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Poet's playbook

Poet's playbook by @fwphoenix20

Cover:
The cover is decent however not as attractive, as it has lost its originality. With a few touches, I believe it will be amazing! If you were wondering what I had in mind, I'd say, maybe stick to the idea of having a book, add on a play button to the book. For colour scheme, I'd say use navy and blue, it really goes with your poems, or even just pastel colours. If you need more help with a cover, I would gladly help!

Blurb:
Many poets believe that an anthology doesn't need a blurb, but it does. I like your one, I think it needs a few adjustments as it feels incomplete. A suggestion would be, maybe add some sort of taster or a quote? Or even a little description of what you believe about poetry!

Language choice and vocabulary: (poetic devices)
Your poems are immaculately structured— that can sometimes be hard to master.
I can see you have a regular rhyme scheme but it's sometimes broken, I quite like the break, it add a bit of volume! I've seen you use metaphors very well, as well as emotive language. I loved how you would link some of your poems to songs, it allows the reader to relate. One thing I'd like to emphasise, poetry can sometimes be vague, can sometimes use words with strength other than those that are regularly used, it would be nice to see some word changes.

Grammar and spelling:
I haven't spotted any serious grammatical mistake, but if you give it a sweep, I think it'd be perfect! (And again, I'd say, do look for synonyms. It would add whimsical atmosphere!)

Reader enjoyment/ overall:
Overall, your poems are a pleasure to read and hold a lot of feelings and depth.
PS: I LOVE Lyrical

Book: https://my.w.tt/FEly16zV57

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