Judge: Artistic_Pri

Our Definitions of Love by dusky_dreams
Title- 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 5/5
Prologue: 5/5
Grammar: 8/10
Plot: 8/10
Character Development: 8/10
Flow of the story: 7.5/10
Creativity: 4/5
Interest Based on the content: 5/5
Overall Opinion: 9/10
Total: 67.5/75
Title, however is quite common but defines the theme of the story. Cover was great. Blurb was amazing and it was a unique way to describe. Prologue had my heart. All the events that were shown were a perfect curtain riser. Grammar was not good at certain places. Punctuation errors, tense errors and others could be noticed. Plot was commendable but had some commonality midway. Development of characters lacked a little bit. In the starting, the flow of the story was just perfect but as it proceeds, I felt it to be dragged and later on it was speeding. There was indeed creativity in the story. My first impression would be really interesting and as it proceeds, the way characters were portrayed with their blemishes (moreover Naisha's) was interesting.

The Black Diamond by Trial_Writer
Title- 5/5
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 2/5
Prologue: 4/5
Grammar: 8/10
Plot: 8/10
Character Development: 8/10
Flow of the story: 8/10
Creativity: 4/5
Interest Based on the content: 4/5
Overall Opinion: 8/10
Total: 62/75
The title is just perfect for the story- The Black Diamond. Cover was fine but was really simple. There was no much description in the blurb. Prologue was also not there, so considering your first chapter. Well, it was really good. Starting the plot by an accident and a shocked figure is good. Slight grammatical errors and repetition of words. I liked Sarah's character development but Abel was numb sometimes. So, his character can be worked upon. Flow of the story was amazing. Content's creativity could be felt and I really liked it. Content was interesting and I liked the last phase of the epilogue where a different voice conveys all the story and hardships in such simple and soulful words. Overall, I found the story interesting and as a girl, I felt connected to the story and especially Sarah.

You Are My Secret by addiction_01
Title- 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 5/5
Prologue: 4/5
Grammar: 9/10
Plot: 8/10
Character Development: 8/10
Flow of the story: 8/10
Creativity: 4/5
Interest Based on the content: 4/5
Overall Opinion: 9/10
Total: 67/75
Title is understandable according to the plot and context. The cover is really good. The blurb is amazing, giving a perfect description about the characters. Perfect content to captivate. Prologue or rather I say introduction, I liked it. Grammar was just perfect. Just minor errors were there and the use of words was amazing. Plot and the storyline are also great. I would say a well to do pace of the storyline. Taking the views one by one to define their character deeply is satisfying. Creativity was of course there. Choice of plots and words and keeping certain elements was really commendable. But can be still worked on. Interesting it is. A little different concept and commonality defines it perfectly. I am going to follow this. First expression would be exotic read. Arjun, Zivah, Amara and Rehaan- all were promising characters but still need to take upon the male leads.

Dating my Fiancée by littledragon3010
Title- 4/5
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 4/5
Prologue: 3/5
Grammar: 7/10
Plot: 8/10
Character Development: 7.5/10
Flow of the story: 8/10
Creativity: 4/5
Interest Based on the content: 4/5
Overall Opinion: 7.5/10
Total: 60/75
Title suits the context. Cover was fine but it doesn't give any clue about the story. Characters' insight is also not reflected by the cover much. Blurb was good. Focusing on some dialogues and incident insight could enhance. Prologue was giving cognizance about Mohini's character. However, a small riser about Aryaman could have made it better. Grammar was pretty fine but some typos and grammatically incorrect structured sentences were there. Plot was also promising and I instantly felt the urge to read it. The simplicity of the plot gained my interest. Character development was a little dissatisfactory. The way characters of Mohini and Aryaman were introduced through the blurb were little different in the story. Flow of the story was just perfect. Never I felt it being dragged or pushed. Creativity lacked somewhere but humour caught me.

Diagnosis? Love by crystal_queen1234
Title- 4/5
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 3/5
Prologue: 4/5
Grammar: 7/10
Plot: 8/10
Character Development: 7.5/10
Flow of the story: 8/10
Creativity: 3/5
Interest Based on the content: 4/5
Overall Opinion: 7/10
Total: 58.5/75
Title of the story is really unique and prologue can totally define the need of such title. Cover was fine but colour schemes could be checked. Blurb was depicting some turns in the story but dialogues could be written to make it more captivating. Prologue was fantastic, one would keep guessing about the characters being talked. Grammar could be worked. There were tense errors, verb misplacement and misstructuring of the sentences. Plot was awesome but try to bring some strong and unique elements. Character's development was pretty fine. However, glimpses of Armaan- Nidhi friend were missing and also Armaan's character is still hidden. Flow of the story is promising but somewhere felt to be dragged. Content is interesting and has captivated me for sure. My initial expression would be a catchy read it was. However, something lacked but still other things covered up. So, a nice story.

