Guyzz i really don't know whether you all are liking the story or not but What should i assume.....

I know i have been expecting little more cause i have recently started writing these story but readers the views on story are 1.86k and the views on individual chapters are also above 100+ then votes barely 10 ....

Its really disappointing guyzz...... there are no doubt regular readers and thanks to all of them.... for voting and commenting regularly.....but silent readers you all also please atleast if you don't comment you can vote....

please if you all could do only this much thing.... and sorry if anyone felt i am being rude... but its not soo i was just sharing what i felt.. please don't feel bad my intension was not soo..... hope you all will understand....

And these one's a long update for my loyal readers....

Thank you soo much guyzz for always voting and commenting... thank you soo very much....

These chapter is dedicated to all my loyal readers....

Have funn guyzzz...

Enjoy the update...

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After the party got over....

Everyone left for their respective homes while cabir and navya sneaked out....

But along with them our other couples also shared some lovey dovey moments and then slept hugging the sleep wrapped in the blanket of their partner's dreams...

All dozed of to sleep ready to welcome another day of their life.... previous days of their life have been too hectic... some of them were good..... some gave them the worst reality check .... some people were having the fights..... but what actually mattered was that at the end of the day they were all together inseparable and their of each other.....

But some clauses were still unsolved that who was the one who is keeping an eye on manan.... is he/she good or bad does they want to harm manan or just for some other reason... truth was behold...

(Yr sab humare manan ke piche he kyu pade rehte hai...😣😢😢)

It was a new morning and our manik baba was the first one to wake up.....

(Hope you all remember manik's room in case you don't its there in chapter - 13)

Manik woke up with a content smile and the first thought which came in his mind was regarding nandini....

Yes it was regarding nandini in previous days he released one thing that nandini foresure holded some special place in his life cause he never opened up infront of anyone rather than his sharon, fab 5 or be it his parents..... infact manik told everyone and pleaded them not to tell anyone that he is adopted son he himself made his identify that was his band the life for him which was fab 5 .... he gained enough of recognization through this band and then when it came to handling business too he started from the lowest post of being amd employee and then through his hard work he gained promotion and reached to the height where he is now of being and world wide famous celebrity lead singer of the most happening band and topmost business tycoon at such a remarkable age....

After getting the best singer and best band award it was that poeple came to know that he was the son of Vansh malhotra the business tycoon...

Manik POV..

Nandini you surely are too special for me i don't know what happened to me i never open up to anyone regardless if its the one whom i am close... but you i just met you few days ago... i don't know what have you done to me nandu... one thing is foresure i will never let you go away from me because you are my shining star nandu.. yes only mine...
(Ohhh mr. Possessive malhotra )

End of POV..

Manik was engrossed in his thoughts when a boy of around 17 came and shouted loudly in his ear

Booooooo

Manik got hell scared and started running as he was deeply thinking over nandini...

Manik: aahh ahhh kon hai.. pelase mujhe bacho...

The boy started laughing loud holding his stomach and rolling on the floor....

Manik: kon hai...

Manik turned around and saw who it was only to get happy...

Manik: ahh rohan you.... tu kabi bhi normal loko jese entry nai de sakta na kyu.....

Saying these he wend hugged rohan both of them hugged each other tightly...

Yes that boy was non other than our very own rohan malhotra.... younger brother of mukti malhotra and cousin of sharon and manik... son of sweta and ram...

To say manik sharon and mukti rohan were cousins but the bomd they shared was of real siblings.. just like swayam nandini and dolly...

Rohan: aur nai toh kya... wase bhai kon thi woh jiske thoughts me ypu were drowned....

Rohan spoke emphasing on the word 'thi'

Manik: tu.. tu... kya bol raha hai mene aasa kuch nai soch raha tha...
Rohan: acha asa kya...

Manik: tu bata tune itna zor se kyu chillaya me behra ho jata to...

Abd their started their tom and jerry fight.....

Manik was running behind rohan the went downstairs still chasing each other everyone present down were just watching the brother's duo running behind each other...

