lololol im working on this project w/ my friends, we wanted to make a short movie with the story I'm writing: A Ribbon Caused My Death.

But I'm lazy af and I never finish what I start so we're probably not using my story but I have everything planned out. I have the whole plot in my head but my writing sucks a lot so I was thinking of maybe perhaps possiBLY (pls self) making a web toon out of it but aofyksfymamyffaooysfkzyf it's hard lol

two paragraphs o wow OMF I JUST HEARD A GUNSHOT WHAT YJE WHT

ok it's been like 15 seconds I guess everything's alright??? not a gunshot??

anyawOK I HEARD IT AGAIN WTH

what??

um ANYWAYS I'm going to tell you the plot of this story bc my mind lazy af too I'ma forget the story soon. (btw it's a trilogy. ik.)

there's this GIRL called akira she goes GUNSHOTGWHAY WHY DO I HEAR GUNSHOTS WHT

im scared???????????.

ok. akira is rich and very whoosh whoosh she's going to this event where orphans place their own little stands and sell handmade stuff down some road idk idk idk she meets an orphaned girl about her age, her names Chou. chou sells ribbons. this is where everything starts. things will get complicated idk how to write but pLEASE try lololol tell me what you think so I can keep on writing or I can give up :)

akira looks at them ribbons and likes the ribbon Chou's wearing to tie her hair, it's a violet ribbon with a butterfly charm. akira asks if it's for sale. Chou says it wasn't originally for sale but she'll make an exception blah blah blah akira notices Chou looks a bit sad and LETS GO TO DIALOGUE.

Chou: I'll make an exception :>

akira: ok

Chou: *is A BIT sad*

akira: omg¿ u sure it's ok if I keep it?? no deep emotional meaning behind this ribbon?? no?? ¿

Chou: *HESITATES* nah (( internally: 😞😥😢😭 ))

akira: k then *walks away*

END OF DIALOGUE

so foR SOME WEIRD REASON akira feels really bad about buying the ribbon. she wears the ribbon  as some type of belt bc who tf knows where her real belt is. (akira is rlly weird you'll get it when I draw her ok.) (is anyone reading this anyway)

so um akira goes to Chou's orphanage she asks for Chou and the ppl that work there tell her Chou was transferred to the hospital days ago Dun duN DUNNN (Ik so original)

akira goes to the hospital blAH BLAH BLAH she asks for Chou's room, gets there, opens the door, who knows where tf the nurse went, akira's there looking at Chou, Chou's staring back blah blah blah (is my laziness showing)

DIALOGUE (this part is supposed to be very emotional thanks for ur understanding) (that means u should play some sad lee min ho music in the bg to feel IT)

akira: omg Chou u ok

Chou: mm nah

akira: what's wrong

Chou: idk heart disease probs? (author chan hasn't decided yet lol)

akira: mm ok u gonna be fine?

Chou: nah... probs gonna die soon lol.

akira: wtf? what about ur ribbon stand?? (fun fact: the event is held twice a year,  the first Saturday of February and July, most orphans attend the event every time it's held and sell the same stuff)

Chou: Oh right. then if I die please take care of my ribbon stand ok? make beautiful ribbons 💸 💸💸

akira: um no?? YOURE NOT DYING WTF.?? 📧......loading content......📧📝

[ETC ETC VERY DEEP DIALOGUE SPEECH THING GOES HERE]

days later akira receives a call from the hospital (she left her contact info idfk),, Chou died :(

she goes cray cray bc she thinks it's her fault. she ties the ribbon around her waist very neatly and she literally cries like,, that whole "tears streamed down her cheeks" thing? that.

right now she wants to die so she goes outside and idk; why did the 15 year old girl cross the road?

there's a lot of cars rn. she slowly starts crossing the street and hears and watches the cars stop when they see her v sad

and then IT HAPPENS

she feels someone grab her from behind, this person grabs her ribbon and pulls her towards them like wtf?? so she trips and ends up falling along w/ the other person they're both laying on the floor just as this big wfvjojnvf truck or whATEVER going whoosh whoosh splat splat they die.

car accident how original

the chapter ends with the line: the ribbon hits the floor. once violet, now red; stained with the blood of akira and akira, that ribbon caused their deaths.

tbh it's the only line I like.

so you're probably wondering who's the 🆒person in the drawing :) :)

that's akira! but not the girl akira I was talking about, it's the other akira.

see? I told u it's complicated.

you're probably wondering why does the 🆒person appear twice but with different clothes and hair style and contact lenses :) :)

that's bc akira dies! the not 🆒 akira at the left is alive akira, the v 🆒 akira at the right is when he dies and the plot gets a twist

(( lol basically told you guys (all 4 of you <33) the whole chapter ))

hope you liked! tell me what you think of the story and art so far!! (plz)