Author's Notes: Wow, I've been getting tons of feedback! And I wouldn't want it any other way! Your violent ways crack me up! Keep 'em coming! They always make my day! Banners would be nice, too. (Hint, hint!)

"WHAT THE HELL!!! H-He ALIVE. OH MY FUCKING GAWD PATRICK'S ALIVE!!! AND THE JULI- JULISSA- ER JULIANIE OH 4GET IT I DONT CARE A DAMN 2 REMEMBER THATS SLUT NAME, SHE'S TAKING CREDIT 4 THE CHILD OH NO SERIE. CRAP MY LAPTOP FELL. ON2 THE OUT RAGE I WISH I WAS IN FRONT OF THE BITCH'S FACE SO I CAN SHOW OFF MY MOVES. FUCK!!! IT FELL AGAIN!!! YO VOY A DARLE ESA CHICA UN PEDAZO DE MI MENTE. ( I'm gonna give that chick a piece of my mind). HOW THE HELL DOES THE LAP TOP KEEP ON FALLING!?!?!?!?!?! Aww I bet Patrick's so cute I wanna hug him. HUGGH I just relized Adam is falling 4 the trick tat slutzilla said. How culd he i bet she would've gotten an abortion if tat was really her child. Oh and poor Rachel she think Pat is dead. There I think I said enough. :) No I for got someting

To: Slutzilla  

From: Me

BEEP YOU AND YOU CAN BEEP BEEP BEEP OR FIND SOMEONE ELSE TO BEEP BEEP BEEP YOU THAT ISNT ADAM AND GIRL I HOPE YOU SLEEP W/ 1 EYE OPEN CAUSE THIS GIRL COMING AT YA SO STOP TALKING BEEP BOUT RACHEL AND HOW DARE U BEEP STEAL HER CHILD. ANYWAYS THX 4 LETTING ME REALIZE THERE R SOME REALLY STUPID PEOPLE IN THIS WORLD." 

-Newcomer28 (Quizilla)

"YOU'RE STORY IS FAAAAR FROM CRAZY! Seriously, you better get them back together, and you better have a good explenation missy - gives evils - Well atleast Ricky's dead. But she better go back to where she lived, happy with Adam! Grrrr. Watch it. (Only kidding) Or am i? XD" - xhunxbunx (Quizilla)

"OHMYGOD SHE DIDN'T! THAT FUCKING PREPPYISH WHORRISH, STUCK UP, PATHETIC, ANNOYING, BITCHY PLASTIC BRUNETTE BARBIE!!!!!!!!!!! I CANT BELIEVE SHE CLAIMED PATRICK! HOW DID SHE EVEN FIND HIM??? OMG IT WAS RICKY, WASNT IT?? OMG THAT WAS TOTALLY UNEXPECTED--and i kinda love it. BUT SHE WHO'S NAME SHALL NOT BE MENTIONED IS SUCK AN ANNOYING PRAT!

*asks in a tiny voice* is adam gonna marry her now because of patrick?

HE BETTER NOT!!!!!! I BET PATRICK LOOKS NOTHING LIKE THAT WHORE! HE DOESN'T DESERVE A LYING, PATHETIC EXAMPLE OF A SLUT AS A MOTHER!! little patrick deserves SOOO much better.

SO MUCH BETTER! >:O" -Mitzi7 (Quizilla)

"Well, first off, before I get.... distracted... I think that the story is AWESOME!!!! Next is where I get distracted... Juliana is such a BITCH!!! Wait, that would be a compliment... Still.. You know, I bet she's that psychopath that kidnapped Rachel's sister or partner in crime. Patrick wasn't stillborn, and since the guy didn't want her to know that... he gave the baby to his sister...SHE IS SUCH A drachnea... stooping so low as to steal someone's baby, claim it as her own.. then tell the baby's father that SHE"S the actual FREAKING mother!!!!!!! And , did Rachel REALLY have to fall in love with a guy so dumb THAT THE WORLD COULD EXPLODE AND HE WOULDN'T NOTICE?? I mean,,, If he had CONTACTED her or at least TRIED TO, he would have known about her being pregnant, and he would know that bitch drachnea was a freaking waste of his time, money, attention, anything else he gave her, and now that SHE'S A LIAR. But no.... he has to be "in love with her". HOW DUMB CAN GUYS GET... he has some serious issues with his life and principles and sense of right and wrong and truths and lies.......... Right, I'm going to cut off before my computer becomes a ball of metal... Bye!!!" - hiddenbehindlies (Quizilla)

WTF?!?!?!?!?! THAT LITTLE H-0-3 HAS PATRICK!! MANN I JUST WANT TO JUMP THROUGHT THIS COMPUTER AND RIP HER HEAD OFF AND FEED IT TO MY NEIGHBOR'S DOG!!!! -thatsnotmyname

