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LOVE OR BETRAYAL~4

By : Pearbhi_lover_priyu

Cover : 2.5 / 5
Firstly, you didn't give a proper picture or proper cover to that OS and if I judge the main cover of the book then I don't think it is attractive enough....It can be better.

Title : 3.5 / 5
The title is matching with the storyline but the only thing is it is so common.....most of the people use this title.

Description : 2 / 5
You only write in book description that OS TS will be posted here but you can make it a little interesting even if you can write the names of the books .....if I am judging as OS description then you write that destiny gives them betrayal but in actuality behir gave betrayal to anu.

Length : 10 / 10
Length is enough...
It contains sufficient things.

Plot : 6.5 / 10
I don't think the plot is really good...like seriously firstly she is so young secondly more than having the guilt of her sister suicide due to them...she is feeling bad that mahir buy her.

Grammar : 3.5 / 5
Having some grammatical errors.

Overall impression : 5 / 10
The OS is quite good but I may suggest you that you should add a proper picture like cover in media and also give a nice description to book and cover also.

33 / 50

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A GLIMPSE IN THE LIFE OF A RAPE VICTIM

BY Pearbhi_lover_priyu

Cover : 3 / 5
The cover is nice but it can be more perfect , the emotions are matching with the story but it is not attractive enough.

Title : 3 / 5
The title sounds nice but the story is not only about Bela it also contains Mahir's side even if you mention that both sisters will love the same person even if it is a bit long.

Description : 4 / 5
The description is really Interesting but the only thing is you write exactly the same in introduction.....if you can then change a bit.

First Impression : 8 / 10
The starting is good...you tell every sufficient thing about the characters even the story starts nicely but some things are strange like firstly bela blush when shravani teases her with the name of mahir then she immediately agrees happily to marry shankar.

Plot : 8 / 10
The plot is really interesting, emotional and amazing... In starting having emotional things and family moments then it became interesting but also a bit confusing.

Grammar : 3 / 5
It's having grammatical issues and spelling mistakes a little.

Character development : 8 / 10
Character development is smooth..perfectly described.

Writing style : 4 / 5
It is good..you describe emotions and surroundings in paragraphs and then dialogues.

Length of chapters : 5 / 5
I usually don't think that length matters but still I can say that your chapters are having enough things which they have to contain.

Overall impression : 12 / 15
The book is quite amazing having suspense, but if you can then make a new cover...personally before judging many times I saw your book but I don't get attracted to much...it should be amazing in future also.

Total :- 58/75

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LOVE OR BETRAYAL [ 5 ]

By : Pearbhi_lover_priyu

Cover : 2.5/5
It's book cover is a collage with text...you can make it more good.

Title : 3.5/5
Title is matching with the story but....may I tell you something that everyone who will read the story will think that the main lead gives betrayal to each other... But it's ok this title is also nice.

Description : 1 / 5
You didn't give any proper description...neither in the book description nor before that specific OS start....if you don't know what to write...then you should write a quote matching with the plot of the story .

Length : 10 /10
Length was perfectly enough...it contained enough things.

Plot : 8 / 10
Plot was nice...it's true that not all parents love their child as much as I know it was adapted from ~ EK HASEENA THI EK DEEWANA THA...but yes you changed so many things in this...nice!

Grammar : 4/5
Not many issues...some minor mistakes.

Overall impression : 8/10
The OS is really good...i may suggest you add a nice description and cover .

37 / 50

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Loveless life

By : Pearbhi_lover_priyu

Cover : 3 / 5
Cover is too beautiful but it is not matching with the emotions of the story....the story is based on a friendship betrayal and it is emotional also.

Title : 4 / 5
It is good enough but it can be better.

Description : 4 / 5
Description is quite interesting....it's good.

First impression : 7 / 10
It was quite good...you did an amazing job.

Plot : 8.5 / 10
Plot was really interesting..
An emotional story with so many twists and turns...you did an amazing job.

Grammar : 3.5 / 5
It's having some errors and vocabulary mistakes...you should work on it when you get time.

Character development : 8 / 10
Character development is quite impressive after all it is a short story... You take it nicely but you can make it better. After all, I personally think you're a good writer.

Writing style : 4 / 5
It is perfect. Some things are a little irritating but a part of that is that everything is nice.

Length of chapters : 5 / 5
Length of chapters is perfectly enough.

Overall impression : 12 / 15
The story was really nice but I may suggest that you should change cover and change grammatical errors.

59 / 75

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Tied knot to hatred

By : ImaginaryPagal

Cover : 4 / 5
Cover is really beautiful looking quite amazing...but it can be better also because due to the space it is not showing the whole picture.

Title : 3 / 5
Title is looking nice and matching with the story but the thing which is a little strange is it can be tied knot of hatred more than tied knot to hatred....kindly tell me if you feel wrong because even I am confused now.

Description : 4 / 5
Description is really good....with a particular scene.

First impression : 7 / 10
First impression was good but not best..I am pretty sure you can make it better.

Plot : 8.5/10
Plot was quite good and simple with some twists.

Grammar : 4 / 5
It is not having many issues and hardly has mistakes..it's good .

Character development 9 / 10
Character development is smooth and perfect.

Writing style : 5/5
Writing style is perfect.

Length of chapters : 5/5
It is also enough to have containful things.

Overall impression : 12 / 15
A story with perfect flow....you write it beautifully but there are still some things which can be better.

61.5 / 75

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ImaginaryPagal is the overall highest scorer among the five books.