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1) Misunderstanding by writer_sweetie

Cover:3/5
The cover is beautiful but on the cover the title, the title is different from the title.

Title:5/5
The title was amazing.it's perfectly footed for the os.

Description or blurb:3.5/5
The blurb is nice and effective,but it's short,it can be long.

Length:8/10
The os covered almost everything,but I think you could have covered more.

Plot and storyline:9/10
The story line is great. The topic is also amazing. The plot is different from others. In short it's beautiful

Grammar: 3/5
There are few spelling mistakes and some grammatical errors. But they can be edited.

Overall impression:9/10
You can change the cover and correct the mistakes.keep going on write os's..all the very best for your future writings.

Total:40.5/50

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2) Forcely Arranged...! By the_flawed_girl

Cover:5/5
The cover is beautiful, the details were also amazingly presented, in total loved  the cover

Title:5/5
Coming to the title it was very relatable with the story, in short, the title is perfect for the story.

Description:4.5/5
The description is awesome, readers will for sure get excited to read the story, and the way you have written it was also amazing.

First impression:9/10
The prologue is quite interesting, it was attractive, I loved the way you have written the introduction of the characters, but I think you can add a piece of even much information about story, The first chapters were written beautifully and detailed everything

Plot:8/10
The plot was very unique and interesting in my readings. The first book I read about a young couple marrying was great but I think this is too unrealistic, nowadays these are not acceptable. I agree it's imaginary but still, leaving that part the plot is great.

Grammar:4/5
There were very few grammatical errors and some spelling mistakes which are minor and can be corrected.

Character development:9/10
You have very well mentioned the behavior of the characters with each other respectively, by reading it readers will get a brief note of the perspective of the characters which is amazing.

Writing style:4/5
Your writing style is quite amazing and I think you have used correct things in the correct place which is very commendable, it was very easy to know who has written where and what they are specifically talking about.

Length of the chapters:4/5
You have almost written everything. Maybe you can write some more about the emotions of the person in a very detailed manner. What you have written is nice but you can write some more, that’s it.

Overall impression:11/15
1 mark for plot,1 mark for character development, 2 marks for grammar.

Overall I enjoyed reading and judging the book but I was very little disappointed with plot which is not encourageable but i loved the way you written the story and i suggest you add a little bit more about characters that who are felling, I think you have written some less, and your book’s cover and title are perfectly suitable for the story and you can pay a little more attention towards the grammar that’s it.

Total:63.5/75

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3) True love by behir_love

Cover:5/5
The cover is beautiful, and the editing was great..keep it up.

Title:5/5
The title is also quite pretty, and it was relatable to the story.

Description:3.5/5
The description was written very well , it was desirable and exciting, but you can write a scene or a dialogue.

First impression:9.5/10
You introduced the characters very well, and you have also written their nature, I loved it. The first chapters were written beautifully, which will make readers fall in love with the story.

Plot:8/10
In the beginning, the plot was quite common , slowly when I read more, it was quite unique and the story is very different from others, and the plot went too good after a few parts from starting.

Grammar:4/5
The grammar was good, there were very minor mistakes that could be corrected, the mistakes didn't particularly have any bad effect.

Character development: 8.5/10
The character development ,in the starting itself you very well implanted their nature,the character development was slow and i liked it very much.you have written their behaviour towards others also amazingly.

Writing style:3.5/5
Your writing style is amazing .you explained the story very well.it decried the emotions of characters very well but somewhere I felt it could be better.

Length of their chapters:3.5/5
As i said i felt that some where emotions of characters were less,but other than that it has all the content it should have,

Overall impression:12/15
1mark is deducted for plot,1 mark is deducted for the writing style.1 mark for description as well as grammar.the cover and title are too good i loved the you have written everything and the was also great after some parts from start.and overall, the story is spectacular.i l enjoyed the journey of judging and reading your book.

Total:62.5/75

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4) Dil Musafir hai Ishq Mein 2 by Behir_shrahir_love_

Cover:5/5
The cover is beautiful.

Title:4/5
The title in hearing is beautiful

Description:5/5
It's amazing, the way you wrote is spectacular.
After reading, description readers will be very excited to read your story

First impression:7/10
I loved the way you introduced the situation where the couple is in. but the introduction about the characters is very less..otherwise, the preface was amazing.

Plot:8/10
The plot is quite different and interesting.the way you wrote their situations..but the story lacks in the description of other than main leads. otherwise, the plot is nice

Grammar:4/5
There are very minor mistakes.. which can be edited. And there are some grammatical errors.

Character development:9/10
I loved the character development of the story, you clearly explained how the characters behave with each other.

Writing style:5/5
It is simply superb, it has a very understandable writing style and a very unique writing style

Length of the chapters:5/5
Chapters almost covered everything it should have, you can write some deeper and I liked the length it was medium neither it was too long nor too less.

Overall impression:13/15
2 marks deducted for lack of character description,1 mark for grammar and some minor mistakes.over all i genuinely loved reading the  book and judging it,you writing style was beautiful the way you showed the importance of the characters is were commendable,the plot is awesome ,coming to the title and book cover they were epic.

I would suggest you to give a clear character description about all the characters and edit the mistakes and grammatical errors.

Overall the book was amazing.

Total:65/75

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5) HAAL E DIL MERA by YalnaazParveen

Cover 5/5
The cover is awesome and innovative,loved the way you edited it

Title : 4/5
Title in hearing is amazing,and I loved it, it is very unique, but somewhere in reading the story I felt the relatability lost between story and title

Description:3.5/5
The description is awesome, you have given a little bit of a rough image of the story how it will be but I think the description is very less, you can do something more attractive and exciting, as I have said it just gave a little bit of how characters are.

First impression:8/10
The introduction of leads looked very common, nonetheless, the first few chapters were nice and interesting.it was realistic.

Plot:7/10
The plot could have been better ,in the starting it looked like routine but reading through it was different,slowly there is growth in the writing which i loved during reading i the first it was just about their college slowly other characters came in,keeping that  apart the plot was great

Grammar:3/5
While reading I spotted a few spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes,these readers may lose the interest in reading the story ,and be very careful while writing.

Character development:8/10
You have given a lot of importance to the leads other than leads other characters description was very less i feel you could have explained some more about the other characters.

Writing style:4/5
Your writing style is simply superb, it was easy to understand in a few parts you have messed up a little but that can get covered up.

Length of the chapters:4/5
The length of the chapters are medium,it almost covered everything it should have but could have written more about others also.

Overall impression:10/15
2 marks for grammar, 2 marks for plot and 1 mark for less description about other characters.

Your title and cover are spectacular i love your editing skills. I enjoyed a lot while reading your book and while judging.i suggest you to  add something interesting to your blurb and some more information about other characters and pay attention to your spellings and grammar

Your story’s plot is very exciting.Overall it was great reading and judging your book.

Total:66/75 (hosts checked the total it was 56.5/75)

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Behir_shrahir_love_ is the highest overall scorer among all the participants, congratulations!