Please comment on each individual chapter. In other words, what the story contains.

Your excitement and what you liked and didn't like. How you liked the characters and the story overall.

Is it really that difficult to give proper feedback? Then let me help you out a little. 

Ask yourself these questions and answer them individually for the stories in the comments section of each chapter!

- What do you particularly like?

- What don't you particularly like?

- Which characters do you particularly like?

- Which characters don't you like so much?

- Which characters could be given a little more life?

- What could I improve?

- What do you find particularly exciting?

- What excites you about secrets?

- What did you find surprising?

- What do you think I did well?

- How well can you imagine the scenes?

- What do you find funny?

- Where do you have to laugh?

- Who do you like?

- Who do you dislike?

- Where do you particularly root for?

I may have forgotten some questions, haven't I?

Not all of them always fit into one chapter.

You don't have to ask the exact same questions, but at least answer a few or something similar.

That would really please a real writer who wants to become an author. By the way, if you don't like something, please answer constructively.

That would please so many people who really want to understand it.

Please let me know if you've read it in the comments below this announcement. So I know it hasn't been ignored!