Sweta: are there se tum doni ko lag jaye gi...

Ram: kya sweta bache thodi na hai... bohot din bad mile hai abhi tho agge ase aur nazare aane wale hai soo chill...

Sharon: haa indona ka ab toh roz ka ho ga yeah jagad na and all that.....

Nyonika: manik chod de na mere bache ko....

Manik: wah mom woh bacha aur me kya...

Vansh: arre woh baacha and tu bada baacha... aaje mere pass...

Manik ran to his dad and back hugged him ...

Vansh: mera beta nyonika tum na mere bete ke sath partiality mat kiya karo...

Rohan: kya bade papa ap humesha bhai ke side lete ho...

Vansh: arre tu bhi aaja mere bache...

And the trio shared a hug....

They all were talking and laughing and then mukti came down half sleepy but after sewing rohan she shouted...

Mukti: rohannnn...

And ran towards him...

Rohan: mukti...

Saying these both hugged each other and mukti hut him on his head lightly...

Rohan:kya yr mukti aate hi marna suru mujhe...

Mukti: tu mere favorite chocolate laya ke nai...

Rohan: ha baba laya na...

They all then settled on the dining table to have their breakfast....

They all had their breafast askimg rohan about the trip amd did he enjoyed or not .... and rohan answering them patiently and also sharing his side of things....

Rohan: mom after breakfast i am going to meet motu....

Sweta: okay beta and yes take chocolates for her and dare you harasse her i will dig your grave right now...

(Reader sweta amd ram knows who is motu .... but others were still confused.... )

Ram: and tune mere beti ko pershan kiya na toh ypu better watch it Mr. Rohan Malhotra....

Rohan: yes mr.dad woh beti aur me kya..... .

(Dining table where everyone was sitting in malhotra mansion)

And before any one could speak anything there came a loud sound from a girl everyone was sittung on the dining table and turned to see whose's there..

Girl: ronooooo.......

And she ran towards him... same was the case with rohan..

Rohan: motuuuu. .... .

Both ran and firstly hified and then shaked there hands and then hugged each other tightly....

As she was hugging rohan no one was able to see her face...

Sharon being confused asked...

Sharon: yeah kya tha chachi....

Mukti: ha mom kuch weird style se nai mile yeah dono...

Sweta: yeah kuch nai bohot weird yeah dono aase he milte hai humesha.....

Sweta: ohh i see...

Vansh, ram, sweta and nyonika were quite because they knew who motu is....

Rohan: motu tu moti ho gai hai...

Girl : tu bhi lamba ho gaya hai chotu....

Rohan: don't call me chotu i am not chotu.. .

Girl: awww sach me..... chotu...

Rohan: tu manse se rahe... anyways come i will introduce you to my sibling.... .

(Poor rohan little did he knew they already knew each other its just sharon,mukti and manik were not aware dolly knew it from the very beginning...😂😂)

Yes the girk was non other than dolly.... aka guddu aka motu also now... (gawwd she has soo many names just like me... 😂😉😉)..

Rohan: so everyone this is motu my best friend cum sister cum soulie ..

Everyone except nyosh(nyonika + vansh) ramta (ram + sweta) ... shouted together: guddu....

Dolly just shrugged her shoulders and said: yes me....with a grin...

Manik: foresure the world is small...
Except rohan sharon manik and mukti... everyone laughed as they knew it that motu is guddu only...

Rohan: one second you all already know her...

Manik: yes buddhu she is swayam's sister....

Rohan: you mean jiju's sister....

Mukti: yeah... and my dear guddu what a pleasent suprise....

Rohan was luttle shocked as he knew how mukti was she didn't mingled too much with everyone but here toh scene hi ulta ho gaya. 😂😂😂

Manik: good morning guddu...

Dolly: good morning arav bhaiyu...

Again a shock to rohan... he was standing there total clueless....

Meanwhile dolly went and met everyone with a warm hug and wished everyone good morning...

Nyonika: beta you had your breakfast....

Dolly: yes aunty woh mom ne forcefully kilaya medicines lene the toh....

