mein bhai ko batati hu so...yeah .

Neil :- Teek hai ab tak kitne log propose kiya....mujhe count chahiye .

Avni :- Ufff...aap kyu aaj ye sab puch rahi ho tab se .
Jitne log bhi propose kiya mujhe ab toh mein aapka hi hone jaa rahi hu na .
Phir bhi aapko jana hai toh ,
Soma ko pata hai usko aur koi kaam nahi hoti hai ye sab yaad rakhne ke alawa .
Usko puchke batati hun aapko baad mein .

Neil :- Ye lo phone , call karke pucho .

Avni :- Aap ko kya hui hai aaj Neil ji...

Neil :- Please Love...

Huffing ,
calling Soma
keeping the call in speaker
Avni kept the gaze on Neil
not understanding why he is so adamant
to know the count of her proposals ...
Neil gave a smile to her understanding
she is slight angry on him .
He holded her hand resting the right hand
on steering wheel ,
he kissed her plam .
Hearing Soma voice from other side ,
Avni averted her gaze from Neil...

Soma :- Kaise mere yaad agai madam ko busy schedule pe ?

Avni :- Neil ji tujhse kuch puchna chahta hai , isiliye call ki .

Soma :- Neil ji mujhse kya puchega ...

Avni :- Khud sunno...

Neil :- Sorry to mind you Soma ,
mujhe kuch jana hai about Avni .
I would be so happy if you could say me till today how many boys had proposed Avni ? Just want to know the count .

Soma :- Avni ko toh aaj tak bahut log propose kiya hai jiju .

Neil :- Count bol sakte ho !!!

Soma :- Approximately 110...usse jyada bhi hosakta hai ...

Hearing her
Neil pulled the break suddenly
in a shock such that
Avni surprised hearing his loud voice ,
by the sudden break
though Avni is wearing a seatbelt
her head was about to hit the side glass
but in nick-time
Neil saved her from hitting the front glass
by keeping his own hands .

Neil :- Teek ho...

Avni :- Ji...mein teek hu .,aapp.. teek ho.

Neil :- Ha .

Soma :- Main samjhi aapka reaction Jiju ,
but this is truth .
Avuu ko har ek saal nahi har ek mahine bhi nahi har ek din ek aur dho kabi kabi
panch log bhi ek hi din pe propose karte the .
Humare college pe 90% ladke Avuu ko propose kardiya hai toh aap socho usko pehle school pe kitne log kiya hoga aur bahar kitne log kiya hoga .
Isiliye mein Avu se possessive hu aur Abhi bhai bhi aur ab aap bhi banjao .

Neil :- Monadikós ....

Avni :- Kya...

Neil :- Aaj tak maine ye nahi sunna aur nayi kabi dekha bhi .
100se jyada log propose kardi my God....
aur wo ladki mere Fiance hai....
How lucky I am .
Awwww..... isiliye shayad mein ab tak single rahi...

Avni :- Aab bilkul bache jaise hai Neil ji.

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