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My Weekend Boyfriend-SS by Behir_shrahir_love_

Cover- 4/5
Cover is nice and the font and style by which you wrote title is also good. Picture used is good and it shows naughty nature but it's little dull. Can be changed by editing the effect used but it's not required though.

Title- 5/5
Title is apt for this story and really interesting. It catches the attention of reader and makes a great suspense,"My Weekend Boyfriend" that how this can happen? Boyfriend is only for weekend or something else. It creates a urge to read and know what's it's about. Personally this title caught my attention and made me go and peep inside story.

Description/Blurb- 4/5
Description contains a scene from the story which tells the chemistry of the pair and creates interest to read. You very wittingly wrote a scene instead of writing concept or some information about the story making a suspense about it and leaves with the same question to explore while reading the story that what's the deal with boyfriend for limited period of time.

First impression (After reading 5 chapters)- 9/10
Reading first five chapters made me (and readers must be also) glued to this story to read all parts in one go. You wrote it in a way that developed interest to this story and wanting to know what will happen next.

Plot 9/10
Well plot is really interesting like some movie. Bela's sister invited her with her boyfriend and she accepted it knowing she don't have one but she very cleverly put it as a condition in front of a popular boy of college Mahir to act like her boyfriend for weekend in exchange of help in his project but after spending time they really fall for each other. It's a super story but it would be better if you would have shown a little more together time of behir as friends together or when Mahir was persuading Bela to accept her real feelings for him. As a writer you wrote all things to point but from the view of readers little more was required as readers wanted to see more. And same thing in the end when Mahir proposed her it would have been better if you would have shown little more details or shown little more. 

Grammar- 4/5
Your grammar is good. There were little mistakes but not very big.

Character development- 9/10
Development of all the characters were smooth. Bela was a studious and introvert girl who has a wrong perception about herself due to some bad incident and Mahir who was a popular boy changed it and the same goes with Mahir who was not serious, fell in love after spending time with a simple girl for real.  

It would have been better if you would have shown a little more bond between Juhi and Bela. It was like she doesn't know what's happening in her sister's life for real. But she did a great job by inviting her and because of her, Bela and Mahir became behir. 

Change in nature of Ruhi was a real sudden and shocking one in the last part.

Writing style- 4/5
Writing style was good. You tried a new style by writing story in different scenes. 

Length of chapters- 5/5
Length of chapters was ok nor too big, neither too short.

Overall impression 15/15
Overall impression is amazing. Personally I really loved this book. It can take place in favourites of anyone who read.

As a reader, I will suggest people to read this book. 

Total- 68/75

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Undefinable love by writer_sweetie

Cover- 4/5
Cover is nice and simple but can be more interesting.

Title- 4/5
Title is good and shows a beautiful meaning. It portrays that the love of main couple for each other is limitless. But it would be better if  the story there would be some more incidents that shows or explains this. If we see from Mahir's perception and character it was apt and good as for long 5 years he waited for his love and didn't stopped searching. 

Description/Blurb- 4/5
Description is really interesting. It's simple and eye catchy. It's hard for the people who loves cute romantic yet naughty stories to ignore this story after reading it.

First Impression - 10/10
My my after reading first few chapters it is difficult to stop reading. They are very cute. It must a hard job for people to wait for next update.

Plot- 8/10
Plot is really interesting that one secretary and boss have to marry with each other due to some reason. But there was this only. They got married and fell in love and then separated due to some misunderstanding. This was a simple story and you cleared it out in the beginning but it would have been better if you would have showed some interesting twists(not sad ones) as everything happened so fast. Readers would have enjoyed it more as they(including me) were already loving this story this would have made them more happy. 

I really liked the plot honestly.

Grammar- 4/5
Your grammar is okay. There were little little mistakes but not big.

Character development- 8/10
Character development was okay. But I felt everyone happened very fast like  love, breaking and gathering trust.

Writing style- 4/5
Your writing style is good. Just a little suggestion (don't mind) differentiate between main content and your pov. Like write it in bold or write after drawing a line. You can also write third person's pov in bold. It would look more attractive. Well it's your choice.