Sweta: aacha hi kiya leena ne..... warna tu toh apna dhyaan rakh ne se rahi....

Rohan keeping his other doubts aside for now knew what medicines they are talking about and spoke angrily...

Rohan: MISS DOLLY MURTHY DON'T TELL ME YOU HAD SPICY FOOD AGAIN AND GOT ATTACK....

Dolly not knowing what to speak just looked down amd spoke...

Dolly: woh na bhulse ho gaya rono... chod na lets have some fun we all will have some outing today whatsay...

Rohan: don't change the topic motu... tell me right now.. and what do you mean bhulse.... huh that's soo careless of you.....

Dolly: aare rono woh sab sathe me the toh i totally forgot and now i am taking my medicines na time to time yr itna hyper kyu ho raha hai sorry na....

Rohan: i am not at all convinced...

While the possessive and caring brother woke in rohan everyone was little shocked as they never saw rohan behaving soo...

Sharon spoke to handle the matter as she knew that dolly is fine now..

Sharon: rohan hum sab the uske sathe hospital me she is quite fine now and she is not at all being careless now and following her diet also...

Rohan still not convinced... manik saw this and he also spoke....

Manik: ha yr rohan me bhi that and doctor also said everything is quite well soo chill...

Rohan just hmmed...

Dolly: sorry na yr.... i will tale medicines on time and i am fine stop behaving like that rono...

Rohan: okay but me khud leena aunty see puchunga and then i will be convinced...

Dolly: agreed tu fresh hoja fir if you are free lets go to mom...

Rohan: okay that's sorted now will you tell me how manik and mukti di are soo comfortable with her....

Vansh: bacho tum log baat karo mujhe kam he me chala office and ram tu aa rah hai kuch points discuss kar lete hai...

Ram: ha bhai i am coming...

Vansh: okay then bye everyone take care and see you all...

Ram: bye all...

Both left to office...

Nyonika: me bhi ja rahi hu NGO... sweta you are coming beta...

Sweta: ha bhabhi me bhi ai rahi.hu ab muche workshop pe drop kar dena please...

Nyonika:okay...

They bid bye and left now it was only bacha gang present there...

Rohan: so tell me yr...

Everyone told him about what happened due to which they all were soo close and shared a great sister brother bomd with each other... they told everything from right party suprise to knowing their secretes abd nick names... the fish pond game and question... amd everything else.... ..

Rohan was now laughing out loud. ..

Manik: kya hua...

Rohan: bhai you all are gone... she is a great prankster... and you what she and cabir bhai together means we calling for makimg our fun on our own... ..

Manik: yeah bach ke rehna pade ga.. ise duo se..

Mukti: rohan tu bhi kuch kam nahi hai okay...

Rohan: yeah but iske jitna toh nai... .😂😂

Dolly: be careful mister rohan you are next on my list..

Now rohan stopped laughing as he knew dolly is really a big prankster.

Manik was now laughing...

Manik: ab bol kya hua ha... bol na...

Sharon got a call so she left from the table to attend call while mukti had not changed from her night auit so she went to freshen up..

Manik: okay ypu guyzz talk i will freshen up amd come...

Dolly: okay bhai...

Rohan: yep bhai...

Saying this manik went... it was now rohan amd dolly talking....

Dolly: arre me toh bhuli hi gai...

She said taking out a box from her side bag...

Dolly: yeah le tere liye..

Rohan taking the box: what's that motu.

Dolly: kudh kolke dekh le... ..

Roha opened the box and and it co sisted of a black watch of rohan's favourite brand...

Rohan said thank ypu taking her into a side hug....

Dolly: anytime goochu...

Rohan: par tujhe kese pata... mujhe yeah wali cahiye thi..

Dolly: tune hi bataya that jab hum baat kar rahe the you idiot kuch yaad hu nahi rehta tujhe...

Rohan: behna tu hai na... fir kyu tension lena...

He said rhyming his words... ...

Dolly replied back in same tone...

Dolly: thai bohot bakwas asa he mere kehna... laga mujhe bohot vahiyad bhaiya...

