UL-30
Namaskaram 🙏
Before going into the chapter please read the below points so that you will understand my POV regarding the frame of my story.
I have seen few of you are not satisfied by the way I am writing. You are not ok about Ragini's pain. You are also complaining about not showing Ragini's love. I wanted to show Ragini's regret for not trusting her love. I don't think one will accept love if they don't feel the person they feel for is trust worthy. According to me every relation's base is trust. And that is what happened in case of RagSan. Ragini didn't trust Sanskar. It will definitely hurt one person who was very loyal and trustworthy to the person he love but still that person didn't trust you. Same happened to Sanskar. He is broken and wanted Ragini to regret. It pained him seeing his love broken but he still tried to stay strong because he doesn't want them to face such issues anytime later in their future. Hope I cleared my point. If not feel free to express your points.
I have a small doubt if it was Ragini in Sanskar's place and Sanskar in Ragini's place would you say same. Won't you want Sanskar to regret more and more and prove his love to Ragini. Not trusting someone you love is something pointing on their character too. A character is important to any human irrespective of gender. This is my POV. If you feel this as wrong I am very sorry to hurt you.
Next when Jeevika, his own sister hasn't trusted him how can a girl whom she knows him for just a few months trust him listening something against him? This is from Jeevika's POV. Jeevika has stood herself as a girl first than being a sister to her brother. She took a stand to a girl and proved that she will not spare even if it is her brother. I am not saying her not trusting him is correct but if really Sanskar has cheated Ragini and Jeevika instead of standing for Ragini stood for Sanskar then won't we blame Jeevika for standing for her brother but not her sister in law and was partial. Jeevika knows that Ragini is not someone who will point someone as wrong just like that. Not that she doesn't know what her brother is but the situation was something we see in normal scenario and she took a practical way. So she tried to stand for the right not looking the relation.
According to me they should have confronted Sanskar before pushing him away from them. Ragini should have confronted him. It might have got some time but would have definitely make their this complicated life a bit less complicated as they took other way instead of coming into conclusions. If Ragini would have spoke to him and try to talk to him calmly may be they would have been the other way now.
Sanskar not taking a step to reconcile themselves. Earlier it was because of Jeevika and Viren why he didn't try to reach Ragini because he never says no to his di ma. This he proved by marrying Ragini in this situation. Next after getting to know the truth he didn't take the step to reconcile because he wants her to regret. In return it pained him to see her in pain but still he did to make sure about the future and strengthen their love. This is what I tried to show. I am sorry if I am not able to show it properly.
Last about Dp. No parent will just forgive someone who is responsible for the pain of their children. He still loves Ragini as much as Jeevika but he himself is hurt remembering how his son was broken. He was broken remembering how his son craved for both Jeevika and Ragini. He was broken remembering how his son was punished for not knowing what his mistake was. All in all he wants the person to regret. That is the reason he spoke like that in the last previous part. He will be selfish for sure for his son. He wants to make himself sure that his son will not be facing another such situation in his life. He definitely will be worried for his kids. Yes he let Sanskar forgive Jeevika because at some point he knows what Jeevika might had thought before taking her stand. Hope I made my points clear.
Thank you so much for putting your points and letting me know your views guys. I felt very happy by the way you guys have been taking my story. If you have any more negative points please do tell me I will clear them. I kept my POV due to which I am taking the story. And About Ragini's pain you will see her sharing her pain once they reconcile. They both will speak their heart out and make everything right in their life.
Today's update you will see how Dp wants to check Ragini's love. I just request you to think about his POV. He wants to assure himself that his son will not face anything like the past in future. He is just trying to protect his son and his happiness which lies in Ragini now. You will see how the things changed due to one misunderstanding in their life. How the trust has become strong in them towards Sanskar.
Let me also tell you that the story is mostly about the unconditional love of Sanskar towards his di ma and Ragini. So many things will be how he tries to show his love towards them. He showed his love by marrying Ragini in an abnormal circumstances of their life just because Jeevika has asked him to. Otherwise it wasn't needed for him to marry Ragini at that time. He still loved Ragini even after knowing that she didn’t trust him. He still couldn’t see a single tear from her eyes. It makes him feel weak.
