CHAPTER-3 ~ Sometime-Sometime Rama Rama 😊 Sometime-Sometime Krishna😜
This chapter starts after the very next day of completion of Anitha friend's marriage.
The scene starts with Hardik going with angry from Pandya niwas.
AUTHOR'S NOTE :
No Pandya brother will present during hardik visit Shiva,gombi,Dev will be in Pandya store,Rishita and krish will go their office and college
Suman(su) goes to Dhara to console her and about say something but dhara will go to her room.
Scene in Guara room:
FLASHBACK :
Dhara while seeing hardik coming inside the pandya niwas from kitchen and comes to angan and say
Dhara (D) with happiness in her face and say: Bhai.. aap ne dost ki shaadi pe gaya tha na kab aaya aapne?
Hardik(H) Hardik go to dhara and hug her and : Meri behana...
D : Bhai aap ka batch mai aakari dost
Praveen bhaiya ka bhi shaadi
hogyee hai,Aap kab karega shaadi
H : vahi tho batane aaya hoo main
D : kya...?
Suman (su) : Hey hardik kal tera dost
ki shaadi mai tu bhi kisi se
shaadi karliya kya.
D : Maa..aap ae kya bol raha hai mera
bhai esa nahi hai
H : Ahare kaki mera baat tho sunn lo
phele
Su : tho bol...
H : Dhara mai na shaadi karne ka
faisaala kiya hai
Dhara with happiness ask about who he wants to marry
D : kis tarah ki Ladki chayee bhai aap
kho
H : Doondh nee ki jarurath nahi hai...
Dhara with full of happiness asks about the girl
D : Ladiki khun hai bhai?
H : Anitha..
By listening the anitha name Dhara and suman will give shocking expression
D : Ae kya bol rahe ho bhai...aap
Anitha se shaadi?Aap kho pata
nahi bhai vho kaise hai,kitini giri
huyee harkath kiya mujae aur
gombi kho alag karne ka
AUTHOR'S NOTE :
Hardik don't know about IVF KHAAND.
Hardik just stands slient.Dhara continues..
Vho aap kho blackmail tho nahi kar rahe na bhai...Anitha jaise log aurat aur pyaar ke naam ka kaalank hai.
H : (in angry) Chup hoja
dhara.....shouts loudly then dhara
stops
Hardik continues...
Mai anitha ke kilaf ek shabd bhi
Dhara cuts of his sentence and says : Lekin bhai....
H : Anitha meri honewali patni hai
aur teri bhabhi bhi.
D : Lekin mujae ae shaadi manjoor
nahi hai bhai,ae jarur Anitha ka
plan hai hum dono kho alag karne
ka.Mai aap ka shaadi anitha se
kabhi nahi hone dunga.
FLASHBACK :
Hardik remembers about Anitha crying sitting in corner of hotel room and saying him about what happened during night in there drunken state.And he promises her that he will marry her at any cost.
AUTHOR'S NOTE :
It is just Anitha plan to make Hardik to marry her northing happens between them.
H : Tu behan hai mera eske nathee
tumkho baata ne aaya ho...sirf
Batane
Dhara see him in shock...Hardik continues
Chahe jho hojaye mai anitha se shaadi karke ee rahuga...
Anitha see the drama from outside but dhara,hardik and suman unaware of it.
He says and go from pandya house in angry flashback ends
All pandya brother (except shiva) and Rishita come back to pandya niwas
Gombi observes that dhara was distributed and looks sad he ask her what happened
Gombi(G):Dhara kya huva hai tum
kho?
D : see gombi and she about to say but
(to herself):nahi nahi abhi nahi bata
vunga gombi kho ae phele se he
pareesha tha Shiva aur Raavi kho
lekar mai aab bhai aur anitha ke
bha re mai baat ke mai aur pareesha
nahi karuga
G : Dhara kuch bol...
D : mai na Maa kho chai dena ee bhul
gaya abhi deke aata hu...and she
from there
Scene in Suman Room:
Su : (talk to herself ) Aachanak ae
hardik kho esa kya huva ae
Anitha se shaadi karne ke liye
aapni behen se bhi jagada karliya.
