~Let's all give a standing ovation as we present to you...

✨ FIRST PLACE: 🥇 The W2rld by The_Masked_Eidolon

✨ SECOND PLACE: 🥈 BTS Chats by ViniShah2

✨ THIRD PLACE:🥉Strangled Sweetness by dwarkaratna

✨ Judge: Oma_Community

OVERVIEW OF RESULTS

🥉THIRD: Strangled Sweetness by dwarkaratna

🥈SECOND: BTS Chats by ViniShah2

🥇FIRST: The W2rld by The_Masked_Eidolon

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🥉THIRD:

PARTICIPANT: @dwarkaratna
WORK: Strangled Sweetness

BOOK TITLE: 9%

Perfect fit!

BOOK COVER: 9%

The book cover is on point. I like the fact that all five characters are shown on it. But, I think the author's name and other details should have been written in a more bold colour.

BOOK DESCRIPTION: 10%

Unlike the prologue of the book, the description is more catchy and morassing. It's drawing enough to magnetize readers to your work.

GRAMMAR, SPELLING & PUNCTUATION: 3%

Given with love- Your book needs a thorough editing. I had to stop several times to leave corrections on only the first chapter. It's a pain to read no edited works for me. I struggled through the remaining four chapters.

BOOK SETTING: 7%

You did a good job of describing the environment of the story. But I strongly feel that you could have done better because your descriptive skill is wonderful.

PLOT DEVELOPMENT: 5%

There is barely any in the first four chapters where it is supposed to be. Plot development in later chapters are for books in the slowburn category. But still, there was a faltering attempt that you finally gave up on -mayhap unknowingly.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 8%

I love the characters especially the males. You did a good job of introducing each of them and showing us a little bit of significant growth over the first four chapters. The ladies are not left out. It was noteworthy the way you portrayed each of the separately from each other and yet showing us how unified them seemed at the same time.

WRITING STYLE: 3%

Minor gramatical errors which caused change in writing style was noticed.

OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 6%

Though the book was nice, it is not one that I can binge read. I binge read excellent book. Please get an editor to work on it and bring it to excellence.

DOES THE PARTICIPANT FOLLOW YOU? 5%

HAS THE PARTICIPANT COMPLETED THE PAYMENT? 10%

TOTAL: 75%

🥈SECOND:

PARTICIPANT: @ViniShah2
WORK: BTS Chats

BOOK TITLE: 9%

The title is alright. But can you think of something more creative for it?

BOOK COVER: 7%

The background picture of the cover is nice. But, it is kind of too faded. The writing of the author's name on it is almost nonexistent. Also can you make the title itself more bold?

BOOK DESCRIPTION: 6%

I love the description. It's short and straight to the point. It gives us ample detail of what to expect from your book. But, it is not drawing enough to capture readers interest.

GRAMMAR, SPELLING & PUNCTUATION: 7%

For just a little spelling error here and there.

BOOK SETTING: 9%

I love the loving atmosphere that you create for the seven protagonist. The way that they bicker over the littlest thing with love is so adorable😍😊

PLOT DEVELOPMENT: 6%

In actuality, there's no plot because it is not a continuous story. But rather it is a separate series of events. So judging based on each, I love how you go smoothly from one character to another without ruining the scenario you have laid out.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 0%

I can't score the characters because the events in the book are separate from each other.

WRITING STYLE: 10%

YOU NAILED IT!!

OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 10%

I loved reading your book. I laughed few times while reading and it was fun. I will definitely get back to it whenever I feel like a good laugh. I especially loved the way the characters bickered over what to eat and later ended up ordering pizza. I'm like what was the bickering all about?😂 All in all, it was a really nice piece.

DOES THE PARTICIPANT FOLLOW YOU? 5%

HAS THE PARTICIPANT COMPLETED THE PAYMENT? 10%

TOTAL: 79%

🥇FIRST:

PARTICIPANT: @The_Masked_Eidolon
WORK: The W2rld

BOOK TITLE: 8%
Although the title fits the book theme, I still personally think the book deserves a better one.

BOOK COVER: 3%
Sadly, the book cover is too poor for such a good book. It doesn't even have the author's name on it. Please change it!!!!

BOOK DESCRIPTION: 10%

I like how the book description is short, straight and direct. It tells us a lot without revealing a lot.

GRAMMAR, SPELLING & PUNCTUATION: 9%

Aside from one or two places, I hardly found any errors. Good work.

BOOK SETTING: 10%

If it were possible to score you 11/10%, I certainly would because the book setting was on point. It was very detailed yet very entertaining.

PLOT DEVELOPMENT: 10%

The plot develops rather smoothly. I love how the narrator takes us to and from with exhausting us. It's a wonderful style that I have never seen. A few times, I forgot that I was reading a book and not watching a movie.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 9%

From the few chapters I read, it was alright.

WRITING STYLE: 5%

You did a fantastic work!

OVERALL ENJOYMENT: 10%

I loved the book. I will continue to read it. Please send the book to my DM @OmaPhinaPhire in case I forget. I must finish reading that book. It was truly a mixture of comedy, action, adventure and everything between.

DOES THE PARTICIPANT FOLLOW YOU? 5%

HAS THE PARTICIPANT COMPLETED THE PAYMENT? 10%

TOTAL: 89%

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