The betrothed Emissary by Novel_Worm

Cover:
Love it! Absolutely LOVE it!! It's gentle, simplistic and beautiful. Just one thing I'd suggest, maybe make the text a darker colour as it's kind of not visible from afar. I know your getting new covers so I can't wait!

Blurb:
That blurb was the best I've read in a long, long time! It's well detailed and it almost feels like you were telling a story of another story. I love the fact that you included your readers opinions in the blurb as well, it not only shows new readers how your book is but the fact that you value your readers opinions, which is awesome! Right now I'd say your blurb is perfecto!!

Characters descriptions:
My favourite part. Your characters have snuck into my heart, I love them so much. You make me love them by giving small details that many writers forget to include, like those green slippers. I usually have to infer rather than read the character description which takes this book to the next level of greatness. What I most like is how you explain the feelings that have slow motion effects, you describe them gentle but the words have its ferocity. These feelings help me devise more about the character. what I'd say, I want Avery's feeling described in more detail, but that's just because I'm the new "game of nobles" fan!

Storyline and plot twist:
What can I say? I L.O.V.E it! Like you threw a twist in my face in the first chapter! Not all authors have the gut to do that. I see a new twist in every corner. The storyline is unique and has its own beautiful twists. I just love it! I really need a synonym for love.

Dialogue:
100/100 impossibly impeccable! I feel like I'm watching a movie sometimes! It's relatable and brings back memories. As a reader I can really understand your characters from what they say. Don't change anything about it!

Language choice and vocabulary
The description is immaculate! I think I'd want more descriptive language in some places but it's amazing as it is. I see some repetition in some places, so I'd suggest you check that, but it's truly wonderful.

Grammar and spelling:
I've seen some punctuation and spelling errors. For example, when you say "huge- huge", the dash looks more like a hyphen, for a dash, do two hyphens, like this, — . These mistakes are small and not very important but if you want to take your book to the next level, maybe hire an editor, they can really help!

Reader enjoyment/ overall:
I feel like a water fountain just gushing about how much I love your book, but I'm going to say it one more time: I LOVE IT!
PS: Tristan is MINE!

Book: https://my.w.tt/yn240pCRi8