Reviewed by mrsvintage (Alex)
Title of book: what we left behind
Author: stxrkissed
Review:

Title

- the title is nice and simple. I love it.

Cover

- I think the cover is simple and cute, but if you really want to catch people's attention, I advise you to search for a better, stunning cover. I'd rate your current cover 2 out of 5.

Blurb

- straight forward, simple, amazing, dude... I love it. Just the right amount of words, you didn't go overboard with anything, it's perfect.

Grammar

- There weren't any grammar errors and I'm impressed. In the description, I noticed someone edited your book. Though I don't know what exactly he/she edited, it's still perfect.

Punctuation

- Everything was in the right place. There's not much I could say on this since everything was okay.

Plot

- The book is well-paced, I figured out the plot by reading the title but then again I could've been wrong. It might, if not, it does have a plot twist, I smell it from a mile away. Of course, if I'm wrong, that doesn't matter. Everything is good.

Character development

- The way you described your characters, the scenes, everything, at first it was a bit confusing but I shortly realized where you were at. Fei Hong is a whole mood, she's someone your readers can relate to. As I said, the pacing is good, you didn't cut to chase with her and I love that. Some people usually tell us everything about their character in one paragraph, the most are one chapter, so I love this book.

Review

- overall, I think you're gonna get so far with this book. I only think that you should probably give it a better cover, not saying the one that you have right now isn't good, but to attract more people I advise you get a stunning cover.