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WITHOUT YOU by crush_on_sid

> Cover : 4 by 5.
the cover is good but it can be more better as it's not exactly matching the title 'WITHOUT YOU'. So I suggest you to do some changes.

> Title: 5 by 5
the title WITHOUT YOU suits the story. By reading the title the readers can get a rough sketch on what is the story about.

> Description: 4 by 5.
the description is good but it can be more better if you add any scenes or any dialogues.

> First impression: 9 by 10.
I like the way you started your story with a prologue. But then if u had given more information about the character - ex- their negative and positive side.... The reader will be more exited for reading the further chapters. But then if I'm a reader i would have suggested your story to many of my friends as it's quite interesting. And showing Jezebel and Beula's parents character negative to that extent is not good. Hope for a change in their behaviour towards Jezebel. Coz parents can't be strict to the extent. And if they are that strict then you'd have kept Jezebel a strong grl who can over come her parents's harsh words instead of becoming a weak person. And personally I loved the bond btwn Beu and her lil sister Jez. The way you gave in their bond is jus ❤️❤️.

> Plot: 8 by 10
The plot of the story is nice, but then it's actually lacking at some parts. You'd have shown the daily routine of the sisters a bit less coz I guess the ff is on ParIca/AnuPre so adding more scenes of Jez and Daneil will be more good and it can also increase the readers. It's mostly focusing on Jez and Beu's parents and the lives of their Family only. I guess you need to increase the part of Daniel's parents and also focus on his family too.

> Grammar: 4 by 5
grammar is fine but then some parts have minute grammar mistakes, so please go through those and try not to repeat those small and silly grammatical mistakes again in your upcoming chapters (as your book is an on gng one). And it's not a grammar mistake but yaa please mention the name of the person before the dialogue coz it's confusing to identify the person who's talking (in some parts).

> Character development: 9.5 by 10

** Personal opinion: i usually love it when the characters develop meaningfully.

** As a judge: it's a good job with development of some characters like Jez (from a caged bird living in a very strict environment to a free spirited and bubbly girl) but then I'm a bit confused with their parents character development (from a very very strict, rude and doubting parents to very sweetly behaving parents) please jus clarify this in your incoming chapters.

> Writing style: 5 by 5 I jus loved your style of writing. It's very easy to identify what are dialogues and what is the description, not like some ppl who jus make the dialogues in para and make it a mess.

> Length of chapters:5 by 5
i like the way you justified the length of the chapters with the title. Ex: you have a title THE MOST BEAUTIFUL DAY so you jus described the whole chapter in a very good manner. the narration, the dialogues and the pics suitable for that it jus made very interesting and I completed the whole reading in on sitting 😅. This will also make the story interesting and keep ppl stick to it till they finish the whole reading.

> Overall impression: 12 by 15.
1 marks deducted for grammar. 2 marks for the small mistakes of mentioning the character name, some dialogue and the character development which is a bit confusing. But overall I enjoyed reading and judging your story. But then please clarify who are the main leads of the story, it's confusing.

I first suggest you to go through the mistakes and correct them. And pay attention towards the character naming before the dialogues, coz if u miss that it will be confusing to some ppl to understand who's speaking that particular dialogue.

But overall your story is amazing and I loved reading it 😄.

● Total: 65.5 by 75

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Realizing This Feeling (two shots) by Confused_Soul_Kriya

> Cover: 5/5
the cover is simply very cute and simple. I jus loved the graphics and the fonts you used in it.

> Title: 5/5
The title is very suiting as we can get a rough view on what's gonna happen in the OS.

> Description/Blurb: 5/5
You gave the description pretty well by mentioning all the OS titles. By reading the description we can easily know what all the OS you wrote, unlike some ppl who jus give the title and write 'PEEP IN....'

> Length: 9/10
The OS had everything. It jus surrounded all the aspects a scene contain when it comes to THE REALIZATION. You jus penned it very well, GREAT JOB! But then the length can be increased a bit

> Plot: 10/10
The story line jus went very well. You jus showed how they Realized their feelings and then conveying them to each other and with a HAPPY ENDING. I jus loved that way, (hope we get that to see on screen too 😅).

> Grammar: 4.5/5
Your grammar is absolutely perfect. The way you used the grammar jus helps ppl to clearly understand the dialogues, which is very impressive. But then the half mark was jus coz in grammar ppl atleast half mark without a minute mistake (😅😅).

> Overall impression: 10/10
When it comes to OVERALL IMPRESSION, your work is jus mind blowing. The story line and the scenes from a very hesitating teenagers to a very cute and bold adults you jus wrote them AnuPre very well.

There's nothing to change in your story it's jus perfect ❤️.

●Total: 48.5/50

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PATI, PATNI AUR WOH. By Confused_Soul_Kriya

> Cover: 4.5 /5
the cover looks so amazing and colourful. I jus loved it, but then u can make some changes and make it a bit relevant for the title. But over all your editing skills are jus awesome (teach me if possible 😅😅).

> Title: 5/5
the title PATI, PATNI AUR WOH suits the story line exactly. By reading it we can get a brief idea of the story. Unlike all the other this is a bit different putting the hero and heroine as PATI and WOH and the vamp as PATNI.

