LGBTQ+ RESULTS
~Let's all give a standing ovation as we present to you...
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Unique Awards 2023: LGBTQ+ Category Results
✨Judges: @Altairegreigh & @Oma_Castle
🌤️PLACES
✨ FIRST PLACE: 🥇
Fate Bound BoeBlueWrites
✨ SECOND PLACE: 🥈
Sassy OmaPhinaPhire
✨ THIRD PLACE:🥉
Kabuki CrysTravel2019
🌤️OVERVIEW OF RESULTS
🏅SIXTH:
PARTICIPANT: @Ashaisaa
WORK: FIRE ON ICE
BOOK TITLE: 9%
The title is alright.
BOOK COVER: 10%
That book cover be giving me vibes. The colour, the hue, the font...It's all just purrfect!🙃
BOOK DESCRIPTION: 10%
That damn blurb is fire🔥
It does it all. The blurb is morassing enough to magnetism every reader into the book. And once they tap the start reading button, they are lost.😈
GRAMMAR, SPELLING & PUNCTUATION: 9%
BOOK SETTING: 7%
It's a wonderful one, just not so detailed.
PLOT DEVELOPMENT: 7%
The chemistry between the characters is rather oddly slow because they be giving the 'There's a fine line between love and hate' vibes and still nothing.
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 8%
WRITING STYLE: 4%
OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 9%
It was wonderful reading your book, but like I said before, I didn't enjoy the Slowburn.
DOES THE PARTICIPANT FOLLOW YOU? 5%
HAS THE PARTICIPANT COMPLETED THE PAYMENT? 0%
🏅FIFTH:
PARTICIPANT: @Underthemoment
WORK: FREE FALL
BOOK TITLE: 9%
The title is awesome. I love its origin.
BOOK COVER: 7%
I love the subtle but drawing nature of the book cover. But, a better colour other than white should have been used to write the characters on the cover.
BOOK DESCRIPTION: 10%
It's just on point, concise and straightforward.
GRAMMAR, SPELLING & PUNCTUATION: 9%
For just a bit of uneven spacing.
BOOK SETTING: 9%
I really love your book setting. You somehow create a world that I really want to visit.
PLOT DEVELOPMENT: 8%
The plot develops without any rough corners. But, I still think that Christian's approach was a bit too hurried at the start.
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 8%
This is so much on point. You take us carefully through Luke's change.
WRITING STYLE: 5%
I find the way Luke keep asking questions rather engaging.
OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 9%
All in all, it was indeed a good read.
DOES THE PARTICIPANT FOLLOW YOU? 5%
HAS THE PARTICIPANT COMPLETED THE PAYMENT? 0%
TOTAL: 79%
🏅FOURTH:
AUTHOR: OmaPhinaPhire
WORK: FIVE IS A CROWD
BOOK TITLE: 10/10%
BOOK COVER: 8/10% -too light color used in the cover but, the style of the graphic is good but not the font style and color.
BOOK DESCRIPTION: 8/10% - no need to put too much emoticon in the description in your blurb, and no need to talk to your readers by it. you could put them into your author's note. And it needs more summary of your story but not much.
GRAMMAR, SPELLING & PUNCTUATION: 8/10% -you should use " instead of ' when typing the dialogue of your character. if its not for publish and just fanfiction and you don't mind readers not accepting to read your then it's fine, don't mind my note.
BOOK SETTING: 10/10%
PLOT DEVELOPMENT: 10/10%
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT:10/10%
WRITING STYLE: 5/5%
OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 8/10%
DOES THE PARTICIPANT FOLLOW YOU?: 15/15%
TOTAL: 85/100%
🥉THIRD:
AUTHOR: CrysTravel2019
WORK: KABUKI
BOOK TITLE: 10/10%
BOOK COVER: 7/10% -no need to put all the awards of your story, can't seem to see the beauty of your cover.
BOOK DESCRIPTION: 7/10% -there is still lacking on your blurb and no need to show the ranks of your story just put it into another chapter.
GRAMMAR, SPELLING & PUNCTUATION: 8/10% -make sure to create a pragraph with 3-5 sentences.
BOOK SETTING: 10/10%
PLOT DEVELOPMENT: 10/10%
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 10/10%
WRITING STYLE: 5/5%
OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 9/10%
DOES THE PARTICIPANT FOLLOW YOU?: 10/15% TOTAL: 86/100%
🥈SECOND:
AUTHOR: OmaPhinaPhire
WORK: SASSY
BOOK TITLE: 10/10%
BOOK COVER: 8/10% -a typical font color that could be rather more white. the cover is lacking something style.
BOOK DESCRIPTION: 8/10% -the same as your other book too much emoji in your blurb. lacking of explaining the summary of the story, even the name of the main character is not there.
GRAMMAR, SPELLING & PUNCTUATION: 8/10% -you should use " instead of ' when typing the dialogue of your character. if its not for publish and just fanfiction and you don't mind readers not accepting to read your then it's fine, don't mind my note.
BOOK SETTING: 9/10% -i don't know if where are your characters are until when i reach ch3
PLOT DEVELOPMENT:10/10%
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 10/10%
WRITING STYLE: 5/5%
OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 7/10%
DOES THE PARTICIPANT FOLLOW YOU?: 15/15%
TOTAL: 90/100%
🥇FIRST:
AUTHOR: BoeBlueWrites
WORK: FATE BOUND
BOOK TITLE: 10/10%
BOOK COVER: 10/10%
BOOK DESCRIPTION: 7/10% -if you want to give credits to the real owner of the image that you used, you should put it in your author's note.
GRAMMAR, SPELLING & PUNCTUATION: 10/10%
BOOK SETTING: 10/10%
PLOT DEVELOPMENT: 10/10%
CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 10/10%
WRITING STYLE: 4/5% -you can tag someone if they are amazing. but it will be on under fanfiction if your character had an a/n on top of your chapters.
OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 7/10%
DOES THE PARTICIPANT FOLLOW YOU?: 15/15%
TOTAL: 93/100%
🏅Congratulations to you all!!🏅
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