Atypically Married by Brownieislove
Title- 4/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 4/5
Prologue: 3.5/5
Grammar: 7/10
Plot: 8/10
Character Development: 7.5/10
Flow of the story: 7/10
Creativity: 3.5/5
Interest Based on the content: 3.5/5
Overall Opinion: 7.5/10
Total: 59.5/75
The title was connective and fit well with the plot. The cover was beautiful but was somewhat eye- disturbing. The blurb was fine and interesting but didn't you give all the information in the blurb only? Prologue wasn't there so; I am considering your first chapter. Again, too much in the first chapter, keep it little. Grammar was pretty fine, not much errors but as your sentences get long, it creates some grammatical errors. Not much typos also. Character development wasn't much smooth. Soha's behaviour wasn't able to affect the storyline. So, that could be worked. However, Nandini and Manik were well portrayed. Flow of the story, so it was felt it was being dragged sometimes. Creativity was lacking somewhere, the segments had commonality but kept me engrossed somewhere. My first expression would be that it's fascinating. Secondly, just work with the pace and character development, rest it's fully fine.

Tainted Secrets by Abhipsa08
Title- 4/5
Cover: 3.5/5
Blurb: 3/5
Prologue: 4/5
Grammar: 9/10
Plot: 8/10
Character Development: 8.5/10
Flow of the story: 9/10
Creativity: 4/5
Interest Based on the content: 4.5/5
Overall Opinion: 8.5/10
Total: 66/75
Title is amazing, it compelled me to read the story. Cover was really simple; it doesn't appeal the readers to have a look once. The blurb was not convincing much, need to work on it. Dialogues and incidents could be added. . However, if it could connect with their lives somewhere, then it could be mor fascinating. Grammar was pretty fine, like literally no mistakes. However, there were some- typos and punctuation errors. Plot was appealing, a simple meet of protagonists, the dark incident with Ayesha and then Devilish Viaan. Character development was really strong and driving. Flow of the story was pretty fine, moving gradually and then secreting a sense of secrecy. Creativity was there, Ayesha's personal diary had my senses. The content was interesting and eye catching. Well done. My first expression would be, a coercing read it was. Next, cover and blurb could be better and engaging for a person. I am going to follow this story.

His Angel, Her Treasure by anupamarrao
Title- 3.5/5
Cover: 3.5/5
Blurb: 4.5/5
Prologue: 4/5
Grammar: 8.5/10
Plot: 8/10
Character Development: 8/10
Flow of the story: 7.5/10
Creativity: 4/5
Interest Based on the content: 4/5
Overall Opinion: 8/10
Total: 63.5/75
Starting with the title, a simple and little common title. Cover, if it could give a hint to the story, it could be better. Blurb was amazing. Starting with the quote, gradually penning down the summarised plot of the story and the elements were mentioned to evoke one's interest. Prologue was interesting. Starting with introducing and drawing parallels between them and providing guiding questions, it was pretty well. Grammar was well maintained. Just few typos and sentence misstructure were there. Plot was promising, starting with common and guiding it into something unique. Character development lacked a bit. If Sharanya and Aditya's characters could be shown better in terms of early friendship, it could be good. A creative prompt and account. Content was absorbing and riveting. Overall, the story made me kept engrossed and compelled. I adore SharAdi.

Mésalliance by writer_vidhya
Title- 4/5
Cover: 3.5/5
Blurb: 4/5
Prologue: 4/5
Grammar: 8/10
Plot: 7.5/10
Character Development: 7/10
Flow of the story: 7.5/10
Creativity: 4/5
Interest Based on the content: 3.5/5
Overall Opinion: 7.5/10
Total: 60.5/75
The title is chosen well. Although a common meaning, but the way you translated made it unique. Cover, it was fine. But was little dull. The blurb was well written. Dialogues and appeals, it had it all but a take of protagonists was missing. Prologue was eye-catching and had described everything well. Grammar mistakes were there- typos and tense errors. Plot of the story is authentic. Starting from a fair deal between two families and how their next generations had to face it, it was fab. Character development was smooth but sometimes protagonists' flushed development was restraining. Constructive creativity was for sure there, adored that. Overall, I would have been an avid reader of this piece, if I would be a random reader.

Light in my life of darkness by AMBER_0501
Title- 3/5
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 3.5/5
Prologue: 3/5
Grammar: 6.5/10
Plot: 7/10
Character Development: 7.5/10
Flow of the story: 7.5/10
Creativity: 3.5/5
Interest Based on the content: 3.5/5
Overall Opinion: 7/10
Total: 55/75
Major editing required. Title was fine but too big and common. Cover was a little eye- restraining- colour scheme. Blurb had grammatical errors and wasn't much appropriate. Prologue had much of blurb and grammatical errors were there. Grammatical errors were there, punctuation and tense errors most prominently. Plot wasn't much convincing, additional required. Character development was fine, ok. Interest based on the content; well, it was fine. Overall, I would have thought of skipping this story for once- but it's fine.