Kuch tho gadbad hai...?Ae khagadi ki parvarish ki natija hai-Ek Anitha aur dusri vho Markundi gayi.
Markundhi se yadh aaya....
Ae Anitha aur hardik ke saat saat ae Raavi ka bhi kisi aur se shaadi hogaye tho mera shiva ke sarr se bala tal jayegi
And she decides to call prafulla(mami) on otherside Dhara walks towards suman room with chai.
Mami sees the phone call
Prafulla(mami):ae chama chidiya
achanak mujae kyun call kar
rahe hai bhai?
Say to herself and lifts call
Hello...Suman bhen.. jai somnath....kaise se ho
Su : meri hal chal badh mai puchna
phehale meri baat sunn
Hardik aur anitha ke shaadi ke
saat saat tu teri beti Raavi ka bhi
shaadi karle.
P(m) : Vho tho mai bhi soch raha
hu..suman bhen lekin Raavi se
baat karne ka dar lag raha hai
merekho
Su : (to herself) Ae khagadi esa he chal
tho markundhi gayi shaadi kabhi
nahi hogi mujae kuch karna
padega
P(m) : hello...suman bhen aap thi hai
na(loudly)
Su : Ha..ha..
Ae Prafulla meri baat sunn phele
hum ladka kho doondh te hai
badh mai raavi kho manayegyee
P (m):lekin...su..
Su : cuts of her sentence and say
Kuch nahi hoga vho manjayegi
phele rishtey dekhna suru karate
hum dono
AUTHOR'S NOTE :
Before calling prafulla(mami)suman talks with pandit ji about Raavi ki dusri shaadi
Suman dialogue continues....
Mai na pandit se bhi baat karliya vho mujae baat ya ki kuch NRI Ladke ki rishtey hai
Parason hum dono pandit ji se milne mandir jayege.
P (m) : Lekin..? suman bhen aapko
ethana interest kyu hai meri
beti ki dusri shaadi mai
Su : interest vinterest kisi kho nahi
hai..jab tak teri banji ka shaadi
nahi haga na tab tak vho
"Ghar mai na rahakar bhi mera shiva kho dukh poounchti rahege"ae sab chodo tu mujae bol ki tu parason pandit ji ke pass jana ya nahi?
P(m) : Ha...ha..suman bhen ha mai
jarur aavunga.
Su : chal aab mai rak thi hu...jai
somnath
P (m) : jai somnath
AUTHOR'S NOTE :
Dhara overhears the phone conversation and Shiva just enter to house(now he listens dhara conversation with suman)
D : Maa...ae sab aap kyu kar rahe ho
Aap kho bhi pata hai na Shiva aur
Raavi ek dusre se pyaar karte hai
Raavi ki dusri shaadi kyu karna
chaha rahe ho ...
By listening the word "Doosari shaadi" pierce his(Shiva)heart and he goes to room.
Scene in "SHIVI ROOM":
Shiva sit on bed by resting his head to cot and see every corner of room after so many days he perfectly observe/seen the room (Because he only use to come to SHIVI ROOM to take his clothes).Each and every corner makes him feel Raavi presence.He see the other side of bed where Raavi use tosleep and keeps his hand there (his eyes show mixture of feelings)
Then Shiva hears murmering voices
Person 1 : "Tu baat karna use"
Person 2 : "Mai kyun karu ....Tu kar
(person 1 gives pleasing
expression)
Tu he Lekar aaya tha na....
Bhulgya hai kaya?
Simultaneously Shiva searches everywhere in room and moves towards door then he see 2 persons under the bed but shiva can only see there legs.
Shiva (s):Tum log khoun hai..?
Aur bed ke neeche kya kar
rahe ho tum dono...
Otherside :
Person 1 : Haila..!Ham Pakad gaya hai
(in witty way )
Person 2 gives a stare in anger
Shiva (S) : Bahar aa vho abhi ke abhi
(in bit rise voice)
They will not come
Tum dono aaoge nahi. Tho main tumhaaree taang kheech loonga (gives warning his anger rising to peak now)
Then they both comes out from each side.After seeing them shiva will be in shock.
