His clumsy love by @leo_and_muffins

Cover:
I love the image on the cover! With the font, I would go with something more whimsical or bold, it will make it easier to read it! The colour used to write "clumsy" I would use it to write your name too, it will help with relation and bringing the cover together.

Blurb:
I love the name of the series! And the blurb caught my eye when it said Shawn Mendes XD
I like how you describe the personality and 5hen mention who it is. One thing I would like to point out, you say "Join these two polar opposites as they discover and experience what we call 'Life' as he becomes her light and she 'His Clumsy Love'" I love that sentence, but I would expand on "life". I say this because most books talk about "life" so adding more will make yours more unique and help with finding new readers!

Characters descriptions:
I love your characters! The additional details written using the techniques of show-me-don't-tell-me makes it even better! The strands if relations you create between the characters and readers is also amazing! The Point of views adds more structure and more enjoyment for the reader.

Storyline and plot twist:
What I love about your book is that it's not cliche, the fact that Vihaan reads romance novels gave this story an unique touch. Writing from the viewpoint of a boy made this story even better, it was interesting and intriguing. Typical yet unique. The combination you created is intricate! The idea of combining your books was a great idea!

Dialogue:
This is the bit where I laugh like a maniac. If dialogue isn't funny, the story feels almost broken, if you understand what I mean. Every time a character spoke, I either laughed or "awww"ed (that's not a word XD) I could relate and I could also tell you wrote from your heart, that's what makes this story do special.

Language choice and vocabulary
I love the storyline! I'm a description addict, I love the use of adjectives and different literary techniques, I saw some in your work but there are some places I would replace with synonyms. That's just me, this is a change you don't really have to work on, it's something I personally believe. I'll give you an example, when Vihaan sees her, his heart is beating right? Here I would say something like, "the roar in heart, the thudding in my ears, the glint in her eyes sending sparks in my heart, scorching it, engraving her name in my blood." I go crazy for description, as you can see from that example. If you feel like adding more description will make your story more stronger, I really suggest it.

Grammar and spelling:
I would really advise in not using abbreviations such as "btw", it takes away the professionalism and makes you look like an amateur, you are no amateur, you wrote three whole novels in one! There are slight mistakes with punctuation (I suggest you use a variation to spice the text) and a few grammatical errors— it can all be fixed! I really recommend hiring an editor, they work like magic!

Reader enjoyment/ overall:
I feel like binge reading the whole book even though I don't have a second to spare XD. I really enjoyed it, and I can't wait to read on!
PS: I search for a Shawn Mendes lover too XD

Book: https://my.w.tt/1j4IoKlfi9