Hey, Twisters! 

I'm done editing part one of the story so I'm starting with the next part now. I've made some mild changes, like focusing more on Jess's background before she goes to the fairy tale world..

I've added a bit more detail to her parents, like her Mum's Spanish origin, and her Dad's love for cooking, and also his Caribbean background.  Her surname is now Harrison Sanchez instead of just Harrison, and she also has an obsessive love for churros. Also, Stormy is now a black wolf, instead of grey and white. I thought it would be a bit more unique.

So that's a brief summary of the editing, plus the grammar mistakes and all that.  

I hope you all enjoy part two of twisted! I can't wait to get started!