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Reviewed by: mrsvintage
Title of book: sakura eyes
By: naeomiiii
Review:

Title:

There's not much i can say about the name besides that it is simple and good. It fits the book well.

Cover:

A better cover would be nice. I, honestly, didn't feel like reading your book because of the cover, but I did since I have to and I can't really judge a book by its cover. Maybe finding something more eye-catching, more beautiful, something a little simple and a little manip, then you'll be fine. That will definitely attract more readers.

Blurb:

It's intriguing, it pulled me in instantly. There's nothing to be changed, it's good the way it is.

Grammar:

There weren't any grammar errors so far. That's good.

Punctuation:

The punctuation is a 10 out of 10. You place commas where commas should be, full stops where full stops should be, etc.

Plot:

Well paced, not too slow, not too fast. I got impatient a little since I don't normally read long chapters with a lot of descriptions, etc, but I love how everything fell in place.

Character development:

I love May. She is the cutest little thing I swear to God. I could picture her and her family (mainly because I watch a lot of anime and somehow whilst reading your book I pictured everyone as an anime character, lol). In general, your characters are well developed.

Review:

Overall, I think your book is amazing and you will definitely get far in life with this book. I noticed that you repeat a few words often, which you should work on. Besides that, everything is good. I wish you the best of luck with your book darling! ❤