> Description: 4.5 /5
the description went well by adding many questions to the mind of the readers. I like it but then adding some scenes can make it more relevant.

> First impression: 9.5/10
the way kept the characters pg with a quote including in it is quite impressive. But then you can increase the lembut of the characters by giving some more info about them. And pitting AnuLika as strangers to that extent is fine but it can be like they both jus talk to each other atleast once a day. But overall I'm very excited to read your story further. Please start it ASAP 😅😍.

> Plot: 9.5/10
the plot of the story is very gud and interesting. But then you can put AnuLika atleast like Hi, Bye friends. Coz they both are living under the same roof ryt, so AnuLika being strangers to that extent is a bit odd. The rest all is jus awesome i loved the story.

>Grammar: 4.5/5
grammar in the story is all good, but small errors like comas and all jus check them out if any and correct them. Rest all is fine.

>Character development: 8/10

**Personal opinion- personally I like the characters and I would love to read if the characters are a bit friendly to each other some times.

**As a judge- I'm giving only 3 because your story is still an on going and the chapters are less which makes a bit difficult to tell about the character development, as there's no major development in the characters yet.

>Writing style- 4 /5
the writing style can be even better. You can use different fonts, like one type of font for dialogues and the other for narration and side headings. It'll make easy for ppl to understand the dialogue and also it makes the story even look good.

>Length of the chapter: 4 /5the length of the chapter is ok. But for some chapters the length can be increased and for decrease according to the length of the scenes and the plot for that particular chapter.

>Over all impression: 14/15
1 mark for grammar overall the story seems quite interesting because of the glimpse you gave at the start. I'm personally waiting egarly waiting for you to re start the story. But the small and minute grammar mistakes and the writing style need to be changed so that the readers can also increase and ppl will be very much interested to read your story.

And finally i love to read the story. Please update it soon 😅.

● Total: 67.5/75

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Collection of AnuPre One Shots. _pratviii_

>Cover: 5/5
The cover is jus perfect with all sorts of possible pics. I loved it, it actually suits.

>Title: 5/5
The titles you gave are suiting. After reading the titles we can get a rough sketch about the one shot you wrote.

>Description: 1 /5
It'll be more relevant if you would have written something about the book, instead of jus leaving it writing JUS PEEP INTO KNOW MORE. Yeah this is not a story but then for the OS BOOKS you can write the titles numbering them like a list.

>Length: 9.5/10
The length of the chapters is lacking at some chapters, they are a bit small. According to the title you gave they can be more better and long too.

>Plot: 10/10
The story line of each and every OS went very well. For each OS the title went very well giving a rough sketch of the story by reading the title. I jus loved the way you wrote the chapters.

>Grammar: 4.5/5
There are some minute grammar mistakes in some chapters, do change them and try to find any other if possible. And rest all is absolutely fine.

>Over all impression: 10/10
When it comes to OVER ALL IMPRESSION all of your OS are jus awesome. I enjoyed thoroughly while reading the OS's. When it comes to the characters you jus wrote AnuPre's characters very well.

And finally i jus wanna tell you that jus go through the chapters and correct the grammar mistakes if any.

●Total: 45/50

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Our definition of Love ishraddha

>Cover: 4 /5
the cover is good but I think it didn't go well with the story line giving a rough idea about the story. Try to change it and make it more beautiful so that ppl can reach your story easily.

>Title: 4 /5
i think as your story is an on going one so till now I didn't find any proper meaning of the title when compared with the story line, but then it'll match to the story line when. It'll proceed further.

>Description: 5/5
the description of the story went very well. You made the blurb very interesting and relevant to audience, so that it can reach to many.

>First impression: 10/10
i found your story very interesting when I read the blurb you gave. It really impressed me. Each and every bond you showed is very well penned down, the bond of three friends, mother and her child and many more. I'm very much interested to read the story further it's jus awesome ❤️.

>Plot: 9.5/10
the plot of the story went very well. But then showing Anurag and Nandini's bond more and reducing Prerna's part is not well. Try to work on it. And rest all is completely and absolutely good.

>Grammar: 4.5/5
the grammar is a bit down at some parts, try to check those mistakes and rectify from the upcoming chapters (as it's a n on gng book).

Not a grammar mistake but try to mention the name of the person before a dialogue so that it'll be easy to understand who is talking to whom.

>Character development: 8/10

** Personal opinion: as a personal opinion i like if the characters develop meaningfully.

** As a judge: as your book is an on gng the character development can't be written that easily, but then till the present chapters the character development can be a bit fast.

>Writing style: 4 /5
your writing style went very well. You wrote the dialogues and normal narration separately unlike others who jus make it a mess writing dialogues and narration together like a para.

>Length of the chapter: 4 /5 the length of the chapters are very well. But if you give the title to the chapters it can be even good.

>Over all impression: 14/15
0.5 for grammar and 0.5 for other small mistakes like mentioning the names before the dialogue coz it can make it easy for others to read it. Rest all is jus awesome. I'm personally very egarly waiting for your next update.

Jus try to change the minute mistakes from the upcoming chapters.

>Total: 67/75

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Confused_Soul_Kriya is the highest overall scorer among all the participants for "Realizing This Feeling"

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