Hope everything is clear. Now let's jump finally into the part.
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It's been ten days since the night of Ragini had got drunk. Sanskar went to his music trip the next day before even Ragini wakes up asking Jeevika to take care. He wanted to wait and talk to her a lot. He wanted her to share her pain. He wanted him to share his pain to her. He want to reconcile with her as soon as possible. He is fed up of all this. He just wants peace now. But his music trip can't be delayed. To his bad luck he has to get struck there because of some issues regarding his music album. Finally he came back that morning. He entered his room and saw Ragini sleeping peacefully hugging the pillow which he uses to sleep. He smiles. He moves towards her and sits beside her.
Sanskar: I missed you so much Sweetheart!
He bends and kisses Ragini’s forehead. She smiles in deep sleep. His lips broke into smile seeing her smile feeling him. He caresses her head and goes to freshen up. By the time he comes out he sees Ragini waiting for him. She smiles brightly seeing him and runs to him. She hugs him tight. He gets surprised but hugs her back. This made Ragini smile even more brighter. He closed his eyes feeling her in his embrace.
Ragini: I missed you so much.
She whispers. Sanskar smiles more and tightens his hug. Ragini’s eyes shine. Ragini breaks the hug and looks at his smiling face. She felt different in his smile. She felt difference in him. It was the same old Sanskar she had seen when she met him the first time. Sanskar looked confused at her as she was staring him without blinking his eyes. He twitched his fingers in front of her bringing her back to the world.
Sanskar: What happened?
Ragini smiled and shook her head.
Sanskar: Go freshen up and come.
He said pointing to the washroom. She nodded and went still smiling brightly.
Ragini: (to herself) Is it what I think or it’s just my imagination?
She shrugs and goes to get ready.
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All the people in Maheshwari house are having breakfast talking randomly. Sanskar is stealing glances of Ragini secretly which didn’t go unnoticed by Ragini. She felt it different but also very happy. She felt happy to see the change in him. She remembered what she spoke that night and was embarrassed but also felt that atleast she spoke a little of her heart though not completely in that state. The door bell rang.
Ragini: I will go and see.
Saying she turns to go. But her expression changed to worry. She goes and opens the door and her face turned horrifying seeing the person. It was a postman. She gulped and received the courier of her name. She signed and closed the door. She was about to escape to her room when Jeevika called her.
Jeevika: Ragu where are you going? Complete your breakfast and go. And who is at the door?
Ragini gulped and went towards the table.
Ragini: (stammering) It’s…it’s courier for me bhabhi.
Jeevika: Oh did you order something?
She asks looking at the cover in Ragini’s hand.
Ragini: Haan… just a book!
Ragini says looking down.
Jeevika: (excited) Which book? I am already getting bored. Please let me read it first na Ragu!
Ragini: (immediately) NO BHABHI!
All get shocked for her loud voice and Jeevika speaks.
Jeevika: (confused) Why are you shouting for that Ragu? I just asked to read it first.
Ragini: I am sorry!
She says looking down. Jeevika just nods. All get back to their food.
Jeevika: It’s ok Ragu. Sit and eat.
Ragini nods and sits to eat by keeping the cover on the table. It’s a bit in the edge of the table. Ragini in tension didn’t observe that she kept it in the edge. Jeevika completes her food and gets up to go when accidentally her hand hits the cover and it falls down revealing what is inside the cover. Ragini gasps as Jeevika stood there shocked. Viren also stood to go when his eyes fall on the cover too.
Viren: (shouts) WHAT THE HELL!
All look confused. Viren bends and take the cover to see few photographs of Sanskar with some girl. The girl hugging him, Sanskar lifting the girl in his arms and the girl kissing Sanskar’s cheek. Ragini closes her eyes tight.
Ragini: Bhai listen to me. They are not true. Somebody is intentionally trying to create differences between me and Sanskar.
Viren: Why the hell you are explaining me Ragini? You think I believe these?