Author's Note:
Detailed Description of Person 1 and Person 2 They are ALTER EGOS of SHIVA.
I think i'm really obsessed with Shiva Alter ego😭❤ and i guess i should claim Patent rights on it to now😂😂 just kidding my peeps..
So many members liked and loved the ALTER EGO in OS - SHIVI KI SUHAGARAAT. Since,It is a ONE SHOT STORY so i just want all to enjoy his actics in this FF....
Just got a IDEA that if one ALTER EGO has got that much love and appreciation why can't we can give TWIST to it It just my experiment guys hope u like it.Like "VIKAS KHANNA" says TWIST THE TASTE to add more flavour and taste😂😜 I'm hoping that this ALTER EGOS bring more flavour and Taste to this FF.
Person 1(Alter ego of Shiva version 1):
He is highly expressive,romantic,flirty
Bold,Playful,Naughty, Compassion and love,loyal ,kind,enjoy being the centre of attraction/attention, 24/7 Raavi ki khayalo mai ee rahetae hai.
Person 2(Alter ego of Shiva version 2):
He also loves Raavi and he always wants to see both Shiva and Alter ego of shiva (Person1) happy.he is kind,always satisfied with things he had,loyal and main point to be noticed is "Depending upon the situation, context,mood and people around him he will act,Never biased to anyone (shiva and Alter ego 1)he stands with truth and justice,Try to explain and handle situation type personality".
But Peeps using Shiva Alter ego-version 1 and Shiva Alter ego version 2 is highly difficult for me to write and even boring for u to read.So based on their some qualities i will give them names
Shiva Alter ego version 1: (romantic,flirty,naughty, playful,compassion and love...so on.)Based on this "KRISHNA VERSION"
Pic.credits : Twitter
Shiva Alter ego version 2:
(satisfaction,loyalty, kindness,stands for truth and justice...so on)Based on this "RAM VERSION"
Pic.credits : Twitter
Peeps just remember KRISHNA AND RAM VERSIONS are also the traits of SHIVA only that he never showed to the world.
Now Back to the scene:
After seeing them shiva will be in shock.
Shiva just look at them....in response they just(ram and krishna versions) gives a mischievous smile.
Krishna Version(KV) just go to shiva and say: "kaise ho mera bhai"
And closes his open mouth and say
"Munh band rak macchar chale jayega"
Shiva gives angry look
Then RamVersion(RV) comes to Krishna Version(KV) and says
RV: tu kay kar rahe ho...
Shiva cut off his sentence and say..
S : Mujae pata hai tum dono mera
ANDERWAALE hai
Lekin jaha tak mujae pata hai ki
ANDERWAALE tho ek ee hota hai na
yaha tho do do hai
KV : tu khaas hai mera bhai
RV stare him
S(with detective mode) : aacha esa hai kya....tho aab ae batana kyun aaye ho yaha
Slow Conversation between KV AND RV:
(Shiva detective mode is still on)
KV : Chal...batana aab,hum kyun aaya
yaha....
RV : Abhi tho bola tu bolega.
KV : Ha bola.... (thinking about how to
escape) Lekin...
RV : Lekin kya...
KV : Tu bole ya mai..ek tho haina meri
Gyaa.. (bite his tongue)mera
pyaara bhai
Ek baat bata "Tu Raavi baby ke
bina rahapayega?"
RV : Nahi.... lekin
KV : Lekin vakin kuch nahi
Shiva gets Irritated and says
S : "Aa bae tumhara chappad chappad
katam nahi hoga kya"
KV : Hogayana...mera bhai
RV just see him( to himself :ae jarur mujae phasa dega aab)
S: tho chal baat aab ....kyu aaye ho
yaha
KV : By just jumping on to the bed sleep by resting his hand on head (like Shri Bhagwan Vishnu)
KV : ae hai na ae bataye ga tum kho
humare aane ki vajah
RV (to himself : lo successfully Phasa diya, ae meri pyaar aur bolepan ka faida utata hai hamesha)
KV (looking RV and say) : Chal "GYAAN CHAND" aab shuru hojaa
(Laughs for trapping him)
RV stand slient for few minutes
Simultaneously KV will get suddenly strikes about RV in mind: "Hey Bhagwan...Mazae lene ki chakkar mai tho,ae bhuligaya....Ae tho aab meri team mai hai...Lekin, Ae tho kabhi bhi TEAM CHANGE kar saktha hai...Espe pe tho bharosa karke mai RISK nahi le saktha
S : Hello...esa kadhe kadhe hee tahega
ya kuch baat bhi dega...