Rohan: huhh real artist ki toh kadar hi nai...

Dolly laughed like manic and said: real artist and you... goshh i am probably gonna die put of hearing this stupid rhymes of your's... please kud apni tarif ka pool bana band karna na bhaiya.... .

She again said mimicking his tone...
Rohan: has le beta aaj tera din hai mera bhi din aaye ga... .

Dolly: thek hai bhai shree.. .

Rohan: shree what....

Dolly was laughing like manic...

They continued their silly talks and billy jokes...

(Ohhhh not only rohan's but my rhyming is also "vaihiyad"😂😂)

By the time manik,sharon and mukti came down all dolled up....

Rohan: ap lok yea betho me 5 min me aaya fresh hokay...

Everyone nodded and rohan came after sometime all set to go out..

Dolly: woh... you all are looking too good....aaj hotness level is too high....

Sharon: aww guddu you are also lookin too cute...

Manik: yep sharon is correct...

Dolly: thank you...

(Dolly's outfit)

(Sharon's outfit)

(Mukti's outfit)

(Manik's outfit)

(Rohan's outfit)

Manik: so age kya plaan hai....

Mukti: yr guyzzz hume wese bhi manali jana hai so lets go shopping...

Manik, rohan, dolly shouted noooo together ...

Rohan: no shopping vopping yr please and wase what manali... and who is going...

Manik: yeah rohan who recent dino me itna sab ho gaya so we all had planned a trip to manali to take a break from all thi chaos so will you join in rohan....

Rohan: arre ofcourse manik bhai i am inn....

Sharon: okay so konse mall jana hai.....

Mukti and dolly together: infinity mall...

Rohan: mujhe pata hai iis motu ko waha kyu jana hai.... waha uske favourite icecream milte hai iss liye...

Dolly flashed her 32 teeths. ...

Everyone chuckled....

Dolly: amm di i guess swayam bhai yeahi aa rahe honge....

Scene Malhotra Industries..

Swayam entered malhotra industries and went to receptionist..
Receptionist: yes sir how may i help you....

Swayam: can i please get to meet Mr. Vansh Murthy...

Receptionist: just a minute please wait sir i will ask him and let you know...

Swayam: yeah cool...

Receptionist called vansh

Vansh: yes stella..

Receptionist: sir Mr. Swayam Murthy is here he wants to meet you shall i send him... or shall i tell to come afterwards...

Vansh: ayy no stella don't make him wait at all send him right now....

Receptionist: okay sir...

She ends the call and tells swayam that he can meet vansh and shows him the to vansh's cabin...

Receptionist: here sir... you may proceed...

Swayam: thank you...

Swayam knocked amd vansh spoke come in...

Swayam: good morning da... un.. uncle...

Vansh: good morning beta...par jab mene tume beta ka darja diya toh you also don't disappoint me okay you will call me dad...

Swayam smiled and said:okay dad...
Vansh: ha beta bato tum kuch kam tha...

Swayam: ha actually dad hum sab ek trip plan kar rahe to manali recent days me already itna stress tha upar se guddu ki health so hum ne socha ke hum sab kahe gum ke aate hai...

Vansh: idea aacha hai beta...

Swayam: so dad mene papa (Krishna Murthy) se puch liya and une bata diya hai me apse puch ne aaya tha ke .. ke.. me.. mein sharon ko lejau apne sathe... i mean if apko koi aitraaz na ho toh...

Vansh got up seeing this swayam also got up and vansh came towards swayam and hugged him...

Swayam at first didn't understand but then he also hugged him...

Vansh broke the hug and spoke...

Vansh: swayam you know jab sharon ne mujhe bataya i knew you are a great entrepreneur but to be honest i had least idea about moral values mujhe pata tha ke tum krishna ke bete ho but atill beti ka baap hu tension toh hoga hi na...

Swayam: yes dad i can understand...

Vansh: but aaj when you asled me about taking her with you the way you thought the needful to ask me... trust me.beta i am totally sorted now that my daughter has chosen perfect life partner for her who not only respects her but her family also i am proud of you my son...