Length of chapters- 3/5
Length of chapters were very short. Although you specified it in description only but readers like long chapters.

Overall Impression- 13/15
Overall impression is very good. It was simple and cute story. In the end you rushed a little. It would have been better if you would have showed some details before final leap after again came together. 

People should read this story.

Total- 62/75

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She's the one for me by behirfan123

Cover-  5/5
Cover is good and attractive.

Title- 4/5
Title is nice,"She's the one for me." It portrays a good meaning and give different vibe and somewhere suits for this story.

Description/Blurb- 4/5
Description tells the main plot and story.

First Impression- 3/10
First impression is not good. Every person have different perception and according to me things which happened are not so good and are serious. Yes I agree there are all types of people and all types of stories emotional, happy, sad all things happen but this is so serious. 

Plot-  4/10
Plot is sad and fine but this is the bitter truth and these things do happen. But this topic is very serious and sensitive and you carried it out fine. Don't mind but I would suggest you not to write on these topics in future.

Grammar- 4/5
Your grammar is fine. Little mistakes are there but not very big. Your grammar will be improved by time itself.

Character development- 7/10
Character development of main protagonists are smooth. The way Mahir understood bela and stand for he is very good. Character development of main antagonists are also fine and they did what was expected from them but that of Pratham and Vikrant was little shocking. Vish and Suhani were Bela's best friends and they didn't trusted her and didn't even asked her the reason once, this was not smooth. 

Writing style- 4/5
Your writing style is good.

Length of chapters- 4/5
Chapters were not very long nor too short. Their length was fine.

Overall impression- 7/15
Overall impression is fine. Initially story was very sad but as it proceed it became fine. They was Mahir supported Bela was so very good. 

Total- 46/75

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Love finds it's way to heart by Pearbhi_lover_priyu

Cover- 3/5
It's a nice collage with pics of behirand premat and the way title is written is also good. It can be more interesting.

Title- 4/5
Title is really good and somewhere sounds good too. It goes with the story plot that Bela's love found it's way to Mahir's heart and same with Premar.

Description/Blurb- 4/5
Description is good and develops interest to know what will happen and how? It is so nice to imagine the story before reading that how things will go with a girl with 5 year mind and a boy who loves someone else and the thing that girl was his obsessive lover before accident.

First impression- 7/10
First expression after reading first few chapters is good. Little Bela's acts were very interesting.

Plot- 8/10
This an amazing story full of twists and turns. Mahir got married to Bela whose mind is of a 5 year old kid and the way she made him fall for her by her acts was really cute.

Grammar- 4/5
Your grammar is good.

Character development- 9/10
Character development was smooth but not that much. They way real face of each character came out was interesting.

Writing style-5/5
Your writing style is really good and you manage to create a great interest by the way you write.

Length of chapters- 5/5
Length of chapters were fine. 

Overall impression- 12/15
It was nice to see a love story between behir between all the conditions they were in. Simultaneously love story of his brother and ex-girlfriend was also good. It would have been really good too see some acts of Bela' s obsessive behaviour for mahir as you have told in the story. End was sad but it's true not each story have happy ending.

I think people should read this story.

Total- 61/75

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Behir short stories- by behirfan123

Cover- 3/5
It is a simple pic of behir. You could have write title of book or could have edited but editing is not required though, behir pic is enough itself.

Title- 4/5
Title is fine and tells what this book contains.

Description/blurb- 2/5
You just told here that you will write short stories. I know each part will have different story but something would have added there.

Length- 7/10
Length of each part was fine according to the story and it was in flow and each story showed everything that was required.

Plot and storyline- 8/10
Plot of each story were interesting and you carried out them well. However in second story,"He betrayed me and he supported me" the concept was little serious but you wrote it very nicely. 

Grammar- 4/5
Your grammar is good. However there are little mistakes somewhere but they can be avoided if you write carefully.

Overall impression- 7/10
Flow of each story was good but there is one thing that in almost each story Bela realised her feelings for Mahir immediately after being betrayed. It was little quick. Overall it was nice.

Total- 35/50

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Behir_shrahir_love_ is the overall highest scorer among all the participants for the story "My Weekend Boyfriend". Congratulations!