YESSSSS!!!!!!!!!! PATTY IS A L I V E IM SO HAPPY IM IN HYSTERICS! CAN U TELL? SAY NO! jULI- WATS HER NAME IS SUCH A BI-OTCH, PLASTIC, BARBIE, WANNABE, SLUT, WHORE FACE, RICKY KNOWER! OH YEAH I WENT THERE I AM FURIOUS I WANT 2 KILL RICKY ALL OVER AGAIN AND SPIT IN HIS FACE. OUT OF ALL THE PEOPLE Y HER HECK SHE PROBABLY MOLESTED THE POOR LITTLE KID. HES ONLY FOUR AND ALREADY MOST LIKELY TRAUMATIZED FROM WAKING UP TO THAT OUTRAGEOUSLY UGLY AND NASTY FACE OF A SLUT. OMG POOR PATRICK WAT DID HE DO TO DESERVE THIS. AND WE GOT WASTED AND I GOT PREGENANT MY BUT I MEAN FIRST HE WOULD OF NOTICED SECOND HE DID NOT EVEN GO 2 THE FREAKING PARTY!SHE IS LYING THROUGH HER TEETH! THE NERVE OF HER! GET THE SLUT FACE AWAY FROM LITTLE PATTY NOW! OR IT WILL GET PERSONAL I WILL RIP OUT EVERY PRETTY EXTENSION FROM HER PRETTY LITTLE HEAD 1 BY 1. JUST LET ME AT HER! AND 4 THOSE OF U WHO R LAUGHING STOP THIS IS NO LAUGHING MATTER WE R TALKING TRAUMATIZED LITTLE BOY! THAT IS A CODE RED! -ShopDivaKels97

WHAT THE FUCK? IS THAT MY LITTLE PATRICK UP THERE? How the HELL is the possible. Tell me, now. Right right now. I need to know.  

Why is he with that slut? Why did Adam sleep with that slut? WHY WHY WHY? Oh fucking God, why is he with her? I thought Ricky, and boom, and die, and shit... I'm confused.  

Send Patrick back to his mommy! His REAL one! GAHHHHHH.  

And there goes Adam, being an idiot again. For fuck's sake, he needs to rack his brain and remember. Really, he does.  

I agree with longtime321, Rachel needs to get over him. She probably has a billion guys after her because she's famous, and she still loves this little no one, that is dating a slut. GET. OVER. HIM.

ps. I like what longtime321 said, FLAME OFF. -surahh

k...uuummm... what just happened k..umm..thinking  

thinking... thinking  

pondering..pondering  

k.. wha.. wha.. wa..what wait how do i start this  

k i got it.......

THAT FUCKIN CONIVING WHORE SLUT BITCH... SHE IS PROB LYIN CUZ SHE'S A LIL HOE WHO WANTS ADAM ALL 2 HERSELF THAT FUCKIN BITCH NXT THING YOU KNO JUL.. JULIA..JULIANN..JAZLEEN.. AAAHHH WHO GIVE THE FUCK WAT EVER THE WHORES NAME WAS WORKIN WITH RICKY N THE BABY NEVER DIED..  

BUT SHE HAS THE FUCKIN GUTS 2 FUCKIN BRING A KID 2 HIM WEN HE HAD A KID WIT RACHEL 1ST THAT KID IS PROB SUM KID SHE ADOPTED 2 PERTEND 2 B HIS KID OR I'M TELLIN U SHE WANTED ADAM ALL ALONG N WAS PLOTTING WITH RICKY CUZ RICKY WANTED RACHEL N SHE WANTED ADAM THE THING IS HOW DO THEY KNO EACH OTHER. N THAT FUCKIN BITCH HAS THE NERVE 2 CALL HIM PATRICK  

N HE IS GONNA B A FUCKIN RETARD N FALL FOR IT THAT FUCKIN IDIOT  

I WANT HIM 2 KNO SO BADLY WAT RACHEL WENT THROU ALL THE PAIN N HURT WHILE HE IS BEING ALL SKIPPING FREAKINN HAPPY FUCKIN HIS PERSONAL WHORE WHO IS PROB CHEATIN ON HIM U KNO I COULD PROB B ANOTHER GUYS KID THATS ANOTHER POSSIBILITY BUT PATRICK THAT IS NO COINCIDENCE SHE STOLE RACHELS BABY WITH RICKY. I KNO SHE HAS SUMTHIN 2 DO WITH IT N BTW I AM STILL MOURNING OVER LIL PATRICK'S DEATH =( I BLAME ALL THESE PROBLEMS ON THAT FUCKIN DICK OF A MAN RICKY  

