POETRY RESULTS
~ Let's all give a standing ovation as we present to you...
✨ FIRST PLACE: 🥇Nirvana: A Teenage Trepidation by ToxicnBlack
✨ SECOND PLACE: 🥈Stygian by kindawhoresomexo
✨ THIRD PLACE:🥉 Sleepless Night by Attenuer
✨ Judges: Zarannxoxo Ofurevick2 & @bedframehardmattress
OVERVIEW OF RESULTS
🏅SIXTH: Essence by Emy_Akpan
🏅FIFTH: Emotions Of A Broken Heart by Rising-Queen
🏅FOURTH: Feelstora by lemon0804
🥉THIRD: Sleepless Night by Attenuer
🥈SECOND: Stygian by kindawhoresomexo
🥇FIRST: Nirvana: A Teenage Trepidation by ToxicnBlack
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🥉THIRD: My sleeplessness nights Attenuer
Participant: Attenuer
Book title: 8%
Book cover: 10
It was the best so far.
Book description: 8%
Grammar, spelling and punctuation: 10%
Book setting: 7%
Character development: 10%
Writing style: 5%
Overall enjoyment: 8%
Following me: 5%
Completed the payment: 10%
Total: 81%
🥈SECOND: Stygian kindawhoresomexo
Participant: kindawhoresomexo
Book Title: 10%
I loved the mystery of the title, beautifully done!
Book cover: 10%
I absolutely loved the simplicity of your cover, with a picture alone, it was able to convey so much.
Book Description: 9%
Again, I thought the simplicity was alluring and beautiful. I think it fits nicely with your poems. I do think Godhood could be capitalized, but I figure it was a stylistic choice.
Grammar, spelling and punctuation: 10%
There were no visible Grammar, syntax, spelling or punctuation errors. Great job!
Book setting: 10%
Your broad vocabulary paints a fantastical picture of the setting you are describing. The pictures at the top of your chapters help as well.
Plot Development: 8%
The plots of your poems were well developed and easy to grasp and understand.
Character development: 8%
Your characters were built with the emotions you displayed in your poems, I really enjoyed it! I did find the overly complex wording to hinder understanding and flow of development, though.
Writing style: 7%
I think you have an amazing vocabulary, and a way with words that can manipulate images into a reader's mind, which is an incredible talent. However, I found your writing to be full of purple prose. At times, it was a little bit awkward to read because of the overly complex, sometimes unfitting words. I found it interrupted the flow of your poems. I see your inspiration from classical literature and I think you adapt it into modern form quite pleasantly, but I found your simpler and less clouded poems more enjoyable. Meaning doesn't have to have a million fancy words, but that's just my opinion. You don't have to change anything, this is purely the way I see things.
Overall Enjoyment: 7%
Payment and follow: 10%
Total: 89%
🥇FIRST: A Teenage Trepidation
ToxicnBlack
Participant: ToxicnBlack
Book title: 10%
Your title is intriguing!
Book cover: 7%
Your book cover looks professional and pretty, but there's a lot of stuff going on.
Book description: 10%
Beautiful description! It draws readers in effectively.
Grammar, spelling and punctuation: 10%
I couldn't find any visible errors, amazing job!
Book setting: 10%
The setting (when described,) was described well!
Plot development: 10%
There is a clear development from the beginning and end of your poems, a realization or a change that is clear. I felt I learned something from your poems, I sincerely thank you for that.
Character development: 10%
Again, there is a clear goal and plot in each of your poems. The characters were developed and had a clear beginning and end.
Writing style: 10%
Your writing style is what makes your writing shine. I loved Wonder Woman, Nirvana, and Silence. These poems were absolutely wonderful, flowing and conveying a complex message through your simple and concise words. I felt impacted and moved by your poetry, amazing job!
Overall Enjoyment: 8%
Follow and Payment: 10%
Total: 95%
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