He throws the photos on the floor. That is when Sanskar also looks at them. He looks on.
Jeevika: Viren you really think Sanskar will do that. I am assuring you he can never do this.
She says suddenly panicking. Till now she was in shock to see like those photos. She came out of shock hearing Viren’s words.
Viren: Jeevika you think I believe these. No not at all. I will just enquire who is trying to do these things. I am not going to leave the person.
He fists his hands tight in anger.
Sanskar: (whispers) That’s true!
Ragini: Stop trying to joke at this time Sanskar. I can clearly say they are morphed.
Sanskar: (looks at her) But they are not except one!
Ragini: If they are not morphed also I don’t think it is what they are trying to show. I know you. I TRUST YOU. Bhai you get the details.
Viren: From when you are getting these?
He asks frowning. She looks down.
Ragini: From four days.
Viren: (shouts angrily) And you kept quiet.
Ragini flinches. Sanskar is just looking at the pictures. Viren bends and takes them again.
Viren: Where are the others?
Ragini: I burnt them. I don’t want anybody to see them and doubt Sanskar. So I burnt them. I know he cannot do something like that.
Sanskar: Didn’t I tell they are real?
He whispers.
Ragini: Didn’t I tell that they are not the way they are shown? Just shut up!
She shouts as she is not able to tolerate when he himself is saying wrong about him. Sanskar's eyes turn teary. He hugs her immediately and cries in her embrace. Ragini’s eyes turned teary too.
Ragini: I trust you Sanskar. I swear! I didn’t believe atleast for a second. I just burnt them immediately as soon as I received them on the very first day too. Today I was scared that you all will see and that is what happened. I wanted to hide from everyone and try to solve myself but. You please don’t cry.
Sanskar breaks the hug. He holds her hands and looks at all the three.
Sanskar: That girl is Ahana's colleague whom we met in the music trip. She was there for vacation. We all went to pub because Ahana was insisting for an outing. There we met her. She was all clingy though I tried to keep her away. I was sitting in a corner as I was not feeling good when she suddenly came there. She was heavily drunk. I looked for Ahana and the other two but couldn’t find them. She was blabbering to drop her till the car. I thought it wasn’t safe for her and took her with me searching for Ahana. She was continuously blabbering. I finally found Ahana and she helped me to drop her near her car. When she was about to enter the car she was about to kiss my cheek thanking me but I swear I kept my hand on my cheek before she could kiss me. That photo was morphed.
Sanskar ends with teary eyes.
Ragini: (joins her forehead with his) I told na it wasn’t what they are trying to show. I trust you Sanskar. I didn’t want this explanation too but I let you speak because I know you will not feel good if you keep that inside you. I swear I never doubted you.
Sanskar just nods with teary eyes.
Ragini: You don’t trust me?
She asks painfully. Sanskar immediately cups her face.
Sanskar: No I am not saying that Sweetheart. I trust you. And thank you for trusting me.
Ragini: People don’t commit same mistake again and again Sanskar. If they do so it is not called a mistake. Once I did a big mistake of not trusting you and we had to go through a lot. Not again. I will not commit another mistake by not trusting you. No matter what I am with you and I know my Sanskar can never do something like that. Not even in his dreams.
VirIka looks at them teary eyes. Sanskar smiles with teary eyes.
Sanskar: I don’t want to say it like this. I have planned a lot but I am not able to stop myself. I LOVE YOU Ragini! I Love You so much! I am sorry for everything!
Ragini’s heart skipped a beat. Did she really listen those words? While VirIka were smiling happily. Dp and Nani were all silent still not speaking anything. Till now they both didn’t speak anything.
Ragini: It means?
She asks expecting what she is thinking is true. Sanskar smiles and nods yes. Ragini immediately hugs him tight and bursts out into cry. Sanskar also hugs her tight and cries. Both of them cry their heart out. Dp smiles a little. VirIka are also hugging each other. Nani is smiling brightly. RagSan compose and break the hug. Sanskar wipes her tears while Ragini does his.
Dp: Sanskar!
Everybody turn towards him.
Dp: These are sent by me.