RV : Vho tho Hum isliye aa...
RV Cut off by KV
KV : Mai bolunga na Shiva..
Tujae tho naam se kyun pukar
rahahu...main tho tum ho...tu
tho main ho na😂😂😂
S (Detective look) : aab tak tho eskho. bolne kho bola. Aab esa kya huva tum kho...? Ha..bol..?
KV : Esa kuch nahi mera bhai
Hum dono ee tera ANDERWAALE
hai na.Ye bole,ya mai ek ee tho
hai na
RV gives a relief expression in his face which was caught by our Dectective Shiva
When KV about to start then shiva says "Tu nahi bolega ye (pointing his index finger to RV) bolega"
KV : Hey Bhagwan....aab kya hoga (slowly)
S : kya bola?
KV : ku..ku..kuch nahi
RV : (takes a deep breath and say)
"Sunn mera bhai abhi bhi waqt
hai,Raavi kho apna pyaar
nahi...nahi hamara mera matlab
ki tum aur tumara andhar padhe
main - Hamara dono ka pyaar ka
izahaar kar"
KV : Ae tho seedha point pe aa
gaya( by rising his eyebrows)
Hello Mister GYAAN CHAND,
Tum dono ka matlab...kya hai
Ha..."Main yaha Chane chabane
ho kya...Main bhi karta hoo meri
(Then shiva and RV give a look)
Teekae teekae HAMARI RAAVI
BABY se pyaar".
By listening BABY word from KV shiva says BABY kya hai bae...oh meri hai (with possessiveness in voice)
KV : Hello Brother,"ethana possessive
nahi ho ne ...ka bhul math main
bhi teri ANDAR mai ee rahata hu"
S: Ha teek hai
RV : Ahare tum dono ka hogaya tho
humare aane ki vajah samja nee
ki mouka dhoge...
Then Shiva and KV shift there eyes to RV
RV : Dekh mera bhai...hum dono kho
bhi pata hai sara saboot Raavi ke
khilaf hai
Lekin ek baat bolu "Kabhi
-Kabhi jho aankhen dekta hai na
vho saach nahi hota hai"
KV(gives suprising look)to him self : Ae GYAAN CHAND tho Gyaan dene mai Ph.D karliye hai....Lage Raho Mera bhai
RV (continues) : Ek bar thandae dimag se sochna mera bhai
"Ethana sab kuch hone ke badh bhi Raavi hamara pyaar jeeth ne ke liya tadap rahi hai aur vho pura parivaar se aur puri duniya se ladh rahi hai...sirf aur sirf hamare pyaar pane ke liye
Shiva keep listening sliently and thinking of Raavi
Scene change to Mami house(in Raavi room):
At same time Raavi while seeing shiva pic in phone remembering the memories with him from marriage to now and also remembers the words said by suman during Snake khand then suddenly mind strike with krish dialogue that and she(Raavi) join all the dots now.
Krish says that he was having doubt on "Rishita ki Bua"
And she also listened so many times suman saying Dhara and gutam about involvement of Rishita bua in IVF khand.
R(to herself) : Mujae lag raha hai pakka "Rishita ki Bua" ka khoyi tho jhol hai mujae pata laga gana hoga,Ese phele khoye aur khand hojaye...jaldi se jaldi...
Hey Bolenath....Meri Shiva aur meri parivaar kho raksha karna.
Scene shift to SHIVI ROOM:
RV continues...