BUT ADAM GETS THE BLAME 2 CUZ HE DIDIN EVEN TRY 2 CALL HER OH HOW YA DOIN "BABE U OKAY. I LOVE U BABE. R U OKAY.NNNOOO NOT EVEN TRYIN THAT FUCKIN PRICK  

N I JUS FUCKIN HATE SLUT BAG N I KNO 4 A FACT THATS NOT HER KID.. U WHOREBAG N I HATE ADAM SO MUCH N I WANT HIM 2 FEEL THE PAIN N SUFFER LIKE RACHEL THAT FUCKIN DOUCHE UGH HATE HIM SO MUCH ITS NOT EVEN FUNNY THAT BITCH ASS PRICK  

btw. i love my immmortal 1 of my favs from evanescence -imavampirechickx3

*Sighs heavily* Daaammn Adam, there ya go again, seriously fucking things up. I... I give up. Adam can go screw a tree for all i care, He doesn't deserve Rachel and she should go live life AND STOP BEING SO DAMN DEPRESSED! GAH! *Virtually throws bucket of ice cold water over weeping Rachel's head* "Get your HEAD out of your ASS, Woman! Is this what Susan B. Anthony faught for? For you to be all 'WAHHHH!!! I'm fucking famous and my life still sucks balls! WAAAAH!'. Well news flash, Rachel, YOU DON'T NEED HIM! YOU HAVE MONEY AND FAME AND GUYS PRACTICALLY SNOGGING THE TEAR-STAINED GROUND YOU WALK ON!" That's what I'd tell her.

~FLAME OFF~-longtime321

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Juliana and Patrick just stood there, watching Adam.

"Aren't you going to say anything?"

"No."

If he had been talking to Rachel, she would've made a smart ass comment about him having said something by saying no.

But Juliana was not and is not as witty as Rachel. She doesn't even come close.

"Come here, sweetie!" Kia said to Patrick.

She took the little boy's hand and led him out of the room so he wouldn't hear any more inappropriate words.

"I don't believe you." Adam said when the door shut.

"And why don't you believe me?"

"Because it's way too bizarre, that's why."

"So? Life is bizarre. He's your son, godammit."

Adam was in some deep shit. He didn't love Juliana-he never did.

But now there's a kid involved, and he didn't know what to do.

"What the hell is wrong with you? Why the hell didn't you say anything before? And don't say you were scared. You weren't scared when you insulted Rachel to her face.

"What is with you and Rachel, huh?"

"You wanna know? She's my ex-girlfriend!"

"And his first and only love," Drew added.

Juliana glared at him.

Drew merely shrugged, as if to say "Don't look at me like that. You know it's true."

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Ugh. Fine, I'll admit it. I was crying again. I can't stop the waterworks! And it makes me so mad!

"Let's go out! Ooh! I say we go get a delicious foot long at Subway," Sierra suggested.

I pondered this for a moment. That does sound good...

Why am I giving it so much thought? It's good food!

"Let's go!"

When we got there, we were bombarded with fans.

I only had to sign about a billion autographs before I got my food.

The only reason I only had to sign about a billion was because my bodyguard, Harold, got them away from me.

I was eating in peace when this adorable little girl that looked about six came up to me squealing, and asked for a picture.

Instead of being mad like some celebrities would have, I just laughed.

She's so cute!

Then I saw a handsome guy that looked my age come up behind her.

"Lizzie, I told you to at least wait until she was finished eating!" he told her.

He turned towards me and said, "I'm sorry about that. A seven year old who just saw her favorite singer is a little hard to control. Plus, she's my sister. There's no way she was going to listen to me."

'He's cute!' Sierra mouthed to me.

I just smiled.

"It's okay. She's adorable, so I'll let it slide."

"I'm pretty adorable myself, too, aren't I?"

I laughed, imaging him in the outfit his little sister was sporting: a cute little winter dress and a pink coat.

"Sure. Whatever helps you sleep at night."

He just laughed.

"Well, am I adorable enough for you to accept a dinner invitation from me?"

I haven't been on a date in... almost six years...

Wow, I am such a loser.

"Just barely."

"I'm Mark."

"I'm-"

"I know who you are."

"Right. Forgot for a minute there..."

He smiled, and we exchanged phone numbers.

I told him I would be the one to text or call him when I decided on a time and place.

Omigod.

I have a... date.

I think hell just froze over.

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A/N: Mark is portrayed by Jesse Metcalfe. Here's a link: http://imstars.aufeminin.com/stars/fan/jesse-metcalfe/jesse-metcalfe-20060808-150943.jpg