All gasp.
Dp: On that day when you told me you will make everything right once you return I was happy. Very happy that finally both of you will be back to normal. I was happy that finally I will get back my Sanskar and my Gudiya. But there was a fear in me. I just can’t stop myself to check out how strong your bond and love has become because of your past. I thought so much but could get nothing. I called to Ahana as she is the only one I know could help me in this. I spoke to her about my worry. She tried to explain me about how much you both love but my fear was not letting me to get convinced. So finally she agreed and assured me she would do something. At that time she saw her friend. She got an immediate idea and it was both of them along with Shravan did it. She sent me those photographs and asked me to send it to Ragini secretly. But she also asked me to rethink as she doesn’t want any other problems in all our lives. I thought again but the fear was not leaving me. So I decided let me do and prove myself wrong. I know this will hurt you all but I couldn’t think anything at that time and also I don’t want any risks when it comes to your relation.
He says and look at everyone. Nobody spoke a word. All are just looking at him.
Dp: I want only Ragini to speak. Because it’s her who is hurt the most because of my this work.
Ragini moved towards him slowly. She held his hands. She was about to speak but Dp interrupted her.
Dp: No today I want to speak Gudiya. Yes I was and am selfish. I am selfish to see my children happy in future. I don’t want my children to face any trust issues in future. Both of you have a very long life where you may cross many such situations and I want you both stay together and face it instead of doubting each other. I wanted you to regret for the distrust you had earlier on Sanskar. That is why I stood with Sanskar. I stood for him when he was punishing you. I was partial. Everything I did was only for your both future. I know I had hurt you a lot in this process. But I never hated you. You were, you are and you will always be my Gudiya. I am really sorry for hurting you before and also now.
Ragini shook her head.
Ragini: I understand every action of yours papa. A parent always thinks of his/her children's happiness. I know how much I matter to you. You don’t need to feel sorry. Infact I am the reason for all these. I should be sorry for everything. I am sorry.
Dp takes her into his embrace. Everybody's eyes are filled with tears.
Dp: (looking at Sanskar) I am sorry Beta!
Sanskar shakes his head and also joins the hug. Jeevika is smiling with tears being in Viren's embrace. Sanskar broke the hug and looked at VirIka. He moved towards them.
Sanskar: Thank you!
Viren breaks the hug from Jeevika. He shakes his head and hugs Sanskar.
Viren: As Ragini said people make a mistake only once. If they repeat same mistake it is not called as mistake.
Sanskar nods. He looks at Ragini. She smiles with tears. He moves to her. He forwards his hand. She puts her hand on his.
Sanskar: Let’s go. I want something from you.
Ragini nods. They look at everyone. They all nod with smile. Sanskar takes Ragini from there. They get into the car and Sanskar drives off. The drive was silent. Neither of them spoke. Sanskar stopped the car just like after ten minutes. Ragini looked at the park which is their favourite place. He got down and opened the door of her side. He forwarded his hand to her and she placed hers in it happily.
He took her to their favourite bench. They both got settled there. He holds her hand and looks at her. Ragini is already looking at him.
Sanskar: I never let you speak. I always just showed my anger. But I know if I was in pain you also were in pain. If I have went through worst you also had went through worst. Today I want you to let out everything. I want you to share your pain with me. Speak everything. Cry how much you want to but today you have to let everything. Today should be the last day where you will carry all the pain for yourself. I am here to remove every pain. I am here to cure you.
Ragini’s eyes already turned teary. She slowly starts sobbing and finally let’s out her cry. She hugs him immediately crying loudly on his chest. Sanskar’s eyes are flowing too. His eyes are closed and he is hugging her tight.
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So finally they are together. But they are still in pain. They will be each other’s cure. They will let everything and get peace becoming each other’s support. You will see their conversation in next part. And about the surprise Sanskar has planned for Ragini you will get it either in next part or the later one.
If I hurt you guys with the opening Author's note and today’s part mainly about Dp’s plan I am very sorry. This is the way I have planned the story.
Thank you for reading.
With Love
Dharani (Dhaరणि)
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