When we met by @Ekta2000

Cover:
Umm... I don't know what to say, I made made it didn't I? XD all I'm going to say, I love you for using it! I know your book was reviewed before and there was a lot of critique on the cover, so if you change it, maybe Thad be good, but I can't really say anything here because I was actually proud of the cover I made for you. Thank you so much for using it!

Blurb:
I loved it when you wrote 'meets' in capital letters, it was an interesting blurb and I really liked the reference to the 'tug of war'. I would say, make it a little bit longer, maybe a little more detail on the events. I received a little email from wattpad which was talking about how to write the best blurbs, and it said to include spoilers, maybe you could do that too!

Characters descriptions:
This field is discovered wildly in your book! I can sometimes feel what your characters feel, the raw emotions and the pleasure. For character description, I'm going to advise you to carry on as you are! You're doing an AMAZING job!

Storyline and plot twist:
With fan fictions, I don't know the fandom so it would be hard for me to judge, nonetheless I contacted a few friends and from their feed back, I'd say your story line is pretty good and unique. In terms of plot twists, I saw one right at the start and I found it amazing! Starting with a twist can really help you as an author.

Dialogue:
I love the texting! Yes many books have texting, but I found the flow of your much more normal, easier to understand and see the bond between the characters. What I would suggest, I'd like to see some characters speaking their mind more, it would give your story a unique touch

Language choice and vocabulary
Absolutely amazing! I love how you describe character's feelings, it really hits me as a reader. I would suggest you change some adjectives and replace them it's synonyms, it would really help.

Grammar and spelling:
I didn't see any major errors, nothing that can't be fixed with a bit of proofreading! I would suggest an editor, they literally work their magic!

Reader enjoyment/ overall:
For me it was giving new things a go, but it was great! Keep writing and never stop.
PS: love the chapter names!

Book: https://my.w.tt/QG8MYUihT8