Bachpan se aaj tak tu parivaar ke liye bhaut kuch kiya,tab hum ne kuch nahi bola...kyu ki "Vho sab kuch HUM aapne pura dilse chaha, aur kiya"
"Main hamesha chaha ki HUM teeno kho HAMARE hisse ki sari khushi mile,Aur khoyee HUM kho pagaloo ki tarah BEPHANNA PYAAR kharae.....
DURING THIS SHIVA THINKS OF RAAVI
Aur... (suddenly he STOPS)
KV : Lag gaye Lanka...
S : aur ....bol..
KV : Aur ...kaya hoga mera bhai kuch
nahi
RV : couldn't not speak anything
S : (by seeing RV) Chup
hogaya .....teekae main ee
baata deta hu "AUR IZAATH BHI
KARENE NA"
Shiva again gets the flash of about Raavi (Domestic violence) Allegation now it is hitting him even more that became unbearable.
While observing change in expression of shiva and entire scenario KV thinks "if he don't enter into scene and make shiva understand the situation all there(RV,KV) efforts going to vain.
KV (to himself) : Aab aur raita phahale ne phele mujae kuch karna hoga
When KV about to explain.Shiva who is still thinking of scenario about Domestic violence allegation comes to RUDRA AVATAR and shouts on them to go.But both will stand there only.
KV : again try to speak "Mera bhai mujae batane ki mauka..
His sentence cut by shiva...
S : Tum dono nahi ja rahe ho na....tho
teek hai
Mai he chala javunga yaha se
He (shiva) say and go immediately
Conversation between KV AND RV :
RV feels bad for spoiling everything (it is clearly visible in his face).which was noticed by non other than hamara KV
KV : GYAAN CHAND....tu ye kar diya
mera yaara
RV gives sad expression and KV continues..
Tu na HUM teeno ki pyaar phane ki ahkari mauka bhi gavadiya (closing his mouth with his hand to hide his smile)
RV After hearing "Akhari mauka"word reaches to highest point of emotional stage
KV observe his(RV)face and say
KV : Ye...GYAAN CHAND...Tu aab roye ga kya..???
RV : Tho kya karu mera bhai
"Majae kuch samaj nahi aaraha
hai - Hamara bhai (Shiva) ka
dard ya Raavi ke liye Humara
pyaar kis kho chunna hai"
KV : Esme kya sochna RAAVI BABY ke
liye pyaar he chunna.
RV : Ae Tu kya bol rahe ho...
(question mark face)
KV : Main ne kya galat bola....
Hum theeno kho kahena kha hee
pata hai RAAVI BABY Beghuna
hai.
Hum RAAVI BABY kho
Bachpan se dekh raha hai na -
" Vho kabhi sapne mai bhi kisi ka
bura nahi chaa he theee hai - vho
kaise ae sab kar sakthi hai"
RV agrees with KV by noding his head
KV : Tho aab teek se sunn aab hum dono milkar hamara MAJNU BHAI (shiva) kho ae yaha saas delana hoga ki RAAVI BABY hamara(theeno ka)zindigi hai,Usakae bhi na HUM nahi jeepayee gaye.
Author's Note :
Upto to Now KV has never got a chance because RV used to have RIGHT POINTS and KV never had point to defend that and He (KV) also used to think RAAVI IS JUST COMPROMISING IN UNWANTED MARRIAGE.
KV started to OVERPOWER from the day Raavi proposed them.
"SOME TIME -SOME TIME RAMA,RAMA😊.....SOME TIME - SOME TIME KRISHNA 😜"
Scene in Angan: (Shiva leaving from SHIVI ROOM)
While entering Angan shiva sees Krish bed empty.
S : Ye ....Pidhi kaha gaya hoga..???
Author's Note:
This is usual time of krish everyday he goes out from pandya niwas to talk with Kirti in Phone.
Shiva see every where in aagan for krish and then he notices the Main door open and goes out to see him and find him outside the pandya niwas talking in phone with someone.
PRECAP : Krish in call saying "Aab mhan na hai tho mann,nahin tho nahin"
Ignore Spelling Mistakes Peeps...
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