Deception by @Lil_Biker

Cover:
The first cover of your book (the one with the blue text), wasn't as great in my opinion, but the one you have now, is marvelous! it contradicts with the tittle and picks at my interest. i was kind of bored, so i decided to make you a cover, which you absolutely don't have to use as the one you have now is amazing!

Blurb:
I loved it when you said, "She tries her best not to fall in love with the charming Daniel but he doesn't  make things easy for her."  It adds more mystery to the story, the kind of mystery every good book has. What I'd suggest, from your book, i feel like it's a typical new adult novel, but that's not the case and I know its not as I've read it. I think if you elaborate or add a bit more information, like about a twist, more readers would be interested in your book! I'll give an example, this may have nothing to do with your book, "Love is always put to tests, some of then are a bit harder than others, some of them can be laughed away. So what kind will Jade go through? can you force love to stay at bay?"

Characters descriptions:
Sometimes, having a cast helps, sometimes adding some sort of quote, description or caption helps. I'd suggest you use some sort of technique to help the reader understand the character a bit more. If you don't understand what I mean, just let me know! What I love about your book is that every relationship is intricately described, they aren't generic of typical. I most like the sibling quarrels XD.

Storyline and plot twist:
The plot proceeds in a beautiful manner. The first chapter is enough to have me intrigued. I like how you move through out the book, it's a subtle and perfect pace. What you would say, maybe throw in some more events to spice things up!

Dialogue:
You rock in this field! I love the dialogue, it's relatable and funny, I can't emphasise how funny some of the characters are and it's only because of what they say. There's nothing you should change in terms dialogue, I love it!

Language choice and vocabulary
Your language choice is really good, however if suggest use more sentence structures to convey emotions, also I would say some words are repeated so look for synonyms for them.

Grammar and spelling:
I say this to every writer, find a reviewer! But I'm not going to tell you that because I found no mistakes! That may just be me but still I didn't see anything so I'm going say anything except, WELL DONE!

Reader enjoyment/ overall:
Three words... I LOVE IT! I'm not so fond of new adult books, but your one is amazing!
PS: Jade ♥️

Book: https://my.w.tt/3lUSqZ39f8