Me: before we get started I just want to give a HUGE thanks for help from a fellow kid Icarus fan @blazewriter enjoy!----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

~3rd person~

Kari raced around sky world like a kid in a new candy store. She looked and ran and gazed and rushed and… stopped? She looked at the world from the edge of sky world. It was amazing! The view was like no other view in the world. She took a step forward then another, next thing she knew she was so close to the edge that one false move could be her last. She heard yelping and some shouting. This made her jolt thus sending her flying over the edge. She screamed.

“KARI!!!” a voice called as she plummeted down towards the earth she was once gazing upon only moments ago 

Me: ok first of all. I’M SORRY FOR THE LONG WAIT AND THE CLIFFY! And I’m sorry it's so short!

Kari: a little help here!!

Me: yeah yeah in a moment... Any ways. I’ll do my best! Bye bye

Kari: OH COME ON!!!