Swayam: thank you dad... soo me sharon ko leja....

Vansh: aarre ha bhai hone wali biwi hai shok se lejaoo.. mujhs koi aitraaz nai hai amd i trust y poo u both....

Swayam: thanks dad... tob fir thik hai me chalta hu mujhe baki kam bhi wrap up karna hai..

Vansh: okay beta take care have fun...

Swayam hugged vansh, bid bye to him and left.....

Scene Malhotra Mansion

Swayam entered malhotra mansion only to get suprised seeing dolly present their....

Swayam: hyy guyzz...

(Swayam's outfit)

Everyone: hello...

Rohan: hyyy jigzz... he said greeting swayam...

Swayam: kya yr rono tu bhi swayam ya bhai is better no jigzz vigzz yr....

Manik: you know each other....

Swayam: aare dolly ka possessive brother ho aur mujhe na pata ho aasa kaise ho sakta hai....

Rohan: congrates bhai...

Swayam: thanks bro... guddu what are you doing here...

Dolly: bhai rono aaj he aaya hai soo use milne aai thi....

Swayam: ohh okay...

Dolly: wase bhai ap kyu aaye ho...

Rohan: kya motu sinple sharon se milne....

Everyone laughed whike dolly got annpyed and started hitting him and chasing him....

Rohan:kya hai mar kyu rahi hai...

Dolly: you idiot i was going to tease both of them and tune sara maza bigad diya.... you pagal mard..... .

Everyone again laughed hearing these.....

Swayam: soo any plans for today....

Sharon: yep going to mall for shopping... we were just about to call everyone till then you came....

Swayam: ohhkk.. so lets do one thing lets make a watsapp group and we can send message there...

Manik: yep nice idea....

Swayam made a watsapp group and added everyone.... means cavya,dhrulya,manan,swaron,dolly,rohan,mukbhi....

Swayam message:
Hyyy guyzz good morning... if everyone's free soo lets hit the mall to shop for manali trip.....

He instantly got message's reply from alll....

Cabir: kya bro shopping ka plan banaya... anyways i am in...we will have boys funnn 😉

Navya: aacha kiya swayam jo tum ne plan banaya and cabir you will help me in shopping...

Dhruv: phass gaya cabir baba.... I am in...

Alya: dhruv you too will help me .. awesome plan swayam i am in..

Mukti: done...

Sharon: yes i am in...

Rohan: i am coming...

Abhimanyu: i am too coming... rohan tu kab aaya bro... wase how's you....

Nandini: yeah i am also coming guyzz par bhai konsa mall jana hai...

Dolly: infinty mall di....

Nandini: okay i will be there kitne baje chalna hai.

(Manik who till now was only reading the messages pooped in...)

Manik: nandu tum 10 baje ready rehna i will pick you up....

(Swayam only to tease them)

Swayam: mujhe bhi pick karle ga manik please....

Manik being helpless replied: okay....

And everyone present there in the hall of malhotra mansion laughed their hearts out..

Today was surely going to be a tough day for manik because... manik baba nandu se dur reh nai sakenge aur yeah sab une tease karne se khud ko rok nai sakenge.. good day manik baba... 😉😂😂

Cabir: guddu you're here...

Dolly: yep bhai i am here only bas ek apko he meri yaad aai baki sare toh aavie he.... 😭😭

Sharon: nautanki dono....

Swayam: soo guyzz we all will meet at infinity sharp at 10 please don't be late....

Everyone agreed and left for getting ready....

They all left for mall as it was already 9:30.....

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Hope you all liked this update....

I know there were no manan scenes but next update would be awesome...

Because sab ja rahe ha shopping and planning for trip soo it will be awesome fun..

Hope would entertain you guyzz more... any suggestions regarding stories are welcomed and if someone didn't liked any part or plot they are also welcomed you can comment or pm me....

Will try to give next update soon..

Till then take care....

Have funn

Enjoy.....☺😊

